Immortal, I Am a Late Bloomer!

I have read chapter fifty-six so far, and overall it is good. The protagonist practices silently on the outside and observes the situation and basically watches from the sidelines. He will not get into trouble because of the little friendship that is almost non-existent.

Yes, there are no big mistakes, but I feel that the plot has a sense of déjà vu. Sometimes I can guess the subsequent development. There should be many similar plots, but I have rarely seen this kind of plot, and it is still very fresh. The biggest problem is the two cheats of this book. I think the effect and the actual solution are very big. I have read a lot of immortality articles. They have a very clear line between "immortality" and "immortality". The protagonist is only immortal, not immortal. The second golden finger will be rewarded if you put in the effort, but you won't make progress when you reach the bottleneck. In the final analysis, it is just practice to increase proficiency. Once it is full, it will be gone. When I clicked in, I thought that the protagonist could continue to improve with a mediocre skill and become a martial artist. But it seems that practicing martial arts is not as good as cultivating immortality, so the map needs to be changed. In general, the plot is quite old-fashioned, and the effect of Golden Finger is like "a seller's show and a buyer's show". If you like reading martial arts and immortality novels, you can read it. It is a good book to explain the book shortage.

Not just Tomato, this book is definitely one of the best among longevity novels. The plot is not limited to the protagonist, but the entire world, including the emperor, the general, the best martial artist, Ming Xuankong, the best counselor in the world, and the crown prince. Everyone in between has their own wisdom, ability and unique charm. In the end, because of the old age and weakness, the emperor was worried that the crown prince and the general would seek power and usurp the throne, so Hao Zhenjun, the best martial artist, had to get rid of them and him. The general's younger brother Ming Xuankong and the soldiers under their command, however, Ming Xuankong did not die. Instead, he gained a vitality to temporarily maintain his vitality and take revenge. He became known as the Master of Divine Machinery, interfered with the demon sect, and controlled the right path. The true heir of the sect attacked Zhenjun Hao, and he passed away. However, he was not an easy person. He pretended to be a true heir of the sect and secretly learned the martial arts that only the master could learn. He was kicked out of the sect and asked to go undercover to work under Master Shenji. The various changes and wonderful contents in it cannot be explained in a few words. The author truly explains the undercurrents and clearly describes the origins and relationships of the characters. It is not comparable to those authors who can only tremble and tremble to force out a few chapters of cliched plots.

I think this book is promising so far. The protagonist is always ready to run away. I'm looking forward to seeing how the next few foreshadowings will be written.

Yes, in my opinion, it suits my taste well. It can reach about 9.3, And it is not a problem to go up to 9.5. The protagonist is neither invincible nor invincible to the world, nor does he practice slowly due to immortality. It is hooky. This is the real group portrait novel. The protagonist is always in it, but it can reflect the personality charm of the supporting characters, rather than the kind of romance novel or simply the kind where the protagonist is beautiful and invisible. The ending surprised me. In my opinion, it is not a bad ending. If the pursuit of immortality is not well written, it will be a bad ending.

It's very exciting, the writing is sophisticated, and the description of martial arts is first-rate. I hope the cultivators in the future will not collapse. Too many great writers fail at this point. It is suggested that Xiuxian can imitate Shushan, imitate the traditional writing method, or Chen Dong's writing method, or the writing method of Pili Puppet Opera,...

Is Zhu Xiake a boy or a girl? ""Zhu Xiake is not only beautiful, but also smart as ice and snow," Master Shenji smiled softly. "So in order to break the shadow in his heart, he tried to plot against Zhu Xiake, but failed. At the same time, he accidentally killed Zhu Xiake's wife." So is Zhu Xiake a boy or a girl? ? ?

