Vientiane**

Great group portrait and very unique style. But for me, the beginning of the story is when a few people who have not known each other for a long time suddenly have a bond that can be entrusted with their lives. I need to endure this weird feeling and continue reading until the story I am watching is thick enough to support this emotion, and it becomes reasonable and good-looking. For the author, whether it is trust or other emotions in your mind, you can directly arrange and set them as you want, but for readers, I need stories to foreshadow them. Thanks to your writing style and writing style, I can feel the rich emotions of the characters, but due to the thinness of the story, I can feel the emptiness of the characters. They are your writing tools, and here is your composition. Good, good, good and bad. Students who live on campus have no desire to continue studying after 16 days...

This book is considered very good. Although its popularity has not increased (after all, the author seems to be a new author), the writing is not limited. It will become popular one day. Different from the pure cheating in other Tomato novels, the protagonist of this novel is not just a waste of the system. I saw a calm, fresh-minded Captain Jiang who is good at solving difficulties through thinking. Of course, he also has a kind side: he is the rock and guiding light in the hearts of his team members; he is the existence that they seek and admire in their hearts. In such a dark and chaotic environment, it was Captain Jiang who led his White Deer team to grow step by step and finally find a light. "The White Deer in Qingya Cave, stepped through the thorns, and still moved forward." Let us, like Captain Jiang and the White Deer Team, overcome the thorns and move forward bravely.

The plot of the first few dozen chapters is a bit fast. If I write carefully, I can even write 20 chapters into 40 chapters. But when I see the updated parts now, I understand why I am rushing it. The world view is so big that the author doesn't want to delay it. I think the rhythm after the training camp is fine, just right.

If it doesn't involve the protagonist's brain circuit, this book is quite interesting. From the descriptions of these supporting characters, to the protagonist's abilities, to the settings (characters, abilities) of the members in the past life, they are all quite good. And also uncover the other side of the headquarters, fight against the headquarters as a "villain", and recruit those who are suspicious and know part of the truth. It's not that the act of rescuing people is wrong, but the reason is too far-fetched The artist prefers to do whatever he wants. He wants to have a better relationship with the protagonist, so he helps the protagonist save people. This is enough reason. What is interesting about saving people is really difficult (is it interesting to draw vehicles repeatedly? Why don't you join the factory) Also, I have seen enough of this passage about not being a saint, but being unable to watch ordinary people die. I want to save people if I want to, but I don't want them to achieve their goals and increase their strength. Is this a good enough reason? Carrying people away is bad enough. I didn't listen carefully. Is the whole city marked by the enemy or something? I just treat it like this, but can a teammate come up with props or abilities to solve it? Finally, if this book review is written incorrectly, point it out and I will delete or modify it.

I see Putao, you have 9.0 Qualifications, and now you have updated to chapter 65 homework. By the way, you actually asked us, do you have a talent pack? Come on, my talented brother, keep writing. The one on my bookshelf is called "The one who refuses to become a school beauty and becomes a swordsman, I am invincible" can be your role model When I first updated him, he had only updated to about 200 chapters. Your current situation is similar to his. Come on, keep writing and maintain your own rhythm. After 200 chapters, everything will be fine. During the serialization process, "Sword Immortal" was once on the top ten of the urban martial arts list, and now it is a book with a 9.0 Rating. It may be higher or lower. After all, it was 9.2 When I read it. A five-star review, please don't let me down.

The author, the author, [blowing kiss] I really like Luo Wei and Jiang Yi, I hope I can help my dear book fans [love] [love] They are really well portrayed and have very good personalities, I really like them [love]

The author of a new book, but has a foundation, I should say he has talent. The story is very good, but the overall story is depressing, and it feels like everyone is the enemy, but the experience in Qingya Cave balances this situation, and it feels like a spark.

The entire story line and content of this book are very smooth, and the writing is also very good. If I rate it, I will rate it in an upward direction. Some of its content needs the author to be more detailed. The articles and writing are good, but the emotions and each character are less active. Small characters can also become big characters. I look forward to the author's future books. I will finish this one [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's good-looking, concise and concise. The protagonist is my favorite character. It should be said that he is a formula for most urban martial arts heroes. However, this book made me feel very comfortable and the emotional line is very stable. If you just like to see the protagonist upgrade, you can also read it. At least the ability is a lot better than that of the same level. It is very satisfying. Joining the villain camp is my favorite point. The villains in this book are very deep. I look forward to the follow-up plot.

Only 7.5 Points, what a joke! Damn, give me a promotion quickly! Human words: The character creation is very successful, and the growth of thinking is also very smooth. With every character who appears, you can slowly realize why they become such a person. In the end you may even find out that you too have fallen into the trap [laughing] Evaluation: There are advantages and disadvantages, excellent work, 4.5⭐

A masterpiece is impossible, no matter how good the author's writing is. If you don't care about whether the logic is strict or not, and it seems to have multiple female protagonists (and there are suspected ambiguous plots with other supporting female characters, and you don't know if the author wants to reflect the personality charm of the protagonist through the interaction with the supporting female characters), you can watch it.

Luo Wei is a bit like Chen's ability in Nomenclature of the Night. The overall combat power is a bit less divided. As mentioned before, the gap between the first level is like a chasm. Later, the protagonist Xuan level can fight with the king level, and the combat power is a bit broken. But so far, the writing is good. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Does it really exist in tomatoes👻😱🤓👌I won't regret it If it is completely original, then I can only 👻🤓👌 let you successfully accept my praise💪💪💪😄👻😱🤓👌

A very nice high-level martial arts portrait, with two heroines and a passionate plot. Keep up the good work, the author. The more I look at the back, the more I think this book is good and eye-catching. I won't say much else, so I will continue to follow it. As far as this book is concerned, it can definitely be regarded as a brave and resourceful book. So far, there are no poisonous points. The protagonist does not kill indiscriminately, is not a virgin, and has his own goals. The point is to go against the authorities (actually they are just a bunch of monsters)

The writing is very good, the content level planning is complete, the combat and character portrayal are very good, it doesn't look like Tomato's. The only problem is that the label says there is no cp, so will these two women die in the later stage?

Go ahead, wait until the book becomes popular and I will be the founder [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Predict a wave, it may be something like