Comprehensive Manga: the Substitute God of Destruction's Journey to Another World

It feels pretty good. The only shortcoming is the combat effectiveness. But this book is a sweet combat story. It just adds some sugar to the process. Anyway, the protagonist is invincible. I think it's okay to give the enemy appropriate enhancement points. Otherwise, if you fart and the world is destroyed, then you still have to play six [face covering]. And it's not like Reinhardt said The combat ability is comparable to that of the protagonist. It's just that he has stacked thousands of layers of shields and has conceptual skills. I think it's quite reasonable. After all, the male protagonist has no conceptual skills and the destruction is useless. It's like Babidi in Dragon Ball, who is obviously as weak as a chicken but can control the devil and has a magic shield that can't even break the devil.

Multi-heroine invincible novel. Regardless of anything else, the author's settings and descriptions of the character plots are destined to be a masterpiece. It surpasses 80% of Tomato's fanfics. It also includes an emotional description of the interaction between the original characters of Dragon Ball, especially the description of Goku. It is amazing. The character of the protagonist is also okay. He is not domineering🐢♂ Don't worry and look forward to the future development. Come on, author!

Except for the early emotional drama, which is too childish, the rest is okay. Although it doesn't have overwhelming combat power, is it too boring to kill instantly? Hard to say. But the sense of oppression and tension are not strong, and the instant kill can be written very handsomely, with madness and oppression, but the writing style is different. The later emotional scenes were pretty well written.

This book is rated three and a half stars in my heart. It's pretty good so far, but a bit bland. The protagonist promised Shenlong the ability to travel through the world, but he hasn't gone to the next world yet. It feels like you will be writing about this world for a long time.

It's pretty good, but I hope the protagonist can grow up and become a martial arts master like Goku in Dragon Ball Z. Don't be limited by the fact that I want to write a person like little Goku. The character should come to life, and then it can become a good book. I won't discuss the plot and various details. I don't have high requirements for reading Tomato books. You can learn if you want to improve.

I hope the author will continue to update instead of discontinuing updates✋😭✋

It's quite interesting, but if the protagonist's character is more complete, he will feel like an old child.

Four stars. I don't feel like I'm just stupid [face covering]. I wish I could have adopted the character of the old naughty boy Zhou Botong.

Nice! Especially when a time traveler meets a Saiyan, the confused scene is very interesting.

Does the author's protagonist's transformation form follow the animation or the manga?

The writing is already very good. Keep writing and don't care about other people's comments. Just write according to your own ideas. Keep up the good work. I hope it won't stop and it will be better.

Good job, author.

It's okay, but it's too short

The author wants to ask you a favor, can you not overwhelm your fighting ability? [Cover face]

It's quite interesting, I just hope the protagonist's character can be more mature😋

It feels good, as long as the protagonist doesn't suffer.

It's very interesting to read. I hope there will be some climaxes. The writing level is already on par with 95% of Tomato books. The lack of popularity is due to the small number of words.

It's a very good idea. I'm used to seeing extremely shrewd protagonists. I was surprised by the sudden simplicity.

Keep it up! Fat is being slaughtered