I have read so many martial arts movies on Tomato, but they all have "wu" but no "xia", or their knights are just superficial "pseudo-xia". This is Tomato's first novel that really made me feel like a "xiaxia". There is no talk of universal righteousness, nor is there any clichéd savior plot. Instead, there are just vivid and vivid people who carry out their own way and stick to righteousness in the face of fate's choices. The protagonist is more like a witness. The protagonist traveled through time just to witness a vivid martial arts world and a heart-wrenching legend. They are extreme, they are righteous, and they do anything to practice their own way. Each of them is the protagonist of their own life. This is a real martial arts novel that lacks a bit of chivalry.

The novel begins to lay out the plot. Although the protagonist is mediocre in talent, he has the cheats of a time traveler. He is scheming and sophisticated. He is getting more and more exciting. I look forward to the performance in the next chapters. I am optimistic about you and work hard [like][like][like]

Zhu Xiake is also a person, worthy of the name of Tianjun, it is a pity

It's okay. I don't have the same feeling as reading the Immortal Essay at the moment.

I looked at dozens of pictures and realized they were group portraits. It's pretty good, it's a group portrait so the pace will be slower. And the advantage is that the protagonist is not a mess, which is good. I hope the author won't stop updating it, it's a good book. You should write as well as you do now, don't collapse🥺

Some people are selfless, some people are affectionate and sincere The only injustice It's hard to say that the protagonist and Sanshan are moved by the blood and tears of their fathers. It can also be regarded as a dialectic of cultivating kindness and benevolence. The protagonist stands in a strong position and can take care of both. He breaks ties with the sect and creates a republic for the world.

I like it very much. I feel sorry for the senior sister. It's so good. It's really better than Alexander.

It's very good. It has a richer storyline than the usual early stage stories of longevity novels, and it's also well written, without any poisonous points.

Yes, but it's too little. Can you please add more? Didn't you save the manuscript before? [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

This book is indeed in line with the Gou Dao Immortality Stream. You will never take risks when your cultivation level is low, unlike some people who say that the mastermind behind immortality still takes risks. The protagonist of this book has left the sect twice so far, and spent the rest of the time cultivating in the sect. Although there are some minor flaws, they are insignificant and I personally like it.

The writing is good. The protagonist has a strong sense of crisis, is bold and careful, and will take the initiative to plan ways to protect himself. The author has probably written about machinations, and the strategies in it are well designed and eye-catching.

Can the author arrange a book for the protagonist that consumes his lifespan and increases his internal strength? It's cool to see it this way

The protagonist is immortal and humane, but there may be knives later

I can give Xiaoyou a full score of 8 out of 10. It doesn't have any bad points at the moment, but it doesn't have much to watch either. Who is the protagonist of 6 points in general?

The writing is good, but when will I start cultivating immortality? What a pity, why did I cut it?

Not bad, not bad. It's still very good to maintain. I hope it won't collapse later.

Okay, okay, at the beginning of martial arts, you should be honest and don't cause trouble. There is no such thing as nonsense.

It's more like a martial arts novel with more group portraits, not a cult of immortality, but it's very well written. The martial arts volume is just finished, but I really want to see the rest of the story.

This should be considered a martial arts chapter! The extra point is the golden finger, which is pretty good! Really looking forward to the cultivation chapter! I'm still afraid of those bad street scenes! If you continue to write about cultivating immortals in the style of martial arts novels, no one has tried it, or it has failed. Anyway, I have never seen it.

A short and concise fairy tale of martial arts! The author's writing is very good! 👍🏻 The plot is not new, but it feels classic rather than cliche! There's nothing wrong with it except that it's too short~ Even if it's condensed, it's all essence [rolls eyes]

It's very interesting. The protagonist is indeed the kind of immortal Gou. It feels like the story is written from the perspective of a bystander. The supporting characters are also flesh-and-blood. I feel that they are more outstanding than the protagonist. It just ended suddenly after watching it. Although it is also very complete, I still want to ask when the next one will be released.

Good, good, good, good, good, good

Yes, it's just that the ending is too abrupt, but it doesn't matter if I write about it later, it's just a repeat.