Quickly Wearthe Common Female Heartthrob in the Sadistic Article

The writing of the author's wife is still fluent, and the heroine is not abused. It is a relatively cool theme of the heartthrob novel. I would like to briefly mention my personal suggestions: 1. The author uses time flashback to start the chapter. The first chapter is a bit messy, with an abstract feeling of stream of consciousness. I can feel what is written but not completely clear. When did I fall in love with my first boyfriend and why did they break up again? There are many male protagonists together but the description is not exciting enough. Also, after knowing the heroine's transformation, You can really guess the development of the subsequent plot with your hands [laughing and crying] If the golden three chapters are not handled well, it will reduce the desire to read. You can directly start the chapter and tell the heroine to sign up for this simulator, or use the climax to attract readers, such as kissing the movie king for excitement, and then tell yourself to sign up for this. 2. The variety show "Repair the World" is broadcast live. I don't understand it. There is no main task. What is the purpose and why I participated in it. I am confused. 3. Does the heroine have the aura of being a heartthrob, and does the hero fall in love at first sight? I hope the author will write more clearly about why he suddenly changed roles and directors, and the actor came to act in a web drama. I hope that the psychological activities of the male protagonist falling in love at first sight will be described in detail. Some physical contact and eye changes are the most tense psychological activities. I hope to add more. 4. The character of the heroine is still a bit vague at the moment. I personally like people with a more distinct personality. It's fine for a common girl, but she must have a sense of presence in the text, with the heroine as the main body, and don't portray her external personality, behavior, dealings and thinking like an NPC. Cheers, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's pretty good-looking, but a bit confusing. He was indeed a heartthrob, and they all kissed without the heroine's need to deliberately please her. But I think the ending of each world is a bit hasty. It always feels like something is missing, and it feels like some plot has been deleted. Overall, it's pretty good. The length of each world is also very short, without too much nonsense.

But, there's nothing sinister about it, the protagonist's character is quite interesting, and the supporting characters aren't annoying.