National Survival with Two Male Protagonists
Please, there are too few dual-male protagonists in the National Survival Track. I can't find this type of one. Please, don't push it. Last time I asked you to recommend a romantic city one.
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Well, because it is a rare survival story with two male protagonists, I still read it. I am very happy that an author writes about this subject. However, I sincerely give some advice to the author. The expression of the text is a bit messy. There are some inexplicable pronouns and clever tricks. In many cases, readers cannot react when they first see it. There are also some strange expressions of actions, and some small actions are described in too detail, which looks very tiring. However, I feel that the growth line written by the author is still good, and I support it with five stars.
Looks good, really looks good. There are many emotional scenes between the protagonists, very sweet🥰🥰🥰🥰
Mark it, the story is okay, but too short!