Hogwarts: Ravenclaw Without a Dark Lord

Very good new book. The protagonist is neither too supermodel nor too depressed (the author suppresses the protagonist's strength, etc.) And is not a knee-jerk lick. Although it's Ravenlock, it doesn't always write about theoretical knowledge. It's about reading novels, not studying. Besides, there is no use learning these things. This is mainly for entertainment. Perhaps the author should pay due attention to the poisonous points about the theoretical knowledge, which are already beginning to show signs.

Marin seems to be twisting his eyes now... [Petrified] He created a requiem that is equivalent to the Imperius Curse, which can be regarded as the counter-curse of the Imperius Curse... But in fact, the effects of both are similar, and they both use pleasure to control others. [Petrochemical] Differently, the Forgiveness Curse was used for two days, the Imperius Curse was used on myself from the end of the first grade until now, and the Cruciatus Curse was used on me for the first time and unknowingly for an entire night. Even though it was used on spiders, it was outrageous. He is born with the ability to see souls, and can obtain the other party's thoughts and memories by affecting the soul, enhance the success rate of magic, and can obtain souls to enhance his own soul, avoiding death to a certain extent. After being glanced at by the basilisk, he pretended to be dead. Those magical runes don't seem to have any price other than magic. It depends on the protagonist's ability to see the soul. At present, it seems that he has an unstable understanding of himself, but Marin is willing to die to learn philosophy... Judging from the fact that he can treat his name and full surname as three people, he is a good candidate for making Horcruxes in the future. In addition, Marin has founded a research society and will always come up with some wonderful ideas about the soul. Yes, the Dark Lord is scheduled to have his own loyal wings in the future. Fortunately, the person Hagrid found was reliable. If he had been allowed to grow up alone, or if he had found a pure-blood... Without Lao Sai, Lao He and Lao Lu... I guess Marin could turn the magic world into the Philosopher's Stone. [Sinister smile]

There is no heroine, no ambiguity, the protagonist is strong but also targeted, the combat power is not broken, the original characters are basically non-OOC and have defeated too many HP fans [awkward laugh] Highly recommended Okay, now the most important thing for you, author, is to look at the title of your book. The protagonist is Ravenclaw, right? Playing power, controlling public opinion, the desire for power, and conspiracy (this is doubtful) Which of these is consistent with Ravenclaw? Combined with the lesson schedule of the lion and snake, it became a griffon. I suspect that the author originally wanted to add the protagonist to Slytherin, but then you remembered that Potter and Slytherin can't get along well and can't be a nanny? The writing is very good and the plot is very good, but why don't you transfer the protagonist to another hospital, or why don't you just leave Hogwarts while the protagonist is injured? Otherwise, who can understand now that the protagonist is actually from the Eagle Academy? Is it because of his magical talent? [What]

This book is really good. Many people complain about the male protagonist's virginity and the procrastination of the plot. I don't think it really does. As an extremist reader who appreciates the decisiveness of the male protagonist and longs for revenge in one chapter and the ending in ten chapters, I really appreciate the male protagonist's choice to give up killing the Malfoy family in this book. Although I still hate the three Malfoys very much, the male protagonist, as the author's introduction says, is a humane Ravenclaw who controls power, not Tom Riddle who is controlled by power. The male protagonist of this book is a process of being filled with love. He is very lucky to meet the Diggory family, Hermione, the pedantic Dumbledore, the small but protective Dean Flitwick, the foul-mouthed and soft-hearted Snape, the serious and loving McGonagall, and even the brainless Hagrid. In fact, this is the meaning of education. The male protagonist lives among a bunch of good people and is filled with love, so he will not fall into darkness. I have always felt that Shuang's novels about male protagonists who are decisive and decisive in killing all the way will not be great works, because it is the history of the evolution of evil dragons; but the last fire of humanity burning in the darkness often has the potential to be great works (such as Klein and Chen Ling). The author of this book may be lacking in writing style, slap-in-the-face plot arrangements, and facial expressions of villains, but he has a good sense of the three views and the overall writing trend. Even if it is an online novel, the novel that the people like to read will definitely be a novel with upright three views. Let's talk about Ravenclaw, why do you think Ravenclaw is a decent house? Can't you see that Rowling actually hates this house? Maybe because Slytherin is so bad, no one pays attention to Ravenclaw, a little bad guy who is exquisitely self-interested, scheming, and wise in protecting himself. Barty Jr., Lockhart, Trelawney, and even Helena Ravenclaw are not good people [facepalm][facepalm] Moreover, Myrtle died of school bullying, and Luna also suffered school bullying. In other words, why do you think Ravenclaw is a good person? But to be honest, I can actually understand why there are negative reviews below. This book is not suitable for following up because the foreshadowing is too long and there are other plots interspersed in the middle. I can't follow it anyway.

All I can say is that the author is really good at writing. If there is a plot that is not as good as this, I would scold him for turning a long story into a cool one. It's good-looking, but yes, those who prefer the original protagonist group are not very friendly. Harry and Ron play a role in the transition [like]

Pretty good, 4 stars+ It's strange that it only has 6 points. I'll give it 5 stars. Overall, it's pretty good. The protagonist doesn't have HP plot memory and is a bit nervous at the beginning, but overall it's very enjoyable to watch. Disadvantages: 1. The protagonist is sometimes somewhat decent, but not the decisive type. Be careful if you don't like this. But I think such a protagonist fits the plot well and is pretty good. 2. The subsequent plot of being captured in Akazban was a bit frustrating, and it felt like a good person should be pointed at a gun. However, the revenge plot after coming out of Akazban is quite satisfying.

The early stage is quite good, and the character design of the protagonist is also very novel, which is different from other fans who follow the original plot. But I always thought it was a story without CP. After watching it for more than half, I realized that the heroine seems to be Hermione. The emotional line is inexplicable and mine. If you don't care about the emotional line, it's still pretty good.

It's really beautiful! The writing style is very relaxed, with warm tones at school and at Diggory's house [Blowing Kiss]. The protagonist also has his own plot line, and it will not forcefully follow the original work. It is not a nanny story, nor a time travel story. It can be said to be very original, but the setting hardly conflicts with the original work (I didn't find it much anyway). Currently, it has no cp. It is also great in setting up suspense. For me, the protagonist's golden finger is the biggest one. After all, it is related to what the protagonist essentially "is". The protagonist is an off-kilter Ravenclaw kid with an overabundance of curiosity. He is the only one who is always angry with others and has never been angry [laughs]. Although he is off-kilter, he is very reliable at critical moments. Without compromising his fighting ability, he always makes achievements that shock others easily and in an understatement. There are no poisonous points, and the plot development logic is very smooth (for example, when the protagonist chooses a wand, even if there is no suitable one, he just picks a random one, not some grandpa's backlog [face covering]) At present, the plot has only developed to the first grade. Let me talk about my personal views first. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I think it's very interesting, I hope it won't be a harem story, please.

A very, very, very beautiful book, excellent in every aspect. World view, logic, structure; male protagonist's character, friendship, and love. All aspects of the writing are very smooth and reasonable. I think the most rare thing is that the characters basically fit the original settings very well. I can't speak to all of Tomato's HP fans, but 90% of them will intentionally or unintentionally smear the characters of a certain camp, but this one is very fair and objective. And I felt very comfortable after reading it overall. The male protagonist is not a person who suffers from internal friction, so he does things without procrastination or entanglement. There is no inexplicable twist in many other HP novels. All in all, such a long novel can maintain this quality. As a reader, I think I am lucky to see this kind of novel.

Equalize the sorrow It is a very well-written article. It is really refreshing that the protagonist implements the point that "good people should not be pointed at by magic wands"... Old Deng has always been too gentle, which makes the people at the Ministry of Magic always have confidence. This original content is too lazy to spray. Marin actually reminds me a bit of a man who "I just want to live a peaceful life". In fact, the rules of the Ministry of Magic have zero binding force on him, but he is tougher than Lao Deng. The current progress should be that the Death Eaters and Lao Fu actively provoke Seid and lead to confrontation. If the Ministry of Magic and the Death Eaters were smarter and didn't take the initiative to provoke Marin, I feel like Marin wouldn't do anything...

I like this book very much. It is very distinctive and slow-moving. There are foreshadowings and hints in many places. After reading it, I felt a sense of clarity and pleasure. At present, it can be seen that the protagonist lacks the emotion of "love". I hope Hermione and Luna can "fill" this gap [eat melon] [sneer laugh] [send heart] It's pretty good. It's of a very high standard within the same subject matter. The characters are well drawn, some expressions are vividly described, and the narrative is concise and not procrastinating, which shows the power of his writing. At the same time, many settings are quite to my taste, so keep going✊

It's very beautiful. Is there a female protagonist? [Think]

The writing style is humorous and the characters are vivid, but I feel that there is a little lack of psychological description. In short, the expressions and movements of the characters are used to express sideways. In some places, I know what the author wants to express, but I can't understand what he wants to express specifically. And I feel that the protagonist's strength has improved a bit slowly.

