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Great, "There is definitely something wrong with this world" has finally been reset. I really like this one. Let me see Shen Gong, Demon King, Mu Yue, Yixue, and Jasmine Kouya! ! ! [Cry]

The idea is very clever, when you see the first two sentences, pay attention! You have entered the world in the novel [laughing] Steady performance, Lao Deng, I think the achievement of this book will not be lower than "Senior" [Blowing a kiss] Lao Deng, is it okay to write 10,000 words a day? The book is really beautiful [blowing kiss]

It's so good-looking. I got it from my senior sister's book and became a fan.

The setting is very novel and interesting. I didn't expect that the author could write such a novel novel in addition to sweet stories. I hope it can have the same good results as "Heartbeat Engine"

From what we can tell so far, the plot should be the story of Mu Yue (another book by the author), his son and Jasmine. The strangeness is caused by Mu Yue fighting with others. As for Li Mu's emotions, he should inherit Mu Yixue. The subject matter is indeed good. I hope the content will not be too overwhelming and strive to achieve good results like "Heartbeat Engine"

I hope that this book, like the Renaissance, is both a rebirth of waste and a rebirth of the author's ideas. Just like the Renaissance led the ideological trend for hundreds of years after the 15th century, it will dominate Tomato and stand out!

This book is really good To be honest, the plot direction was unexpected. I thought the first weird thing was the main plot line, but later it was reversed many times. The author's grasp of the plot structure is very subtle. To be honest, such concise titles are really rare in today's online literature world. This also shows that when the author is famous enough, he does not need a long list of fancy titles to attract traffic. This book does have great potential and its logic is very self-consistent, which is something that many books of the same type do not possess. In the end, it was a pity that Leng Xinran at the beginning did not become the heroine.

A very novel plot, very good, and there is nothing illogical about it

Lao Deng's work should be based on the fusion of reality and "weirdness". The plot structure is tight and has no loopholes. The plot detonates multiple reversals in the progression. Anyway, it was really enjoyable for me to watch. The protagonist is really unsolvable and can be called a bug in the world. Secondly, the subject matter of the novel is novel and brain-burning. Those who read mindless and enjoyable articles and like to comment blindly can be dismissed. The environment and atmosphere are well created. Coupled with the BGM, it gives a full sense of immersion. The character creation is also very good and it seems to be non-toxic now.

I also took a look and found that the overall style is suspenseful and sci-fi. What about Li Mu? Many people in the comment area said it should be Mu Yue's son. I hope Lao Deng won't use his IQ at that time to write this. I have one other request! ! ! ! Don't be too sharp (ﾉД`) The part about Mu Yue gave me a rough knife

This book is really well written [laughs]. The author is very good at writing about emotions, and the emotional development between Li Mu and Jasmine will be very sweet. The author made a mistake once before, but now that he has experience, his writing is indeed better. This book is very imaginative, and some parts are very brain-burning, but you can understand it if you read it carefully. In addition, combined with the analysis of the author's previous books, the author's use of related words in causal relationships is not very appropriate, which may be difficult to understand and needs to be understood in conjunction with the article. To summarize, this book requires you to calm down and read it for better results. I hope the author will achieve great results again, keep going [laughs]

Looking at the group portraits at the moment, I think it's very interesting. The specific plot will have to wait until all the protagonists appear later. This book continues a small part of the Magic Age content (of course, I haven't read it, which will not affect the overall reading). It is probably related to the relationship between the national sister and the heartbeat engine. Occasionally there will be guest appearances, and I am looking forward to Mu Yixue. Anyway, the plot is quite unique. I really didn't expect to use the novel world as a medium to travel. I don't know if you have read Charlotte, but I think it is particularly similar. Including Li Mu's ability to disable people's abilities is somewhat similar to Youyu's Plunder. There are too few plots at the moment and I have to wait for the subsequent plots (Purely my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it)

Lao Deng was so imaginative this time, it made me very brain-burning and very innovative.

It's pretty cool, but every time the official asks for the protagonist's help, they give him hundreds of dollars and make the protagonist risk his life. This is so annoying to me. The point is that the protagonist accepted it gratefully, but I really couldn't accept it.

