Quick Transmigration: Watch Me Use Talismans to Win

It's not bad, but the rhythm of the story is not well controlled. The Siheyuan is too long, and he is indecisive in doing things. If he wants revenge, he will hit them with a stick and have no room to resist. Otherwise, they will be killed instead of being killed. The heroine still underestimates the enemy. She is obviously on vacation and can accompany her sister-in-law who is expecting childbirth. Why call a child who is not responsible? The heroine forced Qin Ru to be like that. What gave her the confidence that she didn't have the strength to resist? Her negligence almost killed her sister-in-law, nephew, and younger brother. The love between sister-in-law and sister-in-law...

I don't really like the heroine's design. She's already become an immortal and yet she's still so out of touch. No boss look. . . The writing is pretty good, but I don't know what the heroine looks like, and I can't write it clearly! I don't have much sense of immersion →_→ Because I don't know what she looks like, so where does the sense of immersion come from.

It's too ink-stained. You know he's a bad guy, but you still let it go.

It's so ink, isn't the heroine a strong one? I'm afraid of everything. It's really confusing to deal with things.

If the heroine is so good, why doesn't she deserve a clean hero? After watching the first world, there was no male protagonist! We young people like to watch sweet love.

Everything else is pretty good, except that I've read a similar second story and it has too many chapters, so I don't really like it! After all, I like those under 30!

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good!!! Come on!!!!

The writing is okay, except for the Siheyuan section. Fans have read it a lot, and it feels a bit annoying to have so many introductions. The heroine strikes cleanly. It would be nice if the author could streamline it a bit.

Let the heroine help the father below. What kind of rural area is the heroine in?

⊙∀⊙! Forehead