Urban Mecha Girls: I'm a Genius Mecha Pilot, You Know!

Overall it looks pretty good^ω^ There is a bit of a shadow of "My Machine Girls Are World Class", but not too much. The author is quite good at describing battle scenes and has a strong visual sense. The plot level is relatively coherent. I read it as a whole and there are no poisonous points. The golden finger is just an information war (although it is also very important). As for the comment that I only saw the numerical values but not the operations in the comment area, I did not find this type of phenomenon. I even said that I showed excellent operation level from the first battle. According to my understanding, the overall rhythm is daily battles and daily battles. In this way, some small episodes are interspersed with the daily routine. There is nothing wrong with cutting into the battle after enough preparation. However, it is well written and deserves praise for keeping it. In the follow-up, more excellent plots should be interspersed to make the readers less boring, or to change this rhythm or something. Relatively speaking, , the author's follow-up content is not that difficult to guess, but it is not that easy to guess, and there is still a sense of surprise. (For example, for example, the first game of this professional player game is narrowly defeated. The traditional point is to win the first game, lose the second game, and win the third game to the extreme point. The novelty is to win two games. The author's treatment is obviously the second type, and it seems to have started to explode. I didn't expect this, which is quite interesting.) The author is quite attentive to some details in the settings. For example, don't think this little setting is useless about the difference between normal people and robot girls. It will make readers feel deeply involved, or form a hint. Of course, some settings are also very awesome. I'm not a professional storyteller, so I can't say clearly what the shortcomings are. But what I can clearly say now is that the content is too small. Over 60 chapters, the progress is neither too much nor too much, but it's not enough to read, and I think it's too long before chapter 120. All the protagonists should appear once, and then show up or join, especially those corresponding to the protagonists. Before Chapter 120 of the contracted Ji Niang, all the ones that should appear should appear, or should be contracted, otherwise there will be no sense of sharing the joys and sorrows when they grow up. Finally, there are some small personal questions of mine: I found that this book has a label with multiple heroines. The follow-up is that there is one of each of the three models, right? I'm also curious about whether this book has a romantic line? Also, does the author have any plans to expand the worldview? If so, where should it be expanded, as well as the origin of the machine girl, and other setting issues? @ Return to Hong Kong black swan Unknowingly, it has been more than a year, and I have also stepped into the "sinkhole" of writing a book. It's really not easy to write a book with a million words.

It can only be said that his rating has lowered his upper limit. Brothers, I have watched countless Ji Niang and it is the most enjoyable to watch. It also has no "slots", whether it is the protagonist's social status or the villain's bad points, and the plot brings richness. The clarity brought by the writing skills and the thrilling feeling of the crowd's reaction under the strokes. According to the evaluation, this book does not contain "words that readers cannot understand" and "professional jargon". (Note: This is purely a personal complaint after reading the first two books.) There are also two extremely good machine girl novels. Although the villains there are bad, they are not annoying and are just plain bad (╬▔Van▔). The villains here are so bad that there is no need to "whitewash and sympathize" from the perspective of the people in the drama. In my opinion, the bad guys should receive the punishment they deserve (╬⁽⁽ ⁰ ⁾⁾Д ⁽⁽ ⁰ ⁾⁾), she did so many inhuman things, such as Qin Bazhao, she should have been allowed to die when the car rolled over and she was not rescued in time (艹三艹), giving readers a sense of relief. Overall: this book is still extremely good. It's worth sitting down and reading this review, and please give a rating to the author who works so hard. [And my message: After working so hard to promote, I just hope you can listen to my suggestions for the follow-up plot]

@ Swan reminds me of the heavily armored warrior Ji who was officially discontinued last year 👍. The author can look for inspiration. Many of the mechas in it are quite handsome.

It's definitely not comparable to Penguin's World-Class Robot Girls, but it's a book that's good at killing time. The plot is classic but has the author's own ideas. Each robot girl has its own characteristics. The most impressive one is the protagonist's second robot girl (no spoilers) Summary: If you have nothing to do, you can read the machine girl's article

In the setting: Senior mecha analyst. In fact: the whiteboard who just traveled through time knows nothing about mecha operation. But the plot is quite enjoyable.

Five stars to look forward to. First of all, I really like this series and am planning to write a book, but it won't be about human battles. Secondly, by looking at what the author writes, you can roughly tell what games he plays. After all, only love can lead to achievement and creative desire. Now I can see that the games he plays are probably CSGO, Overwatch, Unlimited Machine, Dark Zone Breakout, Three Color Painting Love, and his and her love. I also play these, it's fun, I love playing, and I want to play. Finally, the rhythm is pretty good. When are you going to complete the core contract with Hui Hui? Speaking of the current character and title, I think of Suqing. Suqing Huihui is also very good, and Suqing is also very good-looking. And are you considering a female human protagonist or a pure robot heroine? And the most important point, the most important point, the most important point! If this book becomes popular in the future, and the current inspiration is finished, the world view will be forcibly expanded. Please pave the way a little more. Don't still fencing with humans today🤺, but tomorrow we will talk about fencing at the bottom of humanity🤺 just to select the earth's warriors to fight aliens. I'm not saying that you can't write like this, but directly criticizing without paving the way will affect the viewing experience. Fast forward to Cao Pi (cross out) Hoho, apex, jojo, payday, I think we should be able to chat. However, I think it is best to add a few soul-based weapons for melee characters. You may not play soul-based weapons, otherwise you would already have a wet scythe (your sun has set) and this left bow b roof. The battle commentary is very detailed and the density of the plot is relatively moderate.

They are all comparing themselves to Penguins, but objectively speaking. In fact, most of them are not on the same track, and both sides have different styles of writing and different opinions. But I think this book is completely inferior to him. The plot arrangement is getting better and better, and the character design and shaping are quite good. And the continuous unfolding of the worldview is a feast for the eyes. It is true that this book has many flaws, but overall it outweighs its flaws. If it is divided into volumes, in fact, after the establishment of Dawn in the early stage, the book has begun to go on the right track. The Hellbound chapter is completely pushed to its climax. It's a pity that the emotional portrayal of the characters is not nuanced. But on the other hand, it also shows that there are still many points that can be improved. Looking forward to more exciting content in the future.

The game is interspersed with daily life, and it is not an article based on the saturation principle (let the protagonist do the main plot and branch plots all the time), but sometimes it is uncomfortable to read, but the desire to read further is not very great, and it will not be like the kind of chapter of Wadasi, Oh Nei.

It's very beautiful, and it reminds me of "my deceased friend"~(￣▽￣~)~ Keep up the good work! Don't be like a certain goose and die in the middle (ง •̀_•́)ง

It is a very powerful article about aircraft warfare. The author's writing style is very good, the description of combat is very powerful, and daily life is very warm. Moreover, the article also has a large number of original pictures by the author. It can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into this work. The slight drawback is that some characters are not deep enough and lack memory points that can make people's impressions. However, it can be regarded as a top novel in Tomato. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Blow kiss]