Lao Deng has a bit of imagination, although there are obviously traces of settings from other books, but it's pretty good [Adoration]

This book is indeed okay. Although I have not read Lao Deng's book about the magical world, I have learned some of the plot. In short, I hope Lao Deng can write well, and I also wish Lao Deng and the fairy senior sister happiness [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The angle is novel. When you read the beginning of this novel, you have already seen the first suspense. The writing method is actually similar to the heartbeat engine. It can make people's eyes bright and at the same time, they will like the ordinary daily life described by the author. The climax has not yet come, but it is just various foreshadowing. I hope the author can bring more surprises.

There is no doubt about the quality of Lao Deng's sequel. The writing is sophisticated and I won't comment on the plot, but I personally think it's pretty good. The setting is novel, and the protagonists and supporting characters are well created. It inherits the advantage of the school beauty that each character has its own distinctive characteristics. It's just that I've only read 3 of Lao Deng's books, and not the rest of National Sister, so I'm not sure about the characters in that book. In addition, Lao Deng's two chapters a day are not enough, please update soon! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I feel that Lao Deng's book this time introduces this strange world investigation team in the real world through the first story. Li Shu joins in as the protagonist and solves problems in various weird stories. Then the villain uses his mind to control various people to cause trouble. The protagonist is immune to other people's abilities and has life-saving skills given by Jasmine. He is invincible in the early stage, but later on, the shady story will definitely lead to the protagonist and they will also target the protagonist, and finally reveal the truth about the annihilation of the family (only guessing that the dog head will save his life) Finally, I would like to mention that although this work and Lao Deng's Magical World belong to the same world view, the content is different. Book friends who have read the previous work, please do not read the previous work. Lao Deng who has not read it has also taken the book off the shelf and read it. Just read this new story as a new book! Don't mess with this work [blowing kiss] Finally, Laodeng, come on, it's good to watch and update quickly! @Every arm woo woo

The writing is still okay, it can be regarded as a semi-infinite stream. Lao Deng's description of the plot is still great, and the setting is novel enough. I give Lao Deng a five-star rating as a token of encouragement.

This book by Lao Deng is very intelligent. It gives me a headache and is not suitable for me to watch. But excellent. Support Lao Deng! ? ? ? ? !

It feels like I did when I watched Zhan Shen, I love it, I love it [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Very good. I've read too many romance novels so I'll wash my eyes with this one. But I'll be particularly looking forward to it if it can be animated one day. Obviously it looks better as you go to the back. Why is the score so low [crying]

Lao Deng Xin writes well, I like this setting, it's very exciting [laughing]

The characters are excellent, and the writing has a lot of room for improvement. If you maintain the level of character design, expand the content, improve the writing style, and don't write like a running account, it will be a good work. Bonus points for character, minus points for writing. Overall 7-points

Lao Deng's writing is very good, which proves the saying: "I have been writing a book for two and a half years, and I am still a newbie when I come back."

Lao Deng has a lot of imagination, it's so beautiful, please update it quickly [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

I am very optimistic about this novel. I will write a long review after I finish the college entrance examination [Like] [Like] When I read a group portrait for the first time, I didn't feel as bored as I imagined. I originally thought that assigning the focus of the protagonist to the supporting characters would result in the whole story having no backbone, but the fact is exactly the opposite. Every character is very three-dimensional and vivid, and I can also feel the growth of the protagonist little by little. The narrative method is a bit like the combination of a short story and a main plot. There are small characters that are deeply rooted in the hearts of the people depicted in each story unit, and the main plot is buried in it. So far, the protagonist group has been basically formed, but Jasmine's background and origins have not been given. To be honest, this makes this character feel incompatible with other characters and even this novel in my opinion. However, the story framework has been set up, and I look forward to Jasmine's wonderful performance in the next plot. Finally, it should be due to my personal hobby. I prefer tragic literature, so I feel that this skill is a bit too little. As the saying goes, "If you give up, you will get something." In my opinion, sometimes letting 3.4 Important characters receive box lunches will make the whole work more attractive. And I personally feel that even if the protagonist has the aura blessing of "weird killer", he is still a little weak in the plot. It feels that the protagonist is always being dragged along and has no initiative. Maybe cutting off one or two characters will play a good role. (I like the character Jiang Nanshu very much. If you want to use a knife, can you please stop stabbing her? Please)

The book written by Lao Deng must be supported for the sake of my senior sister! ! !

Support Laodeng's new book, with seventeen chapters in a row, constantly traveling through various different weird worlds, fighting monsters, leveling up, and then constantly getting to know the weirdness itself. Lao Mu and Jasmine should be the continuation of Mu Yue Qingxue's book, but the world is structured in a new world