I Pretended to Be Immortal, and Took the Internet by Storm

A good read, worth reading when you're bored. Advantages: The two heroines are well portrayed and have many scenes. It is a pure and bold story that makes it fun to relax and pass the time. Lightning protection was done well in the early stage, and the female protagonists are ccc (ceremonial purity: no ex-boyfriends, ex-husbands or fake boyfriends, no family marriage fiancés, etc.) (Spiritual purity: no one to like, the person you like for the first time is the male protagonist) (physical purity: the male protagonist is the first kiss and first night). Disadvantages: Li is an actor, so it's a bit depressing to act in a romantic drama. Although there are excuses for substitutes or misplacements, people who are on guard will find it annoying. When the audience enters the play, they will feel that the heroine and the actor are a couple, which slightly violates the first one above (ritual purity). Personally, I think this kind of depressing point that has no impact on the subsequent plot development can be avoided by just changing the script. Unless you have a very important plot that depends on this later, but even then I'm not optimistic about it.

After reading it, the overall feeling is pretty good. There are no cliché plots of pretending to be a slap in the face, but it is a bit embarrassing to watch it as a master of pretending to be a martial arts master, so I give it four stars. In addition, the author quickly updated it. How can you sleep well if you don't update it well at your age?

The designs of the two heroines that have appeared so far are all good, and the author's awareness of lightning protection is also higher than the average level. It is just that the main line of the system is a bit difficult to maintain... I estimate that all daily writing will be better than now 🤦

😏 All I can say is to look at it without saying a word.

Give me a five-star support. I think it's okay. Although it's toxic, I can accept it.

The work is good, the male protagonist disguises himself in the system and arranges tasks to unlock goods. We can arrange to pick up all kinds of ladies with vests, and avoid meeting each other with many identities. Each character is described in detail

Overall good! 😘😳

Overall, the writing is okay, but there are too many inner dramas about women. Give it a five-star rating to encourage it.

It's okay, the plot could be faster and the protagonist's identity rewards could be better

It looks good, but it's a bit short. I'll deduct one star. I'll review it later.