I Have a Split Personality, so I'll Kill You a Little Bit

I'm not telling you, I really can't stand it. The brother above is right, write whatever you dream about without considering the fluency and look and feel. I couldn't stand the first chapter. I can believe that there were only a few sentences in the first chapter. Except for these few sentences, there was no third person pronoun, all were names. It's like: so-and-so got up, so-and-so washed up, and so-and-so was eating. It can be said to be: in what environment so-and-so got up, how he washed up, how he ate or what he was thinking about. (Although my writing skills are not good, I really feel that I am not as good as me in the first few chapters.) There is no embellishment, the author just wrote down whatever actions he thought of. If the first few chapters are not changed, it will be really difficult for anyone to read it.

I really just write whatever I dream about, or read it myself first [face covering]

Very good.