Tianlong: [Tiekou Shenjuan]'s Secret Hegemony

When I started to create "I am a magic stick in Tianlong", I hoped to use the contrasting sense of "an old social animal time travel" to collide with the world of Tianlong. The protagonist is not an invincible strongman with a golden finger, but with the wisdom of workplace survival and the transparency of a middle-aged man, he deals with the plot of the original work as a "magic stick". He will be touched by Xiao Feng's pride, and will also struggle due to the dangers of the world. He will try to use modern thinking to survive in the world of martial arts. In the process, he will have both ridiculous misunderstandings and deep thoughts on the chivalrous spirit. The story tries its best to retain the heaviness of Tianlong's original work and incorporates new perspectives into classic scenes. However, due to limitations of writing power, there is still room for polishing the smoothness of some character interactions and the rhythm of the plot. I hope this book can bring some fresh reading pleasure to readers who like Tianlong.

The description technique of this novel is quite good, and the timeline is relatively reasonable! It's very interesting and enjoyable, especially the emotional issues between men and women are described more delicately! I'll give you an 8 out of 10 points! Come on😊

"I am a magic stick in Tianlong" is so surprising! The plot cleverly combines martial arts and humor. The protagonist Ding Jie enters the world of Tianlong as a magic stick, and takes on Duan Yu, a son of luck, and Yue Laosan, a man with many evil deeds. Although it lacks the grandeur of the martial arts scenes, the novel has frequent golden sentences and is logically consistent. The characters are vivid and distinctive, and the details and foreshadowing are wonderful. It was quite enjoyable to read so much in one go, and it deserves five stars!

I had a dream before, and someone called me the author. Now this sentence appears in my comments, and I think it's quite magical. So should I be thankful that my dream has come true? I know that novel writing is a difficult process, and it is also difficult to become famous, but I hope to achieve some success on this road. I know that there is a long way to go, but I still want to break through the southern wall. As a long-time reader of Tian Long Ba Bu, this time travel fan novel gave me a whole new reading experience. The author skillfully integrates the protagonist's time-travel identity into the framework of the original work, without forcibly changing the classic plot direction, and also fills in many blank spaces in the original work through the protagonist's perspective. Xiao Feng's heroic spirit, Duan Yu's infatuation and innocence, and Yue Laosan's foolishness and cuteness are all restored authentically. At the same time, the interaction between the protagonist and the original characters is natural and reasonable, without a rigid sense of "God's perspective" intervention. The story depicts the martial arts world with great care in detail. Whether it is the tense atmosphere of the beggar gang meeting or the mysterious scene of Wuliang Cave, it is reminiscent of the classic scenes of the original work. The protagonist's growth line is solidly designed, from being ignorant when he first arrives to gradually integrating into the world. The plot advances in a reasonable manner without over-reliance on the golden finger of the time traveler. As a fan work, it not only respects the core of the original work, but also brings a fresh interpretation of the story, which is suitable for every reader who loves the world of Tianlong to savor.

Quite interesting! Better than other martial arts novels!

It's quite good-looking, well-written, the setting is novel, and the writing doesn't miss much, so I can read it and keep reading.

This book is quite good, I read it in one sitting, but it is too short. The author should update more! Come on!

This book is indeed very good. The author has taken a different approach. There is no perfect start and no explosive life. He starts with a small character. He does not have explosive force value, but he can perfectly meet the powerful people who are born from the ceiling of martial arts with just one mouth. Come on!

It's still good, with a lot of fun points, but there aren't enough show-offs and slaps in the face! It would be better to add more show-off and slap-in-the-face plots in the future!

It's really pretty, but updates are too slow! The development of the protagonist is okay, and the storyline and emotional path development are also well paved. Come on!

The writing is good, you can rely on Xiaoyao Sect. After all, he is also the protagonist, and he has no inner strength at all! Um! Good,

I never expected that my favorite martial arts novel would be adapted in such an interesting way! The author's writing style is mature and he is your old fan. I hope you will write more new books.

Very attractive, absolutely a masterpiece

It sounds okay! It's just that some details are not handled perfectly! Come on

It gets more and more interesting later on! ! ! Quite enjoyable

How to say it! This book is still good. The subject matter is average, but some plot settings are still very good!

So beautiful! In particular, the side of Duan Zhengchun, King of the Sea, is vividly written! There are also the intricate relationships between the various characters in Jianghu, and then there are the intricate family relationships in Tianlong. Author, come on! ! !

This book is really good! It sounds pretty good, especially the main character, who has the same name as me. Must support! Come on, author, arrange more wives for me! I'll give you a gift then!

It's so good to watch. It feels so good to see the protagonist Ding Jie strategizing and winning from thousands of miles away! Must support it!

Very good novel! It sounds great!

Look, it looks pretty good.

Not bad! Worth adding to your bookshelf! [Praise]

There are no plug-ins, and the time traveler knows the script and knows how to take advantage of the situation, so it's okay.

Should I say it or not, this novel is really good. Please pay attention to it!

A very nice novel! It was introduced by a classmate. I saw it yesterday and now I have read it in one sitting. The author will update it as soon as possible! Send you a gift! It's really good-looking, but the updates are too slow! I can't keep up with the speed! Update it soon

It was a good book, but it ended too quickly.

What's going on? Why are there so few people reading this novel? It's better not to go back to the previous content! ! [Pinch][pinch][pinch][pinch]