Dragon Clan: Time Travel Begins by Entering Black Swan Port

The self-setting of the protagonist in the early stage is a bit strange, but it is invincible later on. After watching "Black Swan Port", I can continue to watch it and it is fun all the way. But so far, I only have kisses and hugs, but there is no more exciting program.

Uh, you must update, Vadasi, anything is fine I must write about the Dragon Clan for the rest of my life.

The whole book is very good. The world view is also well organized. The stories that happen in the book are also interlocking. It can be regarded as a high-quality dragon fanfic, but it needs to continue to work hard. I found a problem when reading the book, that is, the author's age when writing is not right. I really don't know it myself. At the beginning of the book, the protagonist and several others As for the age of the characters, I feel that Su Enxi and Chen Motong are too young. Needless to say, Xiami, it doesn't matter how old they are. But I personally feel that in the world view of the Dragon Clan, Chen Motong, Su Enxi and Ling are all about the same age, with the oldest being Ling. Chen Motong and Su Enxi are about the same age. I still hope the author can describe it more. When I read the book, I always feel that the protagonist takes three years to start every moment. The author still needs to work hard. Do you still need to score points?

Is the author a female author? The overall logic is okay, there are fewer fighting scenes, more emotional scenes, and many female protagonists, but the pace is too fast. It's already good to write a book for the first time

Yes, it can be considered a first-class one among Dragon Clan fans. I hope there will be more plots about Renata, Xiami, and Eri in the future.

The writing is very good, it would be even better if it could be updated [please provide updates]. There's nothing sluggish about the writing. Is he really a novice author? I feel like it's the best among Dragon Clan fandom. The pace is just too fast. How many words does the author intend to write? I hope there is at least 50w or more.

So far, it's a very comfortable fanfic. The protagonist has a good character with a bit of a sinister streak, and the emotional line is okay. I hope it won't be all the same. After all, the Dragon Clan is not so strong in the plot. Don't write down the parts about Bronze and Fire King in detail. It's too boring. I read a lot of fics and the impression of Bronze and Fire is very poor.

When does the author eat meat [thinking], eating meat can replenish five stars

Not bad, not bad. It's rare to get them all. Jiangnan's works are all about poor girls.

Yes, the author writes about dragon harem, which is the best I have seen so far. Alas, indeed! !

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, that is In your long life, your name will also leave a dazzling mark. Traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them Problems all come from insufficient updates

A cool article about a harem with multiple female protagonists. The early stage should be regarded as a cultivation system. I started eating meat when I was around sixty chapters. It's very well written. I think it should be all-inclusive now. It's one of the few, very few all-inclusive types. It's very to your liking. Moreover, the author is a good cat lady who knows how to meow.

It looks good. I like the male protagonist design. I have accepted all the female characters. This is how Dragon Clan fandom should be laid out in advance.

Goodbye, author. I have no choice but to make this decision. I hope we can meet again by chance. Because I encountered some unexpected things, which had a greater impact and blow on me, I would like to formally say goodbye to you here. I'm really reluctant to let you go. I'm really happy to get to know you. I came across your book by accident and I feel it is a treasure. After reading this book for so long, the happiness and touch you brought to me are unforgettable, but there is no way, life is like this, full of helplessness and parting. I hope you can always stick to your original intention and keep going. Finally, thank you again for the joy, touch, sadness and anger you have brought to me. Thank you for staying with me these days. The main reason for leaving this time is that I have finished reading it and I am going to read something else. I will come back tomorrow and remember to read more chapters.

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Not bad, nothing too big of a surprise. Overall, it's pretty cool. I hope there won't be any more eunuchs. Also, do you want to score points?

I probably know why the heat is so low. If I update once a day, can the heat not be low? Even if I update twice, it won't be like this [face covering]

I think it's pretty good-looking, the quality is on the line, and it's quite heartwarming.

It feels pretty good, I'm looking forward to the next plot

Author, why did you stop updating? Author, I will give you five-star praise and come back to life! My author!

It's rare to see a complete Dragon Clan fanfic, please don't send it to the author.

It's quite good-looking, and it's better written than many Dragon Clan fans. It's really not bad to not let anyone go. This is the first time I've seen this kind of loli grow into a dragon fanfic.

I think the Dragon Series is very good.

A very good book

It's rare to find a copy of Dragon Clan

It's really good [laughs]

Call me if you want to score points

Okay, I like love lines.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Now that I've finished watching it, I have to give it five stars.