Primordial World Game: I Am the First Ancestor of Humanity

It is very well written. The protagonist understands the prehistoric times, but those people do not understand the prehistoric times. Those people regard Nuwa as an NPC, and later develop the city into a combination of an ancient city and a modern city. How is this written? It is very well written 👍👍👍

Why not just build a Creation Tower in this world? Each player who enters the game uses a jade token to enter the purchase space cabin in the Creation Tower. This is to ensure the safety of the players. Players can create a game cabin in the space cabin to nourish their physical bodies. Not to be disturbed by others. There is a library in the Creation Tower, which is used to collect books, materials, and various exercises.

The plot sounds good. The protagonist leads the development of the race as the first person in the innate human race. He relies on the development of the Wu clan to compete with other major forces and suppress other religions. He focuses on developing the human race. There are not many poisonous points that can be ignored. The score is at least eight points and there is no emotional line. From prehistoric times to reality, he competes with the real main god system.

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's attack on Huaguoshan One sentence said by 108 Monkeys: "Young man, don't show off your arrogance in front of your Brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

This is really good, the subject matter is good, and the world view is quite big. I wonder if there are prehistoric times, other worlds, and alien civilizations. The villain system of Son of Destiny is really a hodgepodge 👍 👍 👍 👍 But the more I watch, the more I look forward to it.

I saw Chapter 46, when I made my own game GM system. If humanity only targets the Xia Kingdom, does that mean that foreign exclusive games won't have any interference at all, right? That is the foreign human race, not counted as a human race, right? Then it is useless to say that people from various countries can only join the human race as mentioned above. If the foreign human race still devotes itself to the corresponding prehistoric mythology, then wouldn't the protagonist's prehistoric human power still be weakened in the same way, but it will only slow down the abuse of Xia players. Moreover, Chapter 2 mentioned that each country has its own mythology system, so the game will be released all over the world at the same time? Now that Xia Guo has come out to deal with the omnic crisis. Will other countries still play this game? Perhaps the author is afraid that the world view is too big, but the basic settings still need to be completed. Otherwise, it will just be a blank piece of writing, and it all depends on the author's positioning of his novel. One more thing. As for the saint, do you know any other myths? Can they get out, or are there system barriers? I always feel that it's too big in the early stage. It's better to just say that there is only Xia country or an alliance.

Zhang Tianyu, you are my god! Wow, I have read so many prehistoric novels, and this is the first time I have seen this kind of reasonable excitement. The pace is not sluggish at all, and it is very comfortable from beginning to end. This kind of story that leads the human race to develop and grow without losing anything is my favorite. Other prehistoric novels always just hang out in one place for hundreds of thousands of dollars. After Zhang Tianyu became the new humane group, he began to dominate after a short period of time. It's cool, and it's great to fight.

The overall writing is good, I like it very much, but there are many places in the book that are written with problems 🤦 (some may just be typos, some may not be precise enough, and some may be incomprehensible, or even interpreted as something else). I can only say that the author is not very good at writing, but the overall overall picture is very good.

What a novel prehistoric theme. The characters are vivid. The character is obvious and the writing is very good.

Four stars. It's well written. You have your own ideas. Don't deify the ancient world. It's just a novel. It's just a synthesis. You have to have your own ideas. This is good. The main shortcoming is that the hybrid is too much and the urban pretentious plot is too confusing.