The Return of the Condor Heroes: Guo'er, Do You Know What You Did Wrong?

Tomato is all about fast food. I didn't expect to find a high-quality book. I was very surprised. Many authors will destroy the original character of the character in order to promote the girl, and change the character for the development of the plot. However, the author's writing is very restrained. The emotional entanglements written on the basis of the original character are very reasonable and appropriate. It makes people feel as if this is the case. Guo Jing's chivalry and Huang Rong's intelligence and charm are all very reflected. Good, but I think Yang Guo's description is the best reflection of the author's quality. The feeling of wanting to hide Huang Rong's desire but not being able to control it is heart-wrenching, and the Yang Guo shown in the plot is also particularly charming. From Huang Rong's perspective, Yang Guo is affectionate, loyal, and courageous. The most important thing is that he has the same talent and talent as Huang Rong. The author reflects it vividly. From Huang Rong's perspective, it would be a pity to miss Yang Guo, right? And the temptation is too big, hahahaha

I don't know how to rate it more appropriately. I once used AI to write some fragments. So I looked at the detailed descriptions throughout the article. Already feel the strong atmosphere of AI. The most remarkable feature of AI is that in just one sentence, it can add a full paragraph of detailed description. The most intuitive feeling is that the plot is slow and there are many details. In fact, there is nothing wrong with using AI assistance. Just make the details and plot more balanced. The content is good-looking and readers will recognize it.

The writing is very delicate. I've basically never seen The Condor, only the Divine Condor, so I've never been too fond of Huang Rong. But the author's portrayal of Huang Rong here is very good, and I fell in love with this character. Moreover, it is not easy to find a novel that is not systematic and has a normal style. The contrast brought by the dual personality Mochou is also quite fresh. The pace of this book is slower without feeling like it drags. I don't quite understand why the score is only over 7 points. It feels much better than the music on the recommendation list. Recommend everyone to try it. It's hard to find an author you like, so hold on! !

It's quite interesting, but I'm a bit confused about how the author plans to write the relationship between the protagonist and Huang Rong. Will it turn into a mother's love later, or some other kind of love? I personally think that I might write about the protagonist's transformation into family love in the future. Overall, when I read it, the pace was relatively slow, the writing was quite good, and the characters described were quite vivid and not so stereotyped. However, I personally hope that we can change into a family relationship with Huang Rong in the future. I still feel that the protagonist's personality is rather hazy and not so obvious. I hope that I can add more to the protagonist's character and describe more of the protagonist's small details, habits, etc., To make the character more three-dimensional. The emotional scene with Guo Fu was quite well written, quite sweet, and quite interesting. Overall, it still looks pretty good. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Let me talk about a few controversial points that I personally feel: Yang Guo's character is a bit gloomy, which is not very similar to the original work. He is a bit girly when he gets along with Huang Rong, but considering that it is a time travel, it is understandable; and then the style is different from the original work. The author is better at writing about daily life, and writes characters and emotions more delicately. It is not like a martial arts novel. As long as you can accept these two points, everything else is fine. The advantages are also obvious. It seems that the author wrote this book with care, and it is not brainless. I really enjoy reading harem novels. I hope the author will continue to write it. One more thing, the emotional line with Huang Rong is a difficult point. Guo Jing really has nothing wrong with Yang Guo, so I really hope that I can kill Guo Jing, or let the two of them remain ambiguous.

It's very good-looking. Although it's slower at the beginning, it's by no means dull. There's a lot of eroticism and emotional collision. The second part is fast-paced, but there's a lot of erotica. This is a serious harem story. It's not much better-looking than those that simply recruit girls. I just like this kind of emotional collision of different personalities.

The first heroine of this book, Huang Rong, spent the first 200 chapters writing about Peach Blossom Island. After that, the plot accelerated, and by the middle stage it had nothing to do with the original work. There are too many AI polishing elements throughout the book. But the overall writing style is acceptable. Worth a look

The author's description is very comfortable, and each heroine has her own personality. Of course, I don't deny that I came in because of Gang Leader Huang. After reading more than 170 chapters, I was particularly curious about how the emotional scene between the protagonist and Gang Leader Huang would be written. After all, the author did not deliberately vilify the character of Guo Daxia to set off the relationship between the protagonist and Gang Leader Huang. Moreover, Guo Daxia did not treat the protagonist badly, so there was no reason for Gang Leader Huang to take the initiative to leave Guo Daxia. What I think is more reasonable at the moment is that Hero Guo serves the country and the people and then sacrifices to heaven, preserving Guo Daxia's reputation, and then. . . But it is also possible that the author will have other advancement rhythms. This is also a matter of opinion. In the end, this kind of words that describe delicate emotions came to light.

After reading dozens of chapters, I have to admit that the author's writing is really good. The emotions are written very delicately, especially the relationship with Huang Rong [laughing evilly]. But I am very curious how the author will write the relationship with Huang Rong, after all, Guo Jing is still there. Of course, the author's writing is a bit procrastinating, like when I was writing essays when I first entered middle school. The details of the environment were written in such detail that it was a bit annoying. But if you throw away these details, the writing is really good. [Like] This is the most beautiful divine glyph I have ever seen, bar none. I hope the author will work hard on the code and write it quickly. It's not enough to read. Don't stop updating. This is the first book on Tomato that I really want to read. Don't stop updating. [Blow a kiss] @ Where is [what] the author's new book? Why can't I find it?

(If you are too lazy to read, just read the last sentence.) It feels a bit strange. In the front, the emotional lines in the first volume are very detailed, and everyone is written very delicately. After all, it takes nearly two hundred chapters for just a few main characters. Later, in the part about Li Mochou, the pace is a bit fast, which is weird. The male protagonist is like unlocking the succubus physique, and the two apprentices are like falling in love at first sight💘. But overall it is still very subtle, but it feels a bit empty, and many of them are unnecessary details. You describe the environment very well, but it does not reflect the characteristics of the plot. You just find events and plots in a lot of sentences. This may be the reason why this book is not popular. It cannot be because of the misbehavior of the teacher's wife [smile]. I feel that the martial arts novels written by Jin Yong are full of all kinds of bloody love stories, which are difficult to read [smile][smile][smile]. Come on, I feel that if the harem is the main focus, the writing is still very good. After all, martial arts is just a world view. Overall, it is worth watching [Blow kiss]