I Pretended to Be an Immortal and Became Popular All over the Internet

A good read, worth reading when you're bored. Advantages: The two heroines are well portrayed and have many scenes. It is a pure and bold story that makes it fun to relax and pass the time. Lightning protection was done well in the early stage, and the female protagonists are ccc (ceremonial purity: no ex-boyfriends, ex-husbands or fake boyfriends, no family marriage fiancés, etc.) (Spiritual purity: no one to like, the person you like for the first time is the male protagonist) (physical purity: the male protagonist is the first kiss and first night). Disadvantages: Li is an actor, so it's a bit depressing to act in a romantic drama. Although there are excuses for substitutes or misplacements, people who are on guard will find it annoying. When the audience enters the play, they will feel that the heroine and the actor are a couple, which slightly violates the first one above (ritual purity). Personally, I think this kind of depressing point that has no impact on the subsequent plot development can be avoided by just changing the script. Unless you have a very important plot that depends on this later, but even then I'm not optimistic about it.

After reading it, the overall feeling is pretty good. There are no cliché plots of pretending to be a slap in the face, but it is a bit embarrassing to watch it as a master of pretending to be a martial arts master, so I give it four stars. In addition, the author quickly updated it. How can you sleep well if you don't update it well at your age?

The designs of the two heroines that have appeared so far are all good, and the author's awareness of lightning protection is also higher than the average level. It is just that the main line of the system is a bit difficult to maintain... I estimate that all daily writing will be better than now [face covering]

Give me a five-star support. I think it's okay. Although it's toxic, I can accept it.

[Laughing evilly] All I can say is to look at it without saying a word.

Overall good! [Blowing kiss][shy]

The work is good, the male protagonist disguises himself in the system and arranges tasks to unlock goods. We can arrange to pick up all kinds of ladies with vests, and avoid meeting each other with many identities. Each character is described in detail

Overall, the writing is okay, but there are too many inner dramas about women. Give it a five-star rating to encourage it.

It hurts, I'm jealous

It's not toxic, it's a pretty cool article [laughs]

Not bad, worth watching.

Take the initiative to pop up and give stars to see how long you have watched in total

I have a bold idea, and I advise the author to take care of it. It's a pity that I can't post pictures in the comment area, so I've posted them to the end.

It looks good, but it's a bit short. I'll deduct one star. I'll review it later.

The author writes too slowly. The more than seventy chapters are only enough to listen to for one day, so hurry up and update ten chapters a day.

Okay, okay, pretty good, but too short.

It's okay, the plot could be faster and the protagonist's identity rewards could be better

It's really good. The rating is at least 9.2+. I haven't read such a novel book in a long time.

The plot of this book is full of ups and downs, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the foreshadowing is interlocking! The author's writing is delicate and the scene descriptions are very graphic, making people immersed in it as soon as they read it. Highly recommended!

Very well written, awesome

Good job, author

Good, very good, very nice

Not bad, good, something

The writing is very innovative, keep it up

It's nice to look at, but too short.

Very beautiful. Awesome.

Not bad, not bad, people like to watch it

Love it. It's pretty good.

I like it very much. My favorite type.

I like your novel very much