Xuanfeng Peak Doesn't Keep Idlers

Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it It's okay, the few apprentices are good, the male of the eldest apprentice is not stupid, the female of the second apprentice is also normal, and the remaining few are also normal, there is no slap-in-the-face plot, the character of the protagonist is quite good, and there is no deliberate pretense of being deep. The others are also very out-of-the-box and are all good kids. No heroine (I saw the author said this in the comment area) In terms of transitions, I think it could be a little smoother. Sometimes it feels like it was moving to A one second and then moving to C the next. It's a bit of a clichéd knife. There are only two geniuses out of the nine in the protagonist's generation. Anyway, this is a matter of opinion (no need to comment specifically to try to change my opinion). Personally, I still prefer the protagonist who leads the team to the top. Then there is the issue about the original male and female protagonists, because the original male protagonists are the characters of Long Aotian, and they seem to be okay so far. I can't guess how the author will deal with it. Come on! (Hope without a knife refers to the death of the protagonist group)

It's not a formal fairy tale, but overall it's quite interesting. The author's writing style is not bad, and the description of the protagonist's past and friends is also pretty good. It's a work that people can read more about. It's just that sometimes it feels like a world of immortality, and sometimes it feels like it's about mortal martial arts. Practitioners need to eat, travel by carriage, and the imperial army in the world of cultivation needs a lot of food and grass. Mortals have no respect for practitioners (not afraid, they can obviously kill mortals casually, not to mention practitioners, even a martial artist would normally be afraid), and it feels like fighting spirit turned into a horse. The main reason is that I can't see what this world of cultivating immortals is like. Sometimes I feel that cultivators are quite weak, and it's very easy to cross levels. They are obviously geniuses, and they talk about how high the opponent's realm is, but they can still be evenly matched in a short period of time (the protagonist's second disciple) In the early stage of foundation building, the protagonist's senior disciple is in the early stage of pill formation, and in the late stage of foundation building, the protagonist's eldest disciple is against the original protagonist in the late stage of pill formation). There are also two major realms, which are used to describe the transformation of gods and the return to the void. They are used to describe the late stage of foundation building and the late stage of pill formation, and to describe the early stage of pill formation and the late stage of pill formation. The advantage of the author is that the writing is interesting and describes some side emotions. The disadvantage is that it is not rigorous enough, and it feels like there is no basic setting, what kind of world is this, and what is the story outline. It is a novel that you will want to read as soon as you read one chapter, but you will often see some awkward parts. It seems that this is the first time for the author to write a book. It is very good for the first time and it is a book that will attract people to read.

The content setting is quite good. The plot is also relatively novel, and each character is relatively three-dimensional. Maybe because of the short length, the sense of group portrait is weaker. The character image of the protagonist is not particularly full. I hope that the author will come back later and continue to update it to enrich the character image of the protagonist. It's very beautiful, don't stop updating it. 😢😢😢 The article is relatively short and it is difficult to make a particularly detailed evaluation. However, it's worth a look. 😘😘😘

Good luck, no need to say more Everyone is welcome to discuss

I'd like to ask if the subsequent plot will be sad? If it's torture, how cruel would it be? 🤔🤔🤔

It's killing me 🥺 🥺 I'm not a genius, but I can't stand the fall of a genius 😢 😢 😢

It's okay so far, keep going!

Please update it. It's so beautiful. I really like this kind of group portrait!!!!!

It's really beautiful and interesting. It's worth watching. Everyone's portrayal is very good. There are also regrets in it. Come on, come on. I hope the author will not give up on the article.