Lord: Start with Hunting Bow and Pot Lid

It's quite interesting. To be honest, I have never seen this type of mercenary career. But to be honest, I feel that the name Yanhuang Mercenary Group is not good and a bit awkward. It is suggested that the author change the name to something more characteristic of Western fantasy. [Like][Like]

The story of a true commoner genius who became a lord. Without Deep Blue's bonus points, without the support of the elders in the family, relying on one's own strength and one's own wisdom, no matter how difficult it is in the early stage of making friends with heroes. There was no choice to give up, and no choice to sell hooks. Relying on his own courage, he has his own life and a bright future in the mercenary group. It's rare to see such a human-like protagonist in Tomato, and the writing is quite good. The main character is so human. Without a little abstract fun, when can the general's kindness be spread to the world?

Evaluation after reading fifty chapters Top grade grain and grass Tomato is a rare low-level magic western fantasy, which is a bit like horseback riding and slashing. The world view structure is good. Various settings seem to be mature at present. There are no obvious poisonous points at present. The character creation is passable but relatively formulaic. From the plot layout, it can still be seen that the author is well prepared to write this book, but the rhythm control needs to be improved. Then Focus more on character creation to create a few outstanding characters. After all, Western fantasy is generally not short. Having an outstanding character in a relatively boring stage (including encounters with him, growth, confrontation, etc.) Will hold up the novel as a whole. It is a good source of potential for family members who like Western fantasy. Give it a try (after-sales service is available, I will read it) When the toxicity becomes too great, I will come back to remind everyone to retreat in time [crazy]) Personal subjective rating of three and a half stars Follow the entry-level bookworm Smoked Fish to take you to read online articles [Blow a kiss]

A book in which the protagonist travels to something similar to the Middle Ages. Although there are swords and magic here, they are very weak. Although there is no large-scale siege of the city, there is a story of the beginning of the Bai family that feels warm and passionate. Generally speaking, the author may not be a good author, but the concept is indeed quite good.

Running business + mercenary group + territory construction, as well as extraordinary training, four different world novel elements, there are still some surprises, but the plot does not advance very quickly. It is recommended to add some plots such as suspense and extraordinary training battles. It seems a bit dull now, and don't cheat at every turn. It is best to be logical and practical.

Very good, much better than those who only brag.

A very good story, but one point was deducted because the war was too sloppy and the one-sided battle was not interesting. What I mean is that the enemy has no wisdom at all. The strategy planned by the author for the protagonist must be successful, and it has nothing to do with the strategy itself. In fact, the author's sense of presence in a good novel is very weak. You keep teasing the protagonist here without explaining it clearly, and you are already going further and further on the road of self-pleasure. You can conquer the gnolls, but you can't conquer them easily. You brought the gnolls into the city in a few days and let them stay near their stronghold. This is beyond the character's ability. It can only work because of the author's pressure.

It's pretty good to watch, but the heroine in the front has a bit of a naughty point. Later, the heroine's design was changed, and the rest is pretty good. Xihuanliangcao, right?

After reading Chapter 150, I feel pretty good. It's not mindless and there's nothing particularly frustrating about it. The logic is generally reasonable. I also read some reviews saying that the male protagonist and the female archer who killed him were a bit toxic, but after reading it, I thought it was totally fine and quite good.

This book is very well written, the overall writing is very smooth, and the plot arrangement is relatively compact. Among the novels that are not systematic nowadays, it is already a masterpiece. The slightest flaw is the heroine. When I first met the heroine, the arrangement was a bit useless, and I almost gave up the book. After a few chapters, it was over. There is basically no emotional drama with the heroine in this article. It is obvious that the author is not good at writing emotional drama. Overall it's pretty good. Praise!

After reading more than 10,000 hours on Tomato, I found that only high-quality works can be found in works with low ratings. The works with high ratings are often mindless and cool articles, with various boring systems, various appalling cheats, or suffocating good luck, etc... This book scored 9.5 Points

It's very pretty and not poisonous.

It feels okay, with some minor flaws, but no serious poisonous points. As for the comment that a piece of black bread only costs two copper coins, and now the protagonist has four or five silver coins (120-150 copper coins) for one hire, it is unreasonable, but it is actually reasonable. Now a pound of rice costs 2 yuan, and a cup of milk tea costs more than ten yuan. Some people who have just graduated have an internship salary of 1,000 to 2,000 yuan, and 3,000 yuan for an internship is considered too much, but there are also people who can earn tens of thousands yuan a month.

It looks good, mainly because it doesn't have any poisonous spots, so it looks better. The girl in the back is not very nice

It is a low-level martial arts fantasy novel about people struggling to become lords. The plot is compact and reasonable. It has the feeling of slowly conquering the country, involving multiple species. It is quite novel. There is no skipping when reading. The language is condensed and there is no nonsense. It is just that there is quite little emotion. The protagonist is like a saint, and there is no sense of substitution. Everything else is good. If you like the Western fantasy novel about farming and conquering the country, you can buy it.

It's beautiful and exciting, and the rise of the protagonist is also very reasonable.

It's very beautiful. It's really very beautiful.

It is a rare Western lord novel. After reading the entire content, the writing style is relatively green, the characters are relatively empty, and the description is too monotonous. However, I still gave it five stars because the author wrote it very carefully.

It's good to read. Although it's not a knight-and-blade novel, I think it's the right way to write a knight-and-blade novel. Those who write about riding and slashing mindless explosives are simply not worth reading.

Not bad, the content is rich and colorful, worth watching

The first few pictures are a bit taken for granted. Maybe so many people are nice to you. The darkness of human nature. The mutual harm at the bottom is the most serious. Overall, this book ranks among the top fantasy lords I found in this app. The rating can be at least 9 points

The pace is not fast, people die in battles, and it develops slowly. It looks pretty so far, it attracts me

Very objective and true, the author is very careful

The book is very interesting to my taste. I am an old bookworm. I have also written a book. Although it is a bit like keeping a running account, I think it is quite interesting.

I haven't seen such an interesting time-travel fantasy in a long time

A good read worth watching.

The male protagonist climbs to the top of the world step by step! From a commoner to a mercenary, a mercenary becomes a lord, a lord becomes a noble, and a noble becomes a king!

After listening to it in one day, I feel that the plot is pretty good for the time being. 👀

I finished reading it in a few days. The best riding and slashing genre. Please update quickly.

Ah ah ah ah ah, very good, very good, where can I update it?