There Is Indeed Something Wrong with the Supporting Character's Youthful Love Story

A classic story about a young boy who has low self-esteem and lacks love, and then a group of beautiful girls grow up around him. It is suitable for high school students or light novel groups. If you are working hard, be careful. It is a bit annoying to see such a male protagonist with no merits being betrayed.

Objectively speaking, in my personal opinion, it is a very good work. Although there is nothing innovative, it is a clichéd Japanese light novel pseudo-harem story, but this is Tomato. The quality of the work is definitely very qualified. Whether it is the rhythm control, the characters or the plot setting, it is very good. It is like writing the feeling of Japanese animation into a novel. I rarely give five stars to a work. But this work is definitely worthy in this field, although there are certain flaws in it. But overall it's worth the five stars [like] Okay, now I've really read almost everything. I can only say that I have personally read this book from a high of 9 points to 8.2 Points now. The rating is still falling, but the author has completely immersed himself in his art. From the 150th chapter onwards, it can be said that he wrote what he dreamed of, and the plot is getting more and more sophisticated. , There is no actual progress, many characters were buried in the snow, and a lot of inexplicable people and plots were written. After saving nearly 80 chapters, I felt that I had read nothing. This book is a pity for me, but books like this are not easy to find on Tomato, and they did stay with me for a while, so I just insist on seeing the ending. Okay, this time I really understand, the author is choosing real readers! When I first watched it, I still felt disgusted and cuckolded, but after watching it for a long time, I tasted a different taste, and I realized that this is reality! This is life! This is the harem novel that I have been pursuing for a long time! A few people don't fall in love mindlessly, and then a bunch of boring and cliched plots happen because of certain things. This is not what I want to watch! I want to see fresh plots and fresh feelings. Every heroine and hero in this novel have mutual bonds and brand-new relationships and stories! No one can guess the plot or even the next sentence! Everyone has their own story and the protagonist has experienced all kinds of ups and downs, and they can still be together after experiencing various setbacks. This is the real harem story! ! ! [Angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry][angry]

Overall, this book is good. The male protagonist knows his identity and deliberately keeps his distance. I read other similar novels. On the surface, they say that they are supporting characters, ordinary people, etc., But within ten chapters, they turn into studs. It seems really boring, and they do whatever their identity is. This is the book that I have read so far and my identity has not collapsed. I hope it won't collapse in the future. It really disappoints me

The heroine's character is relatively distinct, and the daily atmosphere is also good. The male protagonist has strong personal abilities, and looks like a great teacher. In the recent plot, the male protagonist's mentality change period in the supporting role feels so fast, and the planetarium plot is a bit watery. I hope to increase the amount of updates. Overall, it is a very good daily-style novel, with good reviews [The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food]

No, every character is so well written, so if it's not a harem ending, I'd guess it would just be a good one. This is so well written that I, who have been killing fish at RT-Mart for 10 years, started to feel my heart beat. No, I want to ask you what you are writing after this singing competition. People are so shocked.

At present, the protagonist should be similar to Furumi-san's character, and the background is similar to that of a real teacher. Although I haven't watched it for a long time, I hope to see the male protagonist's delicate mind and high emotional intelligence in the future. If the author has not watched Furumi-san, he can also recommend it, it is good-looking I feel that this subject matter is easy to grasp poorly. The relationship between the so-called "male protagonist" and the female protagonist is, after all, I am reading a novel. I definitely hope that the male protagonist will shine. Anyway, come on, author [eating melon]

It's really good. I've read a lot of similar Gakuin Nichijou. This book is considered top-notch in my opinion. So old themes can be written very well even if they are carefully written. I hope the author will continue to work hard and not finish the book. After reading the summary of the latest update, the author has not written any plots that have nothing to do with the main plot, but the male protagonist is still such a turtle, and the image created by Qingmei is not pleasing to the eye. Lin has corrected himself, and will write more around the main plot in the future.

Author, don't listen to their nonsense, this is a very good writing [Like] A real masterpiece is not understood at the beginning, [Like] How can the relationship between the male and female protagonists not have some twists and turns, how can the character be more three-dimensional and highlight the heroine's love for the male protagonist [Like] This is how it should be written, don't stop. [Like] The heroine who is a passerby is a philanderer everywhere, so every heroine should have a better male partner. Even if the male partner loves the heroine no matter how much he is better than the male protagonist, he will be outperformed by the male protagonist. This is the real cool article [Like]

I've watched you step by step from the beginning until now. There are more and more book friends. I thought it had already been rated, but I didn't expect that I haven't given you the five stars that belong to you. Well done to you, the beginning is very attractive. The background is fascinating, and I thought I was watching a spring novel (no other intention, I just thought that the author's writing style was delicate and the characters had rich inner emotions). After the mid-term, characters will be slowly introduced one by one, at least they will be different. Hmm... This is also more troublesome. After all, there are too many people and too little food. It's up to you to decide which girl has less of a role. Don't let any book lover feel cold [face covering] We can't help you. Please be honest and code words [Like] We will always be your strong backing [Sending my heart] I read the really good articles, and I scold you when they are poisonous (but we all believe that you will be as practical as Lu Ying, right?) That's it, come on, we are optimistic about you [Thinking]

Yes, compared to Tomato novels with the same theme, the author's writing style is much more comfortable, and the main plot chosen is also quite interesting. It is more interesting than simple harem novels, and can write more storylines. The jokes are also much better than other novice authors, and there are no bad jokes. They are all jokes that can make me laugh. They are much better than those 9.0 Novels. The male protagonist is not bad either. I don't blindly force him to be pitiful or inferior. He doesn't hesitate to make decisions when encountering things. Like a turtle man, he calls out the coward next door.

This novel is simply a shining pearl in the world of literature! From opening The fascinating scene setting of the article is like a hook, firmly grasping It captures the readers' hearts and makes them eager to get into it. The author's writing skills are astonishingly profound, and his delicate descriptions are like A trickle of water flows through every plot, no matter the character's every move Laughter, or the plants and trees in the environment, all seem to be vivid and vivid on the paper. Vivid. The plot of the story is full of ups and downs, and the twists and turns often make me I couldn't help but marvel. Every turn is unexpected but reasonable It's like a well-choreographed magic, constantly bringing surprises to people and shock. The characters in the book are excellent. They are not flat, Rigid, but flesh-and-blood individuals with distinctive personalities. Protagonist's strength The tenacity and supporting roles have their own characteristics, intertwined with each other, and jointly interpret a story. A wonderful song of humanity I stole a comment. It's well written, but I'm just not sure who can attack first. I prefer the C0S mini-human machine, but I'm curious about this gadget.

It's funny, kid. It's the first time I read a novel and I laughed so happily. It's not because of the content, but because I just can't hold it in anymore. [Hold face] After reading the first few chapters, I feel like the male protagonist is a poet. [Hold face] [OK]

It's a good book about true hatred, and the protagonist has strong emotional intelligence and action skills. Although many people have their own likes and dislikes for female protagonists, harem novels take care of everyone by having female protagonists with different styles. I think each heroine has her own charms and shortcomings, and the writing is wonderful. Goodbye, author. I really can't eat anymore. I can't stand the sweet and embarrassing ones.

I have read a few so far, and I can only say that it is a masterpiece. The writing is top-notch, the plot is top-notch, including the psychological description of the characters and their appearance. There are also some memes that I have never seen on Douyin. They are lively and interesting. I just hope it will be faster. I don't like to follow updates.

I have tried this Shen Nong, and it is not poisonous so far. The content is pretty good, and there is a bit of Japanese youth in it. There are no pretense, slap in the face, and crowd scenes in other campus novels. I believe that if I keep writing, this book will definitely become popular.

