Honkai Star Iron: My Strange Love Yandere Record

I hope the author can finish this book😭 At least give the previous book an ending, you bastard! [Cry]

Your problem, author, is very simple. There is too much nonsense. A few repeated words are enough. About "I love you, I love you", there are too many and it is very annoying. The problem with "Rescue and Watch Monsters" is that it progresses too slowly, always prolonging the time, making it difficult for people to want to read further. Moreover, the policewoman under the protagonist in the early stage seemed to be very suitable for promoting the plot, but in the end, you used it as a walk-on. In your other book "The Valkyries in Honkai Impact Are Not Normal", there is a section that is particularly well written and very scary. It is the section where the protagonist teleports away from the point where Yuexia Dangdang's footsteps came to the place where the protagonist teleported away. At that time, this section was particularly good. My suggestion for you in this book is to reduce the repetition of I love you, I love you, and so on. Write about psychological fear, not just the kind of fear before death when the supernatural protagonist Gaba dies after encountering something. My suggestion is to focus more on passers-by. For example, if the protagonist is walking on the street, these passers-by will pass by the protagonist with stiff faces, etc. I won't go into the details. It's up to the author to think about it. In short, I hope that the works you write will get better and better, and that they will be completed instead of being forced to be discarded. The last 5 stars are for encouragement, come on!

Hope this can be finished... There is a sense of seeing an old friend... Like coffin shaking

My review is that it looks great, but my brain is a bit out of use.

If you really travel through the weird world, please pray that you don't backtrack, because one death is much better than endless backtracking. By death, you can escape, but by backtracking, you can only be trapped in endless reincarnation and look for almost no way to survive.

A book that I feel has great potential

Good luck, I found another novel about Mysterious Resurrection + Mijia Games. It's also a good book. It's okay.

It's also very good. I haven't seen such high quality for a long time [Like] [Like]

It does have that weird smell.

I hope this can be finished

Very nice, come on author

Very well written

Make sure it doesn't end badly, it looks okay

Come on! I hope the author can finish it this time.

4 Is such a great number! Right? Mista!

It's pretty good, and the pressure is pretty strong.

It's good to read. I like this kind of book that combines weirdness with two-dimensional games.