Kaitou Kidd: Moonlight Love

Great, the author is amazing. The structure of this book is clear and logical. Especially in the later stage, the foreshadowing of "the sudden disappearance of the wound" was first laid, and at the end it was naturally revealed that Kidd was not real. (I can't continue editing, let's be honest) The author is awesome, let me read them all! Author, please give me more extras! Author, do you have any extras?

It took me two days to read it intermittently. The second half was rushed. Although the story is a bit immature, it is still a good work. The popularity of the novel is very low, probably because there is no use of time travel or original characters, so there are relatively few interesting and interesting points. However, I can feel that the author likes "Magic Kaito" very much and respects the characters very much. The characters are as close to the original as possible. The visuals are there and the plot is rich. My first reaction after reading it was that if these plots could be made into animation or comics, they would be very interesting and exciting. There are some details, such as Terai Kinosuke's mention of his secret love from M19 in the dialogue, which shows that the author also pays great attention to the creation of supporting characters. The shortcomings are also obvious. The writing style is indeed average, qualified but not vivid, the vocabulary is not many, and it is easy to repeat (I can't stand seeing the frequent "evil charm" written about Kaito...). The description ability is not very good, so there are always shortcomings in the depiction of some scenes and the creation of the atmosphere. Secondly, some chapters are a little deliberate in order to highlight the characteristics of the characters. For example, although the White Horse Detective likes to tell time accurately, there are several parts that are not suitable to read and are a bit embarrassing. The White Horse Detective is polite and well-educated, with a high emotional intelligence. He is not a robot. It can also be seen from the appearance of Ming Keli that he is not the kind of person who will suddenly tell the time at an inappropriate time... Sakurai Yue from the organization is left as an assistant, and the more she looks at it, the more familiar she looks. It is similar to the role of Haibara Ai on Conan. In the presence of Terai Khonosuke, there is an extra beautiful female partner who has a crush on the protagonist. She has obvious tool-like attributes. I don't like this treatment very much. After all, this is not the only way to highlight the charm of the male protagonist. The biggest OOC actually started when Kidd lost his identity and Aoko joined the Phantom Thieves. On the one hand, I personally feel that it is absolutely impossible for Kaito to confess his identity to Aoko. Similar to Miko, even if everyone knows that Conan = Shinichi, Maorilan just doesn't know or can't know under the arrangement of the author. Falling off the horse basically means the finale or the final battle. Many of Kaitou Kid's actions were extremely dangerous. He himself had suffered stab wounds and gunshot wounds. How could he be willing to let his beloved girl risk his life to steal with him? It is unlikely that he will take the initiative to make Aoko become an accomplice; on the other hand, judging from Aoko's status as the daughter of the police force, the possibility of her becoming another Phantom Thief is also extremely low. Her feelings towards Phantom Thief Kid are also very complicated (in the early days, she also believed that he was teasing the police and frustrating her father at work and hated him). Not to mention that her simple and kind personality is not suitable for dealing with dangerous situations. Her skills, abilities, and magic skills have been improved to the point where she can become another Kid in a short period of time, which is really out of character. But in terms of the emotional line of fast youth, I think the author has done a good job in portraying the relationship between young lovers. Aoko's personality is also in line with the original work, and the cp is very sweet. I read it quickly and just glanced through it. My feelings are subjective and just my personal opinion. Finally, I still want to express my support. Even if there are shortcomings, the flaws cannot be concealed. As a sincere work written word by word by the author despite being busy with studies, it is still touching. I also hope that I can keep writing and look forward to more progress in my new work~

"The Phantom Thief was born with an explosion and ended with an explosion." But he, the last "Ladies and gentlemen." Really made me cry, Mr. Magician under the Moonlight, who brought hope. The plot is still very eye-catching. There are some typos. The first half of Satsuki is a little uncomfortable but the back is much better. The girly part of Kidd feels uncomfortable at first but quickly accepts it. I still used Pandora, but fortunately it exploded in the end, eh, it seems not? Did it turn into a beautiful gem without magic... Well, in short, the flaws are not hidden, and I look forward to the new work. Most of Kidd's fans are either co-actors or co-actors. The former has a supporting role and has less roles, while the latter is upright and out of character. And you and me, my dear author, not only wrote about Kid himself, but did not give him an original character CP or Shura field, and even the original plot was complete, reasonable and smooth (the zoo also had a starting point to become more qualified) ps: I really didn't expect Kaito to be able to... In the end... He deserved this ending. Good ending, good ending for everyone

Nice! This is the most beautiful fanfic I have seen so far. The author's thinking and logic in writing are very clear and the character settings in the book are not broken at all compared to the original work. Let me read it!

The author's writing style is very good, the logic is clear, the content is rich, and he wrote it carefully. It's very suitable for people like me who haven't watched enough "Magic Kaito". I look forward to more extras in the future₍₍Ϡ(੭•̀ω•́)੭✧⃛ Why is such a beautiful book so popular? This is simply the most interesting book about Mo Kuai that I have ever seen [Sending my heart to you]

Mainly written about Kaiqing, the duel between Kaito and the organization is very exciting.

It's beautiful, everyone has their own happy ending, it's a happy ending... But there are a few comments.

I feel very beautiful and exciting. Now I really want to watch Kaitou Kidd's battle. And what happened to Kaitou Kidd's body?

It's great. I want to watch it again after watching it.

So pretty! Although there is a knife in the middle, the ending is still sweet!

Very suitable for my taste.

It's so beautiful, I want to watch it again.

It's very nice. I've been looking for Kaitou Kidd in Detective Conan before. I didn't expect to see so much of him this time.

Very beautiful Anyway, it suits my taste The writing is also very good I regret not discovering this book earlier

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The characters are reasonable, the plot is logical, and it's very interesting to read.

It's very well written and I like it very much. I've been looking for fanfics on Tomato for so long. This book is one of the top ten fanfics in my mind.

Really very beautiful

It's really beautiful and very thoughtful. I want to cry every time I see the back part. Anyway, it's very beautiful.

It's so beautiful and the subject matter is also very novel.

Wow, this is really beautiful, so sweet. I like it.

Very nice. I haven't seen this kind of writing in a long time. I finished reading it in two nights•̆₃•̑

Many of my favorite story lines have been written into this book. Fast forward to Ao getting married, or Kuroba Kaito's identity being revealed. All super interesting. Looking forward to the author's next book.

Not bad, it's my favorite Kuai Qing😀🥰😘😘❤️❤️❤️Please wish Kuai Qing 99❤️❤️❤️