What's Wrong with the Printer Drawing Talismans? I Still Have Three Thousand Spiritual Roots.

It's very well written, but I felt very angry when I heard it and couldn't let it go. I felt very uncomfortable. Do you know? That feeling of being very angry, having trouble breathing, and feeling dizzy😭

I like it, come on, author! ... How should I put it, there is a bit of human-machine feeling in the first ten pictures, but the interesting point comes later. It is the Master. Can I call him Fried Rice Brother?

The setting is quite novel and the characters have their own characteristics. But… ① The plot develops too fast, or there is too much content crammed into one chapter, and the description of the psychological demeanor of each character is not specific enough, causing readers to start to feel "refreshed" before their emotions are fully brewed. This should be the reason why most readers feel "suffocated". ② Not very good at setting up doubts. The article seems to be about looking at mountains and not finding peace. When introducing a person's life experience, don't introduce it directly with personal voice or narration, but unfold it step by step from the perspective of the protagonist, and finally give readers a sense of sudden enlightenment (equivalent to hanging a carrot in front of the donkey)😜. If you explain everything, it will only allow readers to browse from a third-party perspective, and they will not be able to be immersed in it. ③The plot is not very reasonable, and the world is not clear-cut between good and evil. It is better not to clarify all positions at the beginning. If you want to write about evil people, you must write about what is wrong with them, or think about it in another person's shoes. If I were this person, what would I do for this goal? Everyone cannot harm the heroine just because they dislike her, but because the heroine's behavior violates their so-called interests, and good people do the opposite; and although this is a cool article, the opportunity for the heroine comes too easily, which is not that exciting. ④ There are too many dialogues. As an online novel, the dialogues should be as concise as possible, so that people can understand the characters' thoughts at a glance, instead of letting people look for the key points for a long time. Many things do not have to be said with words. Actions and expressions are often more contagious. This is my first time writing a book review, so please forgive me if I offend. You still have a lot of potential, and you will definitely become an ace writer making money every day in the future, come on!

In fact, it feels pretty good, it's kind of half-fun in the early stages, but it's still a little bit frustrating in the middle, but overall it seems okay.

I don't understand why the rating is so low. Although the ending felt a bit sudden, it's still very interesting. I originally watched this novel through watching videos. I read it with the mentality of giving it a try. After reading it for so long, I think the author's writing is really good and I enjoyed reading it.

I came across the novel on Twitter and then came in and read this one. It was really good. But the progress was a bit fast at the end, and I felt a little lost. I didn't enjoy reading it. Wow, oh, oh, oh, many details have a group-like feel. It's very nice.

Good,

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It's so good, but it's too short and not finished yet.

It's very interesting, but there are some unreasonable things in it. I gave you four stars to give you a thumbs up. I hope you continue to move forward. Awesome

He's a bit super male, that one seems to be called L Jiao or something.

Very beautiful but I don't know what to say

Five-star praise, the story structure is quite compact, not procrastinating, and there are no messy emotional lines. I will keep following it for more updates.

It's so pretty, I'm so slapped in the face

Very pretty, very good

The subject matter is novel and very interesting [laughing]

So beautiful! Ah! Ah! Ah!

Looks good, I recommend everyone to watch it

Super pretty 😘 Super pretty 😘 Super pretty 😘 😍😍😍

It was pretty good, but the ending was a bit too hasty.

It's a very interesting setting. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing. It's very nice.

Super pretty, super cool. ! I'll read a few hundred more chapters and write the rest of the comments

Good looking highly recommended

Ingenious idea, I am always satisfied

It's really very good-looking and a great read.

Feifei is very beautiful [smile]

Very good, I like it very much

It looks good, I love watching it, I really like watching it

Good looking. Love to see more.

Very, very beautiful.