Marry *************

Good looking! It was surprisingly good, but the plot was a bit slow. After the first volume, the fourth natural disaster begins in the second volume. The emotional scenes are very natural. Currently, the two protagonists are more than friends and their relationship is not yet complete, but it is still okay. After all, the protagonist is only 16 years old, so Gong must be an adult, right?

The subject matter is very novel, and it feels very good. There are no surprises so far. The writing style is okay, a bit better than many other books. I'm not talking about it, but I just feel it's a little bit off, but I can't really put it into words. Judging from the current direction of the plot, I am still looking forward to the presence of players who will establish sects later on. On the whole, because the two protagonists are not very old, they may not look mature and sophisticated, but they are also normal. There is another shortcoming. The author is great. I don't want to have too many. Five thousand updates per day should be enough [laughing][laughing]

Very good! Two men, the fourth natural disaster, the love line and the career line are handled very well. This is the first time I have seen that both the career line and the love line are very good, and the characters of the fourth natural disaster are written in detail. Whether it is a special genius player or an ordinary player, the protagonist is very good to them, but I still want the protagonist's family to get a spot as soon as possible, and then get to know him💕

The content is relatively detailed. I have only read more than 50 chapters now, but I have to say that it is indeed very interesting. But why did a knife suddenly come out while I was watching it? Can the author tell me what the knife looked like in the later period? I'm not afraid of spoilers @ChaChaooo Then there is this book. The emotional line is relatively slow, but I was very happy to read it. The plot is also relatively good, and the author's imagination is relatively big. You can read it [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] I hope the author can reply to me @Chachaooo

Looks good, please do your best.

The plot is exciting, emotions and plot go hand in hand The character design of the protagonist is great, the plot is smooth, and the golden finger is reasonable and not against the sky. But I finally understand why many books like to write about orphan protagonists, because there is no emotional bond with people in the past life. Otherwise, if the protagonist has a relationship with his relatives in the past life, he will die in pain. How can I put it? The writing is quite good, but there are family ties to the past life, and they are even so grief-stricken. How about simply erasing the memories of the two protagonists in the world of cultivation. Put one of the protagonists back into modern times to be an ordinary person, and the other protagonist is cultivating in the world of cultivation. Otherwise, it would be so painful to write, it would be better not to start, and either die forever, or travel to another world and be reborn as a new life. After all, no one in this world can live without anyone

It's a very nice book that combines the system, immortal cultivation and upgrade flow, online games, and various elements of the fourth natural disaster. The most important thing is this rare double male protagonist. It must be five stars~

Yes, the plot behind the introduction should be interesting and exciting. The logic is smooth and the emotional line is very natural. The author must continue to write more!

The comprehensive design of the career line and the emotional line is slow and not complicated, the setting of the article is rich in ingenuity, the supporting characters are not obtrusive, and the various elements are soft. This article is simply not great [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

The type is very novel, not just about killing monsters and upgrading

It's pretty good (I'm not very good at writing book reviews)

It's nice to read, and the writing is so good that it tells the story of the world of cultivation.

It looks good, the setting is very novel, the relationship between the two protagonists is delicate, and the plot is not draggy

Hope to see you again one day.

I like it so much ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh