Doomsday World Observation Log

It's very beautiful. Although it is somewhat different from the real scene in some aspects, there are few effective governments and effective armies. This seemingly ordinary post-apocalyptic article of mine adds an ounce of brilliance. Coupled with the multi-angle narrative characters, it has the feeling of a group drama. The small characters fully demonstrate the big background. It outlines a doomsday picture that tests human nature, rationality, and morality. Well, looking at it now, it feels like productivity has been somewhat weakened. I don't know if it's a problem with the specific points. In our country, there will be insufficient ammunition. There may also be routine preparations, which are indeed not enough to deal with such emergencies, but subsequent supplements should not arrive for half a day. [Grievance] Continuing, it is much better now. The author who listens to advice is the best, and the activity and response rate are very good. It's good to follow the mass line and the mass viewpoint

A well-written post-apocalyptic novel, surpassing 95% of other similar genres on Tomato. It can be seen that the author is a civil servant, and the language used in official documents is very correct. Unfortunately, I personally feel that the strength of the army is a bit underestimated (or maybe the zombies are too strong), which is not to my liking. Come on, author [learn it]

An absolutely true description. There are no supernatural powers or predictions of the future. Only fearless people use their knowledge, sweat and blood to create the eternal existence of mankind. Multiple perspectives allow you to show the impending storm before the crisis breaks out from all aspects, from the initial outbreak to the gradual loss of control, to the intervention of military units and a complete blockade. It is not only the army that really fights zombies, but also the survivors struggling in the disaster area, and the researchers developing vaccines at the rear. Humanity and darkness are intertwined, but the unyielding spirit will last forever.

I have read more than 80 chapters and feel that the writing is good and I have my own ideas in terms of writing ideas and character creation. Here are some suggestions/questions: I feel that the author's writing style is still a bit restrained and rarely analyzes human nature. I personally think this is essential for zombie novels, such as the thinking of various subjects in the context of a siege, and the direct conflict between personal life safety and national interests. Various interest groups interfere with national decision-making (for example, whether to abandon important local government personnel during a siege. If this goes out, those financial aristocrats will also flee, which will inevitably lead to a tear between the upper and lower levels). Because the most essential nature of human nature is self-interest. When oneself becomes a necessary victim to maintain stability, there is no justice and faith at all. At least I haven't seen such a direct conflict yet.

This book really made my eyes light up! The setting of this novel is very novel. The protagonist is no longer the kind of person who fights alone, but focuses on ordinary people, the army, and the country in the apocalypse. It feels very real. There is no cheating plot in the story. It is just a group of people trying to survive in this chaotic world. This sense of reality made me feel particularly involved. Moreover, the military plays a very important role in the book. It is no longer a simple background panel in other novels, but actually participates in the response to the doomsday. They stick to their duties and work hard to maintain order in the apocalypse, and they feel very powerful. The details in the book are also well described. The terror of zombies, the lack of resources, and the struggle of human nature are all described in detail. Worth a look

I think the author's writing style is very good and it reads smoothly and naturally. But every character should have supporting roles and interactions. The delivery boy in the first chapter, the nurse in the second chapter. Try to express each character's personality and communicate in as many languages ​​as possible so that everyone can be as vivid as possible. It is based on reality and gives readers a sense of involvement.

It's so shocking, especially the one about Doctor Xiaoyu, with its exquisite writing, excellent scientific knowledge, and cruel sacrifice for victory. After reading this book for so many years, this is the most shocking one to me so far. The road to victory must be a road paved with corpses, and we are standing at the end of this road, or at the rest stop.

It's much better than some of the assembly-line zombie novels on the list, and this one has a much more immersive feel. Overall there is no big problem, I hope it can maintain the standard [Like]

Although the author claims and attempts to be "realistic" based on his own experience, there are still gaps that cannot be ignored between many of his texts and reality. Although this novel may surpass most novels in terms of narrative technique, the failure of this core claim constitutes a fundamental flaw at the structural level. The limitations of the knowledge graph lead to a series of systematic deviations when the author attempts to symbolize reality. The signifiers in the work cannot effectively refer to what the author claims to mean; much of the content is actually just an imagination rather than a mirror image of reality. I can understand the author's creative intentions and efforts, but as a reader, I still cannot accept this kind of "realistic" work with obvious cognitive flaws and structural breaks. However, as long as you accept that it is not an attempt to be realistic, it is okay (only for online novels). It's not AI, it's just that I don't speak Chinese well ( (Text withdrawn) The rating has been modified, but for the author's data

The book is a good book, with detailed descriptions and group portraits. It is suitable for listening to books. The above are the advantages and disadvantages 1. Too detailed There are some scenes that may not necessarily be what the author wants to write, but forcing himself to change them again and again consumes his enthusiasm and results in low output. 2. The plot is slowed down This is actually a remaining issue. The final purpose of writing the details is to trigger emotional resonance, but in fact the pace is still slow. It's not that it's not good, it may not be acceptable. Suggestions 1. Write around a part of the character. For example, what kind of family he is from, what happened next, what he did, and then he was knocked down. This kind of place has a high emotional resonance point when he was knocked down. 2. The pace can be accelerated, To be fair, the purpose of setting up the plot is to reach the point of emotional resonance. After all, even if he is unified, it can be written. If he falls back into corruption and is overthrown by others, it can be written again. The book must be a good book.

Highly recommended! The best apocalyptic writing! This is not a science fiction movie, nor is it a fantasy movie! It depicts how the world of our time is suddenly torn apart. The author does not focus on a certain hero, but instead acts like a patient recorder: the ordinary people fighting for a bag of rice in the supermarket, the contradictory people in the community who are afraid of their neighbors but have to watch and help each other, the lonely truck driver who takes risks to deliver supplies... Each of these flesh-and-blood stories are connected together with delicate strokes to form a panoramic view of the coming apocalypse. The general content of the story is: The Western "Prism" laboratory was ambitious and wanted to create a super soldier drug. Unexpectedly, the artificially edited virus was leaked out of control. This deadly thing, disguised as a common flu, spread silently and finally landed in the great eastern country, igniting the first flames of chaos in Ninghai City. And the first part of this story that makes people's hearts beat faster is the shock when the machine of this Eastern country really starts to deal with the disaster! Imagine: terrifyingly efficient mobilization, an organization like a torrent of steel, and a nationwide effort to launch a life-and-death counterattack against the zombie wave. The condensed power and decisive momentum will definitely make your blood boil! "When the zombie craze collides with the wisdom of war tempered for five thousand years, the world will eventually witness what is the ultimate barrier to the survival of civilization!"

Far superior to similar apocalyptic novels, it is unique and does not have the "coolness" of focusing solely on the "protagonist". The writing is unique, the rhythm is catchy, and the insights are profound. The fate of everyone touches the heartstrings. The real readers breathe together with the characters.

The author can greatly improve the writing strength and the richness of the characters. Sometimes it seems that the description of the characters is a bit pale or lacks the soul of the characters themselves, but it is still flawed, surpassing most apocalyptic novels. I hope the author can at least maintain or even provide a higher quality follow-up [exploration]

You can learn from the popular Mad Madness on Station B and the American comic Blood Cross. I think the settings of both are very interesting. In addition, the author has a high level of grasp of politics. The plot is very good, real, and can be described as immersive.

A Tomato doomsday novel on the same level as Hundred Years of Sangchaan. Come on, I must support you when I get paid [note]

The biggest bug is that even Ninghai is like this, but only Ninghai, a super city with countless flights and cargo traffic every day, has no spillover. Do you know what you are talking about [face covering]

This is a great novel. You can see the author's clear thinking in both structure and plot. A common problem in multi-protagonist novels is that it is easy to lose control of the perspective, but multiple perspectives itself is an advantage of this type of novel, so how to balance it is a delicate point. I hope the author can try his best to grasp the degree [Blow kiss]

The author's writing style is really good, the plot development ideas are clear and coherent, the foreshadowing is also very good, and the details are also in place. Non-individual heroic writing, partial to group portrait writing

A very good post-apocalyptic group portrait article, worth reading. The writing style is excellent among online articles. It is very good at using environmental description to create a terrifying atmosphere in the early days of the apocalypse. What surprised me was that the author did not use various social hot-button contradictions to forcefully create conflicts and contradictions among the characters. There were no labeled characters, but only various situations in the world of survival in the apocalypse. The characters were all very, very normal. It can be seen that the author really put his heart into it! Come on come on! I don't know what the author's score is for this book, but as long as the author writes it, I will read it!

After listening to it for an hour, I decided to give it five stars. It's rare to find zombie stories with smooth and vivid writing. In terms of plot, as a background without the concept of "zombie", the reactions of all parties are very real, and the character descriptions are also in place. What's funny is that even though the background was said to be fictional, I could still imagine with my eyes closed that there would be some "stupid" people in the comments who would be clever. They were as stupid as the refugees trying to hide from guns in the book. I can make two bowls of rice just by reading this kind of comments. These kind of comments on Douyin are basically electronic life, so it shouldn't be the case in 🍅 [laughs]

I came here to learn from my experiences writing zombie articles next door. The logic and details of this book are more thoughtful than many zombie articles that get a score of 9. Sure enough, Tomato's good content is all in the low score. Moreover, this kind of group portrait is difficult to write and has few readers. Come on It's best to write a main character in the next book. The logic of Daoyou's writing is very in line with my taste.

It's a very good work. The author has a good reserve of knowledge. It's not like many works that are written by a grassroots team. I don't want to read it when I see the leaders in a meeting. It's a pity that the tone at the beginning is not very suitable for the audience here. The audience here should be inclined towards formulaic grand narrative and cool novels. The realism style is not very popular, which may be the reason for the low score. Personally, I think that if the battle is described in a large space, it will inevitably become homogeneous, and accordingly the sense of immersion will be reduced. I hope that the current style can be maintained.

So well written! This is really one of the top zombie stories I've read! Both the writing style and the plot design reveal the author's intentions! Although there are some small flaws, they definitely outweigh the flaws. I just hope that I can keep updating and not be removed from the shelves [laughing and crying]

All I can say is that, judging from the comparison, it is indeed much better than many apocalyptic novels on the list, although there are also many logical problems.

It's good to watch. I just like to see government troops doing something, but I don't like that kind of heroism.

Can it still be unblocked? It's actually quite nice.

The author is young but talented in writing, not to mention profound, very level

A rare masterpiece among apocalyptic novels, it is very realistic and has a strong sense of immersion. If you don't have enough social experience, you won't be able to write something like this. Of course, if you don't have a certain amount of experience, you may not be able to understand it. A breath of fresh air in modern online writing, which is 18,000 times more powerful than those refreshing writings that are always systematic and have super powers.

Very good, very true, the author described it very carefully

It's much better than cheating to save supplies, but it's a pity that it's tj