Bu Zhi’s Fourth Book

The writing is okay, and he is worthy of being a senior game player of GalGame. Although the protagonist does not show this trait, the clues can be seen in the dialogue written by the author. At the beginning, I was worried about whether the author had an outline. After all, the original work didn't have much plot, and there wasn't much that could be written in the second creation. I didn't worry too much about the introduction of new characters in the future. Then magic was introduced later, and it didn't look as relaxed and routine as before. The author must have a good grasp of the situation. The progress between the characters is very fast, and the current relationship is very awkward. The readers are tired of watching the story without going on base, or they will be exploded by tomatoes [wipe sweat]. Let the author figure it out. The best thing is to break through the relationship as much as possible within the ability and then peacefully enter a relaxed daily life. Oh, yes, the late night conversation and confession part felt a bit dramatic, not quite like the literary dialogue that the character could say.

It's okay. Sylvie is actually just an introduction to the big world. The essence of this book is still Western fantasy. The story is well written now, the narrative and logic are clear, and the characterization is okay. However, the difficulty of writing will increase after opening the big world. I hope the author can work hard, give good reviews and support, and review after finishing.

Author, I admit that you are the male protagonist

Children, I finally read Sylvie's book again. Five stars directly. I hope the author can keep writing ദ്ദി˶•̀֊•́)✧

Doesn't the story have an outline? Think about it again. It's a very good work.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good.

Not bad, keep up the good work