Once a Magical Girl, Now I Just Want to Be a Salted Fish

Putting aside the unclear question at the beginning, overall I feel this is the rating. I will only talk about the plot below. Let's talk about the advantages first. It has its own unique style, relaxed and enjoyable, and some of the narration descriptions can make people smile; it is logically self-consistent, except where the plot requires it, and there are no logical confusions (I can't feel it anyway); the plot is smooth in transition, the character descriptions are quite satisfactory, there are no major problems, and there are appropriate explanations at the appropriate places. Then there are the shortcomings. The supplementary settings are too straightforward and are directly introduced by the narration, without a real sense; the description is not detailed enough (but it can also be seen that the writing style is gradually improving); the transition of scenes needs to be strengthened; there will be some unnecessary (the author forgot) explanations. In fact, not many people will pay attention to this thing if you don't mention it; I hope to take care of embarrassing cancer patients. Finally, because there are no major mistakes and the look and feel is relatively good, I gave this 4*. As for the protagonist and the relationship, I leave it to the readers to experience it (if you have different opinions, you are welcome to discuss and exchange them, but don't be too aggressive)

It's quite average, and the speed is too fast. I feel that the life of the book may not be long, but as a novice author, it is already very good to be able to write so well.

To be honest, it's rare to see good-looking books of this type. The author's writing is indeed very good, but it takes a while to read. After finishing it, it becomes good again. I have read it three times [laugh][laugh][laugh]

This book is very beautiful, the author's writing style is also very good, and the author's update speed is also very fast. The storyline and character setting of the article are also very consistent. I hope the author can continue to keep it up.

I feel like the author is very capable

Hey hey hey hey hey

It looks great, good luck to the author! [Adoration][Blowing kiss]

Very good, awesome

All in all very nice looking.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

He is not good at words, but he insisted on 5 words, so he added a few more words, but in general the two words "good-looking"

It's quite satisfactory, and the writing is still very good. They are just the old teammates in the introduction. They feel a little transparent and have too few scenes.

Just like this.

Beautiful, so beautiful

It's so embarrassing, so embarrassing. My spiritual food can be saved.

Super beautiful, very beautiful Very nice 666

Okay, the rhythm doesn't push the tower

The entire article is written in white, with too little description.

Newcomers can understand some shortcomings and look forward to your growth.