Very interesting, well written 🍺I like the character of the main character, like a beagle enjoying the period

The writing and plot are both very good. It's the type that's easy to get hooked on. It's considered a very good HP novel. But now there are too few and it's not enough to read.

This book is very well written. I feel that the emotional line between Marin and Hermione is very natural, not abrupt or stiff, and seems very natural. And Marin is not aggrieved in his attitude and handling of the Ministry of Magic and Voldemort, but there are a lot of depressing chapters in Crouch's part, but the subsequent counterattack is very satisfying. The setting of the protagonist is also very special, and the relationship with the Diggory family is also very warm. I hope the author can finish this book.

It's very good. The characters are described in detail, each character's personality is reflected, and the protagonist's growth arc is very good. There are many interesting places, and there are many empathetic touches. The rating of this book is really underestimated, much better than many other high ratings.

It's so great, why does it feel like there are so few people?

Ah! All I can say is that it is indeed amazing! ! [Smile][Smile][Smile] It's like a magic pill. I kind of know why this book has a low rating. Starting from the first or two hundred chapters, it involves too much politics, and too lightly or even ignores the important role of power in the extraordinary world, making it seem like I am reading a political novel. In addition, the arrangement of the interesting points in the article is unreasonable. If a novel wants to be well-written, it cannot be too serious and give people a long-term sense of depression. However, it cannot "ignite" and "refresh" people at the right time. The more I read, the more boring it becomes. Am I entertaining or participating in some serious literary discussion? How does it force me to want to carry out literary criticism seriously?

The protagonist is the most Ravenclaw I have ever seen on Tomato.

I have read 200 chapters so far, and I feel that the writing is quite good. It is different from most fan fictions. It does not follow the timeline plot. The editing is also very good. It is smooth to read and not objectionable. Some of the contents are a bit profound. I watched it until the end. It was very well written. The plot and depth were all novel. I got at least 9.5 Points [like][like][like]

The setting of the protagonist is very novel, but I feel that these latter abilities have not appeared very often, and the length of the story is getting longer and longer, and there are more and more characters. Many of the characters that were previously portrayed are appearing less and less.

Logic is online, IQ is online, drama style, novel setting. It's just that sometimes I can't understand what the main character wants to do. It is considered the best among free novels. In fact, the author can try the starting point, maybe he will have more appetite there.

This book ranks among the top three books of the same type that I have read. You may feel a little confused at the beginning, but if you read it with curiosity, you will truly understand this book after reading it. Although he only has a rating of more than six points, he can get a rating of more than 9.0 From me. In addition to the early stage, the author has become more and more vivid in characterization and has also made great progress in plot narrative. To be honest, I suspect that the author is an old author who has written many articles of the same type. And the author must know the world of Harry Potter very well. Although the story direction is not exactly the same as the original work, this is also the charm of fan fiction. Finally, I would like to thank the author again for his creation.

The author's writing is good and many details are very touching. The plot has changed a lot. The timeline has been modified. Some people's endings have also changed. The female protagonist Hermione and the male protagonist's abilities are not too outrageous. It is worth watching.

It's a very exciting story. It's obvious that Marin has grown up. Although there are some twists and turns in the process, it is closer to reality. The ending can also be called a satisfactory one, and it also completes the two lines of Voldemort and the goblins.

 Although the score is low, the level is definitely higher than most HP articles.

Compared to traditional HP fanfics, Goldfinger is more innovative. It looks good so far. The heroine seems to be Hermione, and Luna seems to be possible. Come on.

It seems that there are too few people to see it, but it's actually pretty good. The protagonist Marin did not completely indulge in doing whatever he wanted because of his special abilities. At the beginning, he did lack some legal consensus in the magical world, but he always followed the bottom line he drew. After being tricked into Azkaban, he showed signs of turning dark, but he soon became entangled in the emotions of the Diggory family and Hermione. In this article, Lao Deng also pursues the power of love, but he only guides, not suppresses. After all, he has experienced the Dark Lord twice [face covering] The ending of Lao Fu and Lao Ge is considered satisfactory. The main characters are basically reunited.

The score shouldn't be so low, it's better than the writing style of many Pomodoro books. Hermione is cute. The story in this book is well written, the adaptation is reasonable, and the details are in place. However, the protagonist is still a blockhead and hopes to become a normal person soon. Overall it's worth recommending, I think it's at least 8.5 Points [blowing kiss]