Zenless Zone Zero, Chapter Seven: Where Am I?

A very good new book. The initial descendant is no longer the big truck of the past, but has changed its form. The basic story of Assassin Wu Liuqi started from the country of Stan to prepare for the time travel. Then I feel very fresh. The team leader is also okay. I hope the author will work hard this time👍👍👍👍👍

It's very interesting. That's it for now. I'm used to keeping books. This is undoubtedly a fanfic with a relatively new subject matter and huge potential. The premise is that the author can really write well. I don't often write reviews and give ratings, and this book struck me as worthy of a book review. The following is addressed to the author. The author's general plot seems reasonable to me, but the author's explanation of rationality is lacking, so some people may find it confusing or incomprehensible. That is to say, the author cannot find or cannot find reasons to explain the motives of the characters' actions. This flaw is too obvious, and there will be big problems if the writing level is not improved in the future. At present, it seems uncertain whether there will be a heroine or not. It is recommended that the author make plans in advance to facilitate the outline arrangement. He doesn't care about the importance of his ink, and likes to depict details on meaningless plots, such as fight scenes. The emotional value that fighting scenes bring to people is essentially fun, but the author often describes it very slowly, and it is very uncomfortable to pile it up in a long paragraph. The word count is high but the amount of information is not high. The fighting scenes only need to add some animation key frames and transition frames. It is not necessary to write everything in such detail. The long description should not exceed 5 paragraphs, and the paragraph description should not exceed 2 paragraphs, and the paragraph description should be more and the long description should be less. About 6-4 or 7-3 is suitable. It is even comfortable to use this arrangement for daily descriptions. This kind of progress that is logically biased towards daily life seems to me to be a bit fast. It is very easy to be without Kavin for a long time if it is so fast. Make sure that 3-4 chapters fully describe daily life. It is more appropriate to have no more than 3 connected daily events followed by a main line with a larger number of chapters. The daily writing is not atmospheric enough, that is, the description of the environment and the description of the characters are insufficient. The result is a constipation state in which the emotional value is insufficient and the characterization is insufficient. This has a great impact on the image of the characters when writing about major events later, and the emotions are not enough. If the fan fiction is not purely entertaining, then the proportion of characterization should be very large, because most of the people are looking at the character's personality, especially the original characters should be focused on. If you feel that this aspect is unnecessary when reading a fan, I suggest you don't read the fan. The author of this book probably suffers from the common problem of most authors nowadays, which is to reverse the primary and secondary relationship between characters and plot. He mainly focuses on rushing the progress of the plot rather than letting the plot serve the characters. Then the author is given some reference opinions, but there is no need to pay special attention to them. It is a good thing to adopt them appropriately, but if you pay too much attention to them, you will be timid and end up writing nothing. The author must at least have an outline. When writing a fanfic, it is best to analyze and think more about the character's personality traits and inner core. The author must truly know what kind of person he/she is. It would be helpful to watch some videos of fangirls making achievements or psychological analysis in this area. A truly good book is inseparable from conflicts and choices. Fundamentally, this book cannot be too peaceful. It means that if the sword is necessary, it will be done. If the ending is he, it will be over. It will not look good if it is written as a bland he. The above are all opinions and references provided to the author. They are not necessary, but I hope they will not be ignored. @ A root of a tree

Except for a bit of a drag at the beginning, the rest of the writing is excellent! The portrayal of Chen Yuqiao and Qi's transformation are particularly good, and the development of the plot is also very smooth, making it very comfortable for a reader like me who has not studied Juju Zero! Also, "The Xuanwu Kingdom is the ancient world, and the Stur Kingdom is the future" is too vivid!

Even if you have never played or read 567, you can still seamlessly connect with this book. If you are a fan with no threshold, it will be five stars. (One interesting point is that the author put the characters from the two works together to create a CP. Just read it if you can accept it. The writing is quite interesting)

Good-looking, the adventure of a shadow assassin and a scientist from the country of St. In another world! It's so uncomfortable. I really like the character Chen Yuqiao, but now he's in jail.

I like 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍, what I want to see is this effect of time travel 🥰 👍 ❤️

Yes, the plot design is reasonable, overall relaxing, and a bit fun

Gentlemen, please show mercy. The single arrow means unrequited love. After going through a lot, Ling finally admitted this feeling; but even after going through a lot, Qi only regarded her as a very, very important friend. He is an assassin who has killed countless people. He needs to carry the past, go on, and do justice in order to gain a breath. He would have friends, but in the end he would still be alone; he knew that he could not act like a normal person and pretend that nothing had happened, and because of this, he knew that he was not destined to become an ordinary person. Lacking common sense, he doesn't quite understand what the special relationship between a man and a woman is. Maybe he can keep the photo between the two of them for a long time, and occasionally take a look at it. But for him, there are more important things waiting for him to do, @everyonekanguan

@ A root of a tree In the fanfic you wrote in the lower part, I have a suggestion here. Shadow Assassin, Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba, is mainly for accumulating and practicing. Because I searched this, and there is no good one, at least 8,0 points.

It would be nice if the heroine is a single heroine, Xing Jianya. Later, the identity of the protagonist's cave robber was discovered, and Yaya also fell in love with the protagonist. Yaya's father disagreed and wanted to imprison Yaya. The male protagonist came to the rescue. I will take her away today. Let's see who dares to stop me [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]