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Reader comments
Overall, it's okay, but I get hurt every time. Secondly, I can't stand selling furniture, air conditioners, etc. In ancient times. I think there are many ways to make money, but it can't be buying furniture, because in ancient times, there was no electricity. It feels a bit weird to suddenly buy furniture. Other than that, everything else is very nice.
I think it's pretty good-looking, but I think there are a few bugs in many places. You could say that the male protagonist is just a soldier who traveled through time, and his business ability is not very strong. However, I think it's a bit unrealistic to write his ability as very strong and then forcibly weaken it. There's another thing about selling furniture that I also think is a little strange, but you can treat him as a personal device. Come on.
I'm following it again now, and I still think it's very beautiful.
I've finished chasing it for the third time. What should I say? Thank you to the author for your hard work.
It feels like Lin Shuang's two fathers both traveled through time. Didn't it say that one of Lin Shuang's father's names was Situ Yao and one of the leaders in the interstellar world was from him? The other father was so open-minded and not like people of this era at all, and Lin Shuang also had pheromones.
Author: Will they ever travel back in time? , Lin Shuang's two fathers died here, did they go back? , I don't want them to be here, it's so frustrating @Bufu
It's not a cool article, it doesn't cut the root of the problem, but it's a sweet article.
Teacher, your writing is not bad. I really like it. Will the teacher update it? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Nice story is very attractive
Very nice, highly recommended
Not bad, just for passing the book shortage. [Laughing and crying]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
What I like to see is how powerful the protagonist is. The more powerful the protagonist is, the more dissatisfied the villagers are. The people who bully the protagonist's little brother are getting more and more frustrated. It's so miserable for the little brother to be bullied. The whole story is heartbreaking.
Overall, it's okay, but I get hurt every time. Secondly, I can't stand selling furniture, air conditioners, etc. In ancient times. I think there are many ways to make money, but it can't be buying furniture, because in ancient times, there was no electricity. It feels a bit weird to suddenly buy furniture. Other than that, everything else is very nice.
I think it's pretty good-looking, but I think there are a few bugs in many places. You could say that the male protagonist is just a soldier who traveled through time, and his business ability is not very strong. However, I think it's a bit unrealistic to write his ability as very strong and then forcibly weaken it. There's another thing about selling furniture that I also think is a little strange, but you can treat him as a personal device. Come on. I'm following it again now, and I still think it's very beautiful. I've finished chasing it for the third time. What should I say? Thank you to the author for your hard work.
It feels like Lin Shuang's two fathers both traveled through time. Didn't it say that one of Lin Shuang's father's names was Situ Yao and one of the leaders in the interstellar world was from him? The other father was so open-minded and not like people of this era at all, and Lin Shuang also had pheromones. Author: Will they ever travel back in time? , Lin Shuang's two fathers died here, did they go back? , I don't want them to be here, it's so frustrating @Bufu
It's not a cool article, it doesn't cut the root of the problem, but it's a sweet article.
Teacher, your writing is not bad. I really like it. Will the teacher update it? [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
Nice story is very attractive
Very nice, highly recommended
Not bad, just for passing the book shortage. [Laughing and crying]
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
What I like to see is how powerful the protagonist is. The more powerful the protagonist is, the more dissatisfied the villagers are. The people who bully the protagonist's little brother are getting more and more frustrated. It's so miserable for the little brother to be bullied. The whole story is heartbreaking.
Why is Chapter 4 still under review?