[Light Ensemble Cast] [Not Mindless] [Pure Adrenaline] [Genius] [No Female Lead] [Fast-Track Martial Arts]
Yu Huo transmigrates into the body of a super underachiever at the Milky Way Martial Arts Academy, a Blue Star human, one of the weakest and poorest among the universe's countless races.
Facing the terrifying talent, resources, connections, and status of the universe's celestial dragon races,
Yu Huo has only an ordinary boosting-for-hire System. Complete a game-boosting job, and he gets a reward.
Soon, rookies, cyclopes, little girls, and little monsters all come looking for help.
His opponents roar arrogantly:
"Our race has unmatched comprehension!" Yu Huo: "I've got pay-to-win points and a 12x experience card. One thousand skill XP shoots up to 12,000!"
"Our true dragon bodies are the strongest!" Yu Huo: "A perfect body, breaking through the limiter, with limitless physical growth!"
"We have the most light energy!" Yu Huo: "I don't know what you're talking about. Go tell that to my legendary energy."
Later on,
countless races tremble in fear as Yu Huo spreads his hands. "I'm just an ordinary game booster, taking jobs from rookies, geniuses, monsters, and... anyone who's been treated unfairly. Fair prices, no tricks, no discrimination."
I'm a new author, so the beginning's a little messy, but it definitely gets exciting later. Longtime readers' comments can vouch for that~
Seeing the last chapter of the current update, the entire outline theme article idea and system design are OK, and there are also some cool points about suppressing first and then promoting. Then talk about some of the shortcomings that I personally feel. The writing style needs to be polished, and the character creation needs to be strengthened, similar to Lu Shu in "The King, Spare My Life", or Chen Xun in "Ember of Immortality". Unexpected and reasonable. How to make readers remember this character and make this character unique, such as "get extra money". Some parts of the dialogue are a bit vulgar and humorous. Although some bad homophonic jokes can create topics, they are more or less dramatic and do not give people an unexpected contrasting humor. The entire strength setting is a bit vague, and the description of the environment is too vague. For example, is the Universe Shankara Academy an entry-level institution in the Universe Academy? At present, there is no more powerful institution to show off its vulgarity. The environment within the college is divided into different levels. Students with third-level strength are equal to graduation. So if we set environmental restrictions of levels 3, 6, and 9, it will be similar to the contrast between high school, high school, high school, second school and high school, where the weak defeat the strong, and the contrast of krypton gold counterattack. Because it is blurred, it will appear that the protagonist's counterattack is not too exciting. The protagonist lacks a background, a background that allows the protagonist to show off unscrupulously, or he lacks a rule, a rule set by the Supreme Federation of the Universe. Because any third-level or fourth-level player can end Blue Star's situation, and the protagonist's golden finger is no longer a golden finger. The article emphasizes that in peaceful times, the solar system is a corner, but it still lacks rules. Races can be diverse, there are no subdivided areas, and there are no subdivided racial levels. The Celestial Dragons are currently T0. Although the academy is well-educated, the other races are not described in T1t2, and there will be a final troupe in the future. There are no subdivided levels of strength. For example, the fifth-level strength can destroy half a planet in an instant, while the fourth-level strength can only destroy a city. The comparison of strength is just an analogy. No poisonous spots have been found so far, so you can rest assured and take a look boldly.
First of all, thank you for your support and comments, hehe. Secondly, Today's chapter is still under review and may not be released until later. It's strange, because they are two normal words, when read together they become explicitly reviewed words. I happened to make a typo at the time, but now that I think about it, if I don't correct the typo, I might publish it normally...
The author's writing style is okay, and the setting is a very new and upgraded face-slapping novel. There are no brainless female characters, and there is no harem. The only drawback is that I finished it when it was less than a hundred chapters long. I'll see you next year, author.
This schoolbag has potential, but it's too little, so I'd better keep it first 🤦
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Overall it's quite interesting, the subject matter is quite novel, it's not as high as 6:00, and it's better than those two-spined salamander fics.
The subject matter is very novel, the plot is well written, and there is no deliberate attempt to show off.
The ones you have read are the reviews. Damn it, otherwise the author would drink the northwest wind.
This is the martial arts of the universe
The writing is very good, the characters are flesh and blood, the pace is fast and a bit chaotic in the early stage, but it becomes very good later on 👍👍👍