Why Don't the Quick-Travel Villains Follow the Script?

It's good to watch, but the author liked it so much that I felt like I was going to die [laughs]. I was so flustered, so thin-skinned, so happy... I could reduce the amount of death appropriately. Maybe it's because Long Aotian has played too many roles. Sometimes his words have a bit of an ancient hegemonic feel, and his descriptions are also a bit similar. But it's ok, not greasy.

It's still pretty good to watch, focusing on Shuangjie 1v1, but sometimes the adjectives remind me of previous overbearing president novels (maybe Long Aotian played too many roles before [smirking] In fact, it's still a bit fun? Bushi) It can be reduced appropriately [give heart] to two people We could have gotten together earlier. I feel like the author might have wanted to write about the ambiguous pull between the two people, but it was a little late to get together in the last few chapters (personal opinion). Overall, it was sweet, and there was nothing sadistic about it (for me). It would be good to read it as a little sweet article [already planted] Okay, I admit that I am a bitch, and I especially like the plot of doing something after a misunderstanding, and then resolving the misunderstanding. I enjoyed watching it [like] and thought about it again. The author gives it a lot of credit [love]

(The following content contains spoilers) I still can't accept that Yu Qingchen was handled lightly. After looking at the historical background of the world, I learned that O has no human rights and that he is not a good person. As a star thief, he is also an enemy of the Federation. But even so, his children still received a high level of education. He and his children I also enjoy the benefits that high positions bring to them. I know that being in power will satisfy me that I can obtain higher resources, but I still can't accept that his love for his children is based on the bones of others. In this world where hierarchy is supreme, in order to let his children obtain higher status. He went out to mutilate other people's bodies. He had no guilt or regret. Perhaps in his eyes, these people were not human beings, but just tools and supplies to pave the way for his son. It was terrible. The people who were tortured inside may not have been willing. Maybe he could not be blamed only. The higher-ups must have been involved. After all, This society is sick, and Gong let him go because of his suffering. I can only say that he is not a good person, and Gong is not a good person either. I am afraid because I do not have capital. At the same time, my three views do not allow me to agree. I see unfairness, but I feel it is very realistic. I still cannot sympathize with capitalists.

In fact, everything is fine, but I like to use exclamation points too much. There are many places where exclamation points are used, which is like a "perfunctory tone", which is very funny. Moreover, some places are clearly dialogues, but they must be expressed in writing, not written language, but normal people would not speak like that, which affects the reading experience. You can consider adjusting the word order to make the dialogue appear more natural.

I quite like it. New book, very few people are reading it. There are also few chapters, looking forward to updates (*^o^*)

Although I have only read a little bit, I think it is very interesting and I want to give the author five stars. Keep up this update pace. I really like watching it. Don't be like other authors. I stopped writing halfway through. I would really appreciate it. I really like this one.

It's super beautiful, the writing is very good, I enjoyed reading it [shy] Come on, the author, hey [blowing kiss]

Nice looking, I quite like it

It's good and beautiful, the protagonist shows his feelings and they are together in the end [shy][like]

The writing is very good, thank you to the author. - ̗̀(๑ᵔ⌔ᵔ๑)

I don't know why there isn't enough tension in the emotional line of the second world. It always gives me a feeling that it's not quite there yet. The plot is quite complete. Prefer the first world

Very nice (forgive me for being illiterate, I can't think of any beautiful sentences [face covering])

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Come on, madam, take good care of you

I really like it, I hope it doesn't fall apart later

It's so beautiful and beautiful (⑅︎ ॣ•͈૦•͈ ॣ)꒳ᵒ꒳ᵎᵎᵎThe author must write well^0^

True and objective, with clear structure and rich content

Sweet love, the protagonist Shou Lin Yuan likes to think about things, and sometimes does unexpected things, which is very, very okay

[Immortal Chapter] [Fate Line] Read

It looks good, but it's too long [face covering]

I just started watching it. I personally think the characters are full and spiritual, which is the type I like to watch. Come on [Blow a kiss]

So cool. . . This is the best quick-travel main attack article I have ever read! ! ! (^///^)