It's a relatively smooth romance light novel. Let's talk about the advantages first: 1. The daily life with the heroines is more delicate, and it feels a bit sweet; 2. Some seemingly coincidental events with the heroines have gradually increased their mutual feelings (but it is indeed a bit deliberate); Let's talk about the shortcomings: 1. Some plots are just written to promote development, and there are logical errors [for example, eating Western food with the cold female protagonist, and giving someone alcohol even though she knew alcohol would harm a woman's uterus. As a result, the aunt arrived directly in advance, and "worked tirelessly" [awkward laugh] to help the heroine buy buns to gain weight for the rest of the protagonist. Foreshadowing (it's not that women can't drink, it's just that you knew it was the case but didn't dissuade him)]; 2. The protagonist is not handsome, he is an orphan who was thrown under a telephone pole. He has no merits except gentleness, which directly attracts the jealousy of the major school beauties and young ladies. I want to ask why [thinking] (the status of a warm man is still behind the dog-licking). 3. I don't know what's going on, but I always add some very familiar plots. There was a post-graduation banquet where the classmate was going to confess his love to a girl. The key was that the protagonist went there to help DJ (boy, does it look familiar [laughter]). Then he said that he entered an elite university. This university is different from ordinary universities in order to cultivate elite talents in society. In short, it is a "university that welcomes strength." 4. You directly open up the harem, and pure love is only love. [Smile] Some people ask why there are so many shortcomings and why there are still good reviews. Because in general, not everyone thinks of these shortcomings as shortcomings. And I don't know why I gave a three-star review to the previous book review and it was so negative.

The writing style is very delicate, and the character's heart is also very detailed. Compared with other articles, the protagonist is either very handsome or very powerful, and has an obvious style. It does seem a bit like a harem novel at first, but after reading it, I found that it is not because the male protagonist has clear ideas, and it is not that he has other ideas about girls. It is just that his living environment and growth experience make the male protagonist more sensitive and able to understand and pay attention to details and find those who are not attracted by it. The place where people discover is a novel after all, so it is normal to meet so many beautiful heroines, and the plot is not particularly bad. It is very meaningful. I help everyone just because I have been hurt and don't want others to suffer too. Sensitive people are destined to bear double the emotions. Judging from the perspective of a novel, this is indeed a very good story. It is not as bad as some people who gave low scores said. It is worth reading.

The writing is very good, the emotions are very delicate, logical and not brainless. The story written by the author is excellent. I praise the author. When did Luo Xueruo fall in love with Lu Ying? Can you just say a few words at the comic exhibition? Is it too sudden? The two of them have too little common experience [what]

The writing is quite good. For me, when reading a book, I should not just take it in, but also savor the temperament of each character. I can observe and think about each character's personality from a third perspective and summarize the advantages and disadvantages, so as to predict the direction of the subsequent plot. This way, my personal understanding of people has been improved. There are also some characters in this book that are not well polished. For example, Ling Bao, girls who usually dress up like that are more narcissistic, flamboyant, and aggressive. The author did not portray her well, and she is more cold and pitiful. This is a shortcoming. Like Shui again, her character also needs to grow. Things can't be smooth sailing, so some unexpected events must be arranged to temper her. It is also necessary to portray more distinctive characteristics and complexities of each character. It is best to give the protagonist a little "betrayal". No one lives for anyone, everyone is a free individual, so that the protagonist can move from immature maturity to mature maturity.

I think it's pretty good. Maybe everyone is different, but it's true that the tension between men and women is a bit different. There are very few of these types. I prefer Japanese light novels, like "Weak Character Yuki-kun".

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and I feel that it is different from traditional love online novels. It can even be said that the difference is a bit big. If I insist on saying it, it feels a bit different from many Japanese light novels. Objectively speaking, the writing style is average, but compared to many Japanese light novels that have been translated, it is much better, and it starts with supporting roles. The protagonist is also relatively novel, and I feel that the protagonist has the characteristics of the four campus hegemons in it. There is nothing wrong with the character creation. In summary, if you like to read traditional romance novels, this is not suitable for you. If you like to read Japanese light novels, I recommend you to read it. Or if you are used to traditional online novels and want to change your taste, there is no problem in reading this.

In fact, the whole book is pretty good. Each character has his or her own characteristics, and the description is not bad. So far, except for Shui Qingqian, everything else is fine. But I don't know why I feel sick to my stomach. I hope that each character will have his own best ending, and I also hope that multiple heroines will really be multiple heroines😣

Overall, although this work has advantages and disadvantages, the highlights are quite prominent: the characters are extremely close to reality, the emotional portrayal is very good, and the writing is particularly delicate; however, as far as the current content is concerned, the plot is biased toward daily life, and "Shura field" plots often appear. Moreover, the male protagonist is a scumbag and doesn't realize it. Instead, he calls other girls scumbags, which is a bit destructive. Overall, I think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. It is suitable for students who live on campus, otherwise the sense of substitution will not be strong [laughs] Although the writing is a bit off, the current situation is good, and when I update it, I will be dreaming about which day it will be updated, so I have to save up to read it [laughs] But I think as long as the ending is good, it is a very good novel. There is no need to just pay attention to some bad points and maliciously give bad reviews. In terms of character description and plot, it is actually pretty good. I can only wait and see how Cream writes in the future [face covering]

The writing is really good, especially suitable for watching while listening to music with headphones at night. There is no gorgeous rhetoric, but the inner description allows us to see that ordinary supporting characters can also become their own protagonists. Because of kindness and seriousness, the supporting characters have become their own protagonists. The protagonist is a bit like Lu Mingfei, but different, with a sense of loneliness in his heart. Anyway, the writing is really good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update quickly. I like to feel more lonely. I want to emo at night, okay, the author is great.

It can be compared with the very good book God of the Stars. I think you won't get tired of it if you read it too much. The plot is not cliche. Every character has flesh and blood. The plot is entertaining but not lacking in depth. It is the first book this year that made me stay up late to read.

I want to talk about this water. I personally don't like it very much, but now I think the pig's trotters are the best. The main reason is that this water feels so consistent with all the fantasies a man has about a good woman, so good that it is almost unreal. Moreover, it always looks like a weak and pitiful white lotus. It does not have the vivid feeling of other characters. It feels lifeless and boring, and only gentle. He is still the same as a normal person, with emotions, anger, sorrows and joys clearly displayed, which makes people feel more three-dimensional, better and more like a normal person. But most book friends seem to prefer the water one. Maybe it's because everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. I don't understand but respect [laughing]

It's very beautiful, and it's completely considered top-notch on the Tomato platform.

The plot and writing are very high-quality, and it feels really immersive to watch. However, I personally don't like to add plots where the protagonist promotes love between other characters. It's not that I can't write it. The writing is really good and it looks quite romantic. But for this reason, it seems to be taking over the main role, and there is no progress on the male protagonist's part. I was fed dog food by other characters, and it's not like I haven't seen similar ones before, but they are all related to the main plot and indirectly play a role in promoting the plot of the male protagonist. In addition to earning credits, this one can basically be watched as a side story. Of course, having said so much, maybe it is just because it is not suitable for me, and I am too narrow-minded to like it. Regardless of this point, it is really a very high-quality work. If you can accept it, it is like finding a treasure. Good writing in Tomato deserves respect, come on author [like]

An absolute treasure book. I saw the shadow of Chunwu and Zhizhang. The author blended the characteristics of the two and wrote a new way. It is very beautiful. [OK][OK][OK]Hope it can be updated stably.

It's very good. The author's writing style is good. He wrote about the inferiority complex of the young boy. It's okay in all aspects, but it's not a cool story that needs to be read with your brain. And based on my experience, the protagonist will most likely not be able to handle it. Anyway, 38 is still in the stage of being a young boy. Come on, author, I still hope to have some hope.