Transformed into a Living Armor, and Was Contracted by the School Beauty at the Beginning

I've read Chapter 12 and it's very interesting. Why are so few people reading it? It should be because it doesn't have 100,000 words and it hasn't been recommended. There are currently no poisonous points. If the rest are at this level, 2 to 300,000 words has the potential of 100,000 people.

How to say, success is set, failure is also set [face covering] I was poisoned at the beginning [face covering] But overall it's pretty good, so let's just look at the new settings.

The author writes well, but the early part (chapters 10-20) is a little bit toxic [top post] It will be very good in the later stage. The characters are vividly portrayed, especially when the protagonist (no spoilers) commanded the women to fight the alien beasts, I was immediately shocked at the time. I thought it was about 3 points, but after reading that chapter, I gave it 5 points.

Dude, why did the book drop to 5.6 Points? The five stars are not because of how beautiful the book is. Although there are many parts that I don't like, I can still afford the sympathy points.

Hello, hello, it's me again, is it still the same sentence? No, it can only be regarded as a demigod book. Because it is a typical novel with many shortcomings and many advantages (what are the advantages? Besides, there are many good ideas in terms of "innovation".) But like most books, this book couldn't resist the filthy comments from netizens and left in a hurry. (Although I felt that the writing was too crude when I was reading more than 60 to 80 chapters, but overall you can still read it casually) Ok, that's it for today's novel. I hope we can meet in the next novel.

The subject matter is very good and the writing and plot need to be improved.

The subject matter is very novel

The author's writing style is generally good. There are not many articles on this type of niche subject matter, and even fewer that can be considered high-quality. I originally thought it would be a competitive and confrontational fighting style, and the portrayal of women would be biased towards the harem, but I didn't expect it to be about pure love. This entry point is very suitable to my taste, and I received good reviews.

The question is very good. The content inside is just...

Looking forward to the day when it will be drawn into comics

2025, Finished watching on July 25. The routine is quite novel, and you can see that the author is making new attempts, but the length is relatively small, and the writing skills need to be improved. There are many pitfalls, but they are not sweet, and the pit digging is a bit stiff. Overall, it is not bad. The author consciously controls the number of words that suits his writing style.

It's beautiful, my eyes light up [laughing]

Okay, it'll be ok if you don't stretch your hips later on

Not bad, hope, keep it up

The writing is okay. The theme of possession is rare, but it seems to be gone. The ending says it is the first one (will there be a sequel), and the first one seems to be a pure love story with a single female protagonist (a bit unsatisfactory). (It would be great if, like Sub-Zero Fighter, she could play both and both together)

Why is it gone? Isn't it the end of the first chapter? Why is it just finished? I thought there was an update, but after waiting for two days, I checked the status again and it turned out to be completed.

Does it look good? Love it. Love it.

The writing is a bit lacking, but overall it's okay

It's good to watch. It's not very interesting in the first ten chapters, but it gets better and better as you read later. Both the storyline and the characterization are very good.

The story is novel and unique

Encourage the author

It's very novel and pretty good, come on!

666 Is great, no need to say more

Very interesting book

Too short, just like the author

Okay, very novel subject matter

Hang on, waiting for the second part

Come on, come on, come on duck

The content is pretty good

Pretty good, a bit underdeveloped