The End of the World: the Path of the Witch at the Beginning

The beginning is not very good, I don't quite understand what the protagonist is inking. In a world of medium magic and high martial arts, there is no identity and novice gift pack at the beginning, just a bottle of magic potion. What are you picking up? It gradually got better after that. Although some passages were a bit boring, it was still a good read. It's great for killing time. The wit and layout are well written, but I'm not sure how many people will have the patience to read it carefully. I also hope that if the author sees this comment, he will speed up the progress of some Naruto worlds and not write 300 chapters in one world. And in the next world, the protagonist can also obtain some extraordinary systems unique to the world. It is understandable that Naruto has been transformed and cannot obtain chakra, but other extraordinary systems are too difficult to find or incomplete... Last but not least, I hope there will be more exciting battle plots in the future, and the long-term battle of wits will be enjoyable to watch. But the middle process is really boring to read.

The beginning is a little bit off-putting, but the rest of the story is pretty good. The protagonist has an above-average IQ, does things with purpose, and uses unscrupulous means. The characters in the plot have normal personalities, and the timeline is also adjusted. It can be seen that the author has carefully watched Naruto. Is that why so few people read it?

The quality of this book is pretty good. Except for the protagonist drinking a bottle of magic potion in the early stage and grinding away at it, the protagonist's style in the later part completely satisfied my imagination of the path of a witch. It's not a brainless novel. The protagonist has truly managed to leverage the entire ninja world with his own power. It's ruthless [like]

It's nice to watch, but the protagonist's restrictions feel a bit too great. Why can I only kill Japanese soul points? So the future world will be all Japanese comics? Can we do some original world in the future? This book does not have a heroine, but one of the auxiliary materials in the Witch Series Zero is based on her own love, so is the protagonist looking for a boyfriend? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] It just so happens that the famous sayings of Emperor Russell can appear in this book [laughing evilly]

I don't know how sweet and vicious it is. No way ah ah ah ah ah? Is there something else that no one cares about? Tetraline and Omeprazole Enteric-Coated Tablets Look at the things in your house. What your family members are talking about is my problem, right? What your family members are talking about is your family's words. ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! ? ! Where's your money? Didn't you tell me your names? Thank you, sister and brother! Well, I just wrote it casually for fun.

There was a bit of a problem at the beginning, and it got a little late, but the plot was okay, full of destructive desires, and continued to do evil. I want to watch Purgatory on Earth.

Except for the grinding noise after drinking the magic potion at the beginning, everything was pretty good in the end.

The writing is okay, it's logical and not very brainless, but when can I change into a woman? It's already over 60 chapters.

How can I put it, after surviving the first 4 chapters, it gets better and better as you go to the end. The protagonist is a pure villain and he is ruthless. However, most people were dissuaded by the previous points and the results were not very good. If you have time, I suggest the author change the beginning, in the hope that the book can continue to be written. Come on, author

The author's idea is a bit outrageous.

It's good, but when will the Naruto arc end?

I haven't read the original work, but I can still understand what the author wrote. In it, the author explains the functions of those sequences, as well as taboo objects and the like [Like] Although the score is low now, I can definitely improve it in the future. Don't give up [crying]

First, skip the first six chapters, then read them again

Yes, there are very few fan fictions about Lord of Mysteries, and there are very few that can write well. I have wanted to write a fan novel before, but I have to go to school and have no choice, so I hope the author can write better and better, come on

It's really fun to watch, but when are you going to become a woman?

It's so good. I use the power system of the Lord of Mysteries to travel through the world and destroy the little days with the Lord God's space as a bridge. I'm very curious. What will happen if the protagonist fills up all the paths? Hey-hey

It is recommended to skip the first 5 chapters and start from the end. Become a witch and start with "Mirror, Mirror"

The update is too slow, the plot is good, and the killing is decisive. If it could be followed faster, it would be a good novel.

It's pretty good. It's a very good mystery fanfic that I've read.

Doesn't the title of the book say "All Heavens"? Why is it that it's almost 100 chapters and it's still in the first world?

By the way, can you go to the mythical world and play Journey to the West, the prehistoric world, it's a mess, or the fantasy world since the protagonists have become witches, why not find some handsome husbands? Anyway, the protagonist no longer cares about life or death. He can do whatever he wants. Now that he has traveled through time, he can do whatever he wants. Whatever he didn't dare to try before, he has to try it again.

Yes, Pado certified

Not at the beginning, but later on

Very nice looking

It's back, not bad, not bad

It's good to watch, so you have to calm down and watch it. The character of the protagonist in the early stage is considered a poisonous point in Tomato, but the character development of the protagonist cannot be done without [blowing kiss]

I would like to take the liberty to ask, after Uchiha Madara drank the sun path potion, the protagonist had no chance to graze, is there any follow-up for Uchiha Madara?

The beginning is well written and worth looking forward to

It's pretty good, not completely brainless. Except for the first few chapters, which were a bit awkward, it was great to meet Yahiko and the others.

The protagonist has been contaminated, right?