Oops! the Identity of the Descendant of Guigu Can No Longer Be Hidden

After reading the first few chapters, I felt extremely abused. A strong sense of female porn palace scheming was poured into my brain. I was so poisonous that I immediately gave it to Qixing. I really couldn't bear to read this good writing later, so I continued reading and gradually got to the point, and it turned out to be surprisingly good-looking. Come back and delete the bad review and add five stars.

I personally think that historical articles should be written like this. The first is literary talent, the second is solid historical knowledge, and the third is emotional delicacy. The most important thing is that the emotional pull with the heroine is very well written, step by step, and the emergence of various forces is very reasonable and not abrupt at all. I originally thought that the writer was well written. He is a top-grade humble scholar of the three idiots. I will give a good review first, and if it is bad, I will come back every minute to give a negative review. I do what I say.

After reading it, I feel that the author's knowledge of literature is very solid, his way of thinking in chatting and dealing with things is very rational, the pace is slow, and the story develops naturally, there is no poisonous point, and it is not brainless. The disadvantage is that it is too slow. I finished it in two or three nights...

Yes, the rating of 8.3 Is still a bit low. According to what I have read, this book should be rated 8.8 Or even 9.2. From the beginning to the end of the book, it is obvious that the author's writing skills have improved. The protagonist is rarely portrayed with a sense of life, with righteousness and selfish desires. It is not perfect but very real. This book has multiple female protagonists. There are currently three, and there may be more in the future. The emotional line is generally very smooth. It is a really good article.

Female author? It smells like a girl's porn, and the writing is good.

It's nice to watch, and each female character has a distinct personality. Tomato is a rare example of high-quality and refreshing writing, but there are too few of it. I hope you keep it and don't stop writing. Five-star support

The author's writing style is delicate and fluent, and the reading has a strong sense of picture; the style is slow and requires careful savoring~ Now the protagonist's reputation has reached the court, all the forces are slowly emerging, and the exciting competition is about to begin~ The temples are high, the rivers and lakes are deep, the undercurrents are surging, and the storm is about to come; the ground is laid firmly, and it is getting better ~ I look forward to the author opening up a fascinating world of literary fighting for us!

This book is really good-looking. It is rare to see a work with both good writing style and time-travel writing. It can be seen that the author put a lot of thought into writing. The content is vivid and the senses are strong. It is a masterpiece that can be read slowly and carefully.

I first heard that the author was a woman writing a male video, and then I read the book reviews and was persuaded to leave. Later, I kept seeing it on the recommendation list, so I read it because I was bored. It turned out that it was indeed a very good book. I really feel that you can see the author's thoughts from a book, and the writing style, thoughts, and blandness, and there is an itching feeling that makes people keep reading. Delete the bad review and give it a five-star rating. I also recommend this book. This book is suitable for people with some background in history and classical Chinese, otherwise they will have dyslexia. Very cool and will help promote books.

I'm halfway through Chapter 380. Overall, this book is good, and the storyline is very smooth. There are very few bad points so far, but the image of some characters is not full enough and can even be said to be weak points. The protagonist recognizes the adopted sister Ah Shan. I was very curious when the character of Ah Shan came out. I thought she was a pretty good servant girl. I want to learn from it. , He was very caring to the protagonist when he was in the most difficult situation, but later on, he slowly changed into a character who gave people a sense of lawlessness and ignorance. In fact, this is fine, but let's look at the image of the protagonist. He is steady, cautious, and has no courage. As a person who traveled through time and brought a library of books with him, he did not even show the confidence to burn a boat. For such a person, his sworn sister Ashan has an extraordinarily split personality. Her personality changed too quickly from a slave to the one she is now. I don't know what the author's view of this character is, or if he has other arrangements. Can you shed some light on this?

The writing style and conception are both excellent, and I have the urge to read it!

Hmm... How to put it, I have always felt that the character of Ah Shan is a bit too unrealistic. Knowledge can change a person, but it cannot change a person's fundamentals. The character in the middle period is already so independent and reverse-thinking, but the character creation in the early stage is more biased towards weakness and kindness. Just to say this, this book has been written by more than 99% of the authors in Tomato. The author is indeed good. The plot is logical and the characterization is reasonable. It is not a refreshing novel for the sake of refreshment. It is quite good. Good reviews

I personally think it's really good-looking. It has a knife, but it's not too big. It's very eye-catching. Before I met this female author, I felt that the male videos written by female authors had the flavor of female videos. I always felt that they lacked a sense of masculinity. But this author's writing is really good, and his writing style is also very good.

I saw the latest chapter 559. Although it has old-fashioned skills and plot, it cannot stand up to the author's writing style. The plot description has a comfortable rhythm, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is delicate. The author's ink feeds me the flaws but hides my faults.............................

The lady's writing style is really amazing, it was not written by AI. Must praise

It's so well written. The protagonist is intelligent and can act cool like a summer ice cola. It's refreshing and natural. The heroines each have their own characteristics, but they're not vassals. The protagonist is not a classic dragon king character who's not as big as me. He's flexible and stretchable, he can be stubborn and he can pretend to be cool. He has a basic and simple sense of morality but he can also kill his whole family in a rage. It's rare to see such a "moderate" protagonist. Good! Disadvantages: The updates are too few and too slow. It would be great if I could update a hundred chapters a day.

The writing is good, and the polished descriptions are good. For me, the details are a bit confusing. I read it so fast that I don't know how to tell the story, haha. What's more, I feel like I need to open up some patterns while reading, and don't just limit myself to poetry. With so much knowledge, what should I be afraid of? You can't rely on yourself. A lot of it relies on others, which cannot highlight the protagonist's abilities. Be bold, dare to create, be good at using your brain, feel that the protagonist is a bit dull, and sometimes know how to hide it. My ideal is for a protagonist to have a cool, restrained, strong, confident and rational character with a bit of a funny personality, haha, it's kind of fun to imagine.

Although the writing is still short, it is a rare good article written by Tomato.

Seven points, It can be seen that it draws lessons from the anime Qin Shi Mingyue and some Jin Yong's works, and the fantasy elements become more intense after more than 500 chapters. It affects the perception a bit, but it feels like it's going to lead to another Guiguzi behind. The writing style is very good among online articles. Originally I was going to give it three points, but the Pomodoro score was too abstract, so I gave it five points for encouragement. After the score came up, I changed it to three points.

The writing style of this book is quite ancient, but it is neither obscure nor difficult to understand, nor is it draggy and bloated like modern online writing. It takes advantage of the strengths of ancient online writing and avoids its shortcomings, and reads it as smoothly and smoothly as if drinking mellow wine. I couldn't put it down, I read it all night long, I felt so disappointed, it was too short

The writing is really good, the thoughts are delicate, the dialogue is in line with the characters, and it is precise but not awkward. It is really hard to compare. Suddenly I feel so discouraged!

It's quite good-looking, the writing is very good, and many details show that the author has literary skills. The plot doesn't have any serious flaws. The only thing I feel is that the main plot is pushed too slowly, and many places are too delicate.

I've seen the latest chapter, and I can summarize it: overall it's good. Worth a look. There are also some poisonous points, it just depends on whether you can accept it. I think the appeal of the whole story can make me put aside the discomfort caused by the poisonous points.

Not bad, relaxed, realistic, with good characters, and some popular science literature interspersed with it. It doesn't have those clichés to slap people in the face. Isn't this better than those mindless books? At present, more than 400 chapters of Killing have been released, and 9 points are definitely needed.

I found this article on Tomato, amazing! Absolutely amazing! The author's writing is solid. I loved it so much that I watched it late into the night! ! It's just that the rating is too low to deserve this high-quality article. Come on, author, I'll follow you.

It looks good, I want to keep watching it, but there are not many good-looking ones on the platform that I haven't watched anymore, so I can only catch up and watch it. More updates would be great. Not bad, not bad, getting better. Of course, updating 3 times a day will be even better [Learned]

I haven't read such a well-written book in a long time!

The writing is very good, a review from a 15-year-old book reader

The writing is good and the plot development is reasonable.

The foreshadowing is good and the writing is just right.