Redeeming the Antisocial Little One

It's good, but sometimes I have to talk about a thing in two times. I give a general outline first, and then expand on it in the next chapter, which affects the perception. It would be better if I could change it [Sentiment]

The subject matter is novel and not a traditional rebirth novel. However, the system failure is still real, but for the protagonist, it is even more powerful, speeding up the pace of the entire story. Lin Xiuyuan's two-life feelings for Shen Yanqi (real and conscious) are very touching. Shen Yanqi was also moved by Lin Xiuyuan's heavy love. After all, in this world, it is difficult to find someone who loves you with all his strength and gives everything for you. How should I put it? The author's description of the Ouroboros and the police cannot be viewed entirely logically, but the overall shortcomings are not concealed. As for the ending, it was hinted at in a previous chapter, but it's still a bit regretful.

I read it in one go, and I feel that the plot is quite smooth, and the criminal investigation is well written. It feels a little bit more enjoyable. Let's not talk about the connection problem of the plot. It is considered a good book on Tomato. It is worth reading, and the viewing experience is also very good. The emotion is a little bit warm, but it is still very interesting.

It is very well written. The suspenseful and terrifying atmosphere of the investigation is written out, giving people an immersive feeling. It allows oneself to be involved with the protagonist and experience it together. The excitement, responsibility and fear of being a child and discovering a shocking case are the contrast between the evil of human nature and the warmth of the main emotional line when the truth is discovered step by step. Come on, keep updating.

It's very interesting. If you like orthopedics and have some conspiracy theories, you can give it a look. I feel like there's a twist at the end, because I couldn't guess it in person. If you're interested, you can read it all. I only reviewed it after reading it for the second time.

I stayed up late to finish it and I really think it looks great. At first I thought it was a "real" rebirth, but it turned out not to be, it was a redemption. In the middle of the movie, I realized that the protagonists were going too smoothly. The more I watched the back, I realized that it was a virtual rebirth. It was due to Lin Xiuyuan's sincere love to restore his loved ones. It was also Shen Yanqi's love, sincerity, and kindness that held up an umbrella for him.

The author's writing is so good and so beautiful. I think this book will definitely be popular in the future. If I leave a mark now, I can guarantee that the score will be more than 9 points in the future. In fact, the redemption attack written by the author is particularly good. Redemption is not about turning a person into a weapon that is loyal to himself, but it makes him become a real person. The author wrote this sentence really well! 😢

It's okay. The subject matter is quite good and very attractive. However, there are some inconsistencies and conflicts in some places. It's a bit confusing. I hope the author can work hard✊

It's good to read. I like to read this kind of redemption story. The author also has good control over the details, the writing style is also very good, and the character's personality is well grasped. It's a good book worth reading. The plot of the story is well designed, not without thought and design, but the timeline is too messy. At first, it was said that the protagonist is seven years old, and later it is said that he is in elementary school. It turns out that he went to junior high school within two months, and became the second grade of junior high school a month later. If it was a grade skipping, why didn't you tell it, and judging from the description, there are people of the same age around. They can't all skip a grade. According to the investigation According to the timeline of Ouroboros, only a few months have passed, probably from June to November. Half a year has not arrived. As a result, the protagonist has experienced elementary school, graduation from elementary school, the beginning of junior high school, and then to the second grade of junior high school. There were several exams in between. This timeline is as messy as Conan. I hope the author can explain the timeline problem, otherwise it will be too dramatic. PS: I saw the latest update. The author clearly wrote that it was indeed 6 years ago, but it feels like only a few months have passed. The timeline is not very clear. I hope you can pay attention to it in the future. PS again: I feel like the author is getting better and better, and the recent chapters are getting better and better, keep up the good work

How can I put it, the content written by the author is very exciting, the writing style is also good, the plot is ups and downs, and the ending of the virtual world is not as exciting as the previous one. And I have some opinions about the finale. In fact, I don't like this ending very much, because I think this ending is not very he (but reasonable). Lin Xiuyuan and Brother Qi in the real world have already stood It is impossible for the independent sides to be together. From a moral perspective, they are on the same side in the virtual world. It is reasonable for the two of them to fight hand in hand. What I don't like a little is that the author keeps Xiu Yuan alive in both worlds, while Brother Ding is only one. Being with one of them is a kind of be for the other's ending, ugh! You can't have your cake and eat it too. But the author's imagination is really big. The content is engaging. It is worth recommending everyone to watch [snickering] [smirking] 😘 😘 😘