Beng Tie: Master Is Too Old, Apprentice Is Too Young

Let me start with the conclusion: it's worth watching. There are almost no poisonous spots. As of the latest part on July 4th, the protagonist has become a god, so I don't plan to follow up anymore. Not only because of the finale that can be met and so close at hand, but also because the plot arrangement of ascending to the gods made me lose interest. That's why I didn't give it full marks. Destiny Star God, what a vast and messy throne... The protagonist's humanity after becoming a god, because he has almost got rid of the negative state of nothingness, has even increased compared to before becoming a god, and he can continue to have sex with Jingliu. I lost interest when I saw this. While it's a good ending and I'm happy for the characters, I won't enjoy it. But the quality of the parts before the end is above the standard among Bengtie fans. Besides, I think many people will like and want to see this ending. All in all, worth a look

Lovesick [crying] At the end, the old soldier launched a final charge against his former comrades-in-arms and enemies in the dark. This time, will he still have a victory like the autumn wind sweeping away fallen leaves?

A young man came to Luofu who came from a poor background. He had served in the Yunqi Army and was capable of both civil and military skills. But it is a pity that the master is too old and the apprentice is too young.

The writing is very good, very sweet, the single female protagonist is quiet, the protagonist's IQ is online, and the senses are rich. Through different perspectives, it is so sweet that I shed tears. Because there are few people who have commented, the rating is a bit low. Please keep writing, friends, and the more comments you give, the higher the rating will be! [Laughing out loud]

That night, Jingyuan thought for a long time. He thought of the tens of thousands of soldiers of the Yunqi Army who had sacrificed their lives in the fight against Fengfeng. Could it be that the sacrifices of thousands of soldiers were exchanged for such a Luofu Immortal Boat? He thought of the vast number of immortal species. What should you do? Jingyuan was very unwilling. He made a decision. Even if he falls to pieces, even if he fails, he becomes a demon. He is not afraid either, because he knows how to hunt. On June 16, Jing Yuan came out of the Linyuan Realm and made a shocking statement when convening a meeting of Luofu Level 3 cadres. "Before, I led you to conquer abundance. Now, I will lead you to conquer abundance again."

The character creation was chaotic after Yue Gong's death. Marshal Hua felt like a paper man whose role was to be the protagonist's mouth substitute. In the dialogue with Jingliu, I felt that the role of this character was entirely for the sword. In fact, the character was well portrayed. This is a good thing but a bit one-sided and too sacrificial. I'm not saying that the author's writing is not good. I just feel that this writing method does not seem to be emotionally invested. As a result, I feel nothing at all later. The protagonist plunges into nothingness and forgets everything. There was almost no painting, and I couldn't feel the pain at all. Moreover, seeing that now, the whole world can't stand the talent of Jingliu. Every time there is a new scene, two or three inexplicable people come to say, wow, "Is this really 21 years old?" Or something like a child. The look is a bit uncomfortable, and the insertion is too rigid, which looks a bit like the word "water". The emotional shaping is also a bit stiff, and it is difficult for me to relate to and resonate with it. Well, compared with the high-scoring works I have read before, it lacks some flavor, but writing novels is not easy in itself. Just being able to write it and allow so many people to read it is already amazing. I hope it can improve the accumulation and the description techniques can be richer. This work is very good.

Up to Chapter 60, there are no uncomfortable poisonous points. Overall, it is a very good book. I feel that the score should be 9.3 Or higher (but the Tomato score is uncertain). I hope it can maintain it.

It's so shameful, so so shameless! The swift knife makes my brain spin, After reading it, I suddenly realized that this was a knife. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა

Laughing to death... Knife to death... Hehehe... Hahahahahahahahahahahahaha!

I watched the main character lose his memory and meet Jingliu from the beginning in one breath. It was really fun for me to read. If I had read this book a day earlier, I would not have enjoyed it as much as I did today. After all, I only got the encounter today [Start]

The writing is very good, very good. I came in and took a look when I was bored. When I looked at the catalog, I thought it was just about falling in love. But as I continued reading, it was really touching and brought a lot of emotions into it. In short, it was very well written. I highly recommend reading it.

Yes, I originally wanted to watch the heroine of Kage-ryu, but I feel that the Taifu, Dragon Master, General, and Sword Head written by the author are really good. After watching the ending of Xian Ai, I have a feeling of "happy reunion over a pot of wine. Many things in ancient and modern times are all made up of jokes." Maybe it is because I prefer to take it from this perspective. The last time I had this mentality was the second time I read Yang Shen's part about Linjiang Xian about those things in the Ming Dynasty.

It's so beautiful, almost better than most other fics

The character design is passable, there is no problem (maybe In terms of writing, some parts are not smooth and a bit disjointed; some transitions are stiff and lack polish; the rhythm is not very good from my senses. To be honest, there is nothing we can do about combat power. After all, the official version is not clear, but it is a pity that the author did not make it clear either. Average technique The whole book is average, Tomato is average

The book is a good book, I can vouch for this. The settings of Jian Kui and Void Fate are very good, but after all, it is a book written by a cook. Other character chefs or non-cooks may read this book with some surprises, but this does not matter. The most important thing is that the settings are not perfect, such as the division of combat power. If it is handled well, the masterpiece should be stable. Also, there is no knife in this book, which is very sweet😋

It's quite healthy, a single female protagonist, a sweet daily life, no need to look at the crazy people in the comment section, it's not scary at all, it's really sweet to me [laughs]

The main Xianzhou characters are all delicately portrayed, the plot is half sugary and half sharp, a little difficult to understand, and the ending is a bit brain-burning. After the protagonist is promoted to Star God, the writing style changes to the "trying to save the world but cannot avoid pain and sacrifice" type? Knives are intensive. The sweet daily story in the first half of the plot is well written, with not too many battles and not too little. It is recommended to read the chapter about becoming a god. After reading the second half, I felt a bit depressing and sad after reading it, but readers want to see the real he, you know? There is no need to write in such depth. The summary is very nice! 🥰

Originally I came in because of the testimonials, and the writing was pretty good. The key is that the title is so eye-catching and attracted many special people, so the popularity of this book is inextricably linked to the title [laughing]

Howling book. The writing and plot are both very good. There is a strong sense of substitution.

It's good to watch. I felt sad all the way through it because my imagination is so incredible. I can imagine the plot after reading just one chapter. All I could think about was the knife plot [face covering]. I need to read the Invincible novel to calm it down. Overall, it's highly recommended.

What should I say? It's a single-female main story. The initial process of getting along is a little confusing, but overall it's okay. The ending of the protagonist and the four friends is pretty good. It's a step-by-step process with a hint of sadness. But after they are all resurrected, there's nothing to watch. It's a bit too childish. Overall, it's okay.

The author has created the characters very well, and his emotions can be revealed between the lines. It must be a masterpiece, come on

Come on, I'll give it five stars after reading a few chapters. If it's not good, I'll review it, and if it's good, I'll review it. My current evaluation is that the characters are full of character and the plot is not toxic. You can continue reading even if you stay up late and feel bad. It's a bit interesting, a single female protagonist, slightly invincible, sweet and sharp at the same time, but a knife is not a knife. It's just that the protagonist is a little too selfish, not even considering the idea of ​​​​Jingliu being the same as his family, saying that everything is for her. . . In fact, he didn't want to spend more time with her before he died. Although the protagonist came back to life later, the time in between was too long and it made the protagonist... Well, too lazy to complain. But overall, I think it's a small poison.

It's good to read. If the time had been moved forward a little earlier, this book would have been very popular. The chapters are a bit short now, and there is a risk of them being broken.

The only winner in this book: Dan Shuang. Also, I don't understand why I'm asking. I've repeatedly emphasized that Yue Gong is beautiful and she's not the heroine, so I don't need to say more.

The content is particularly exciting. Aha likes it very much [smile][smile][smile]

The quality of this work is really top-notch, and the writing is very good [Chigua]

It's good-looking. I like this kind of thing. I'm a person who doesn't like knives. I also like this book about knives. I pity him for losing his companions and feel sorry for him that he has to go on another expedition at the end of his life. It's good-looking!

The innovation is good, although there are no new maps, but the self-created characters are really good, and the character portrayal is amazing. But in the middle period, I can't stand the main plot. Not counting the main plot, the daily routine is just a mess. Although the author later said that the combat power has collapsed, can't you just kill it with force? Although it will become a major poisonous point, it is better than Shiba in dozens of chapters, but it will be much better if there is a main line later. Generally speaking, high → stone → high is suitable for fast brushing with one eye and ten lines.

5 Stars, good health, non-toxic, no knife, single female protagonist, little fun, smooth plot, no digging holes, good emotional and friendship lines, more of a daily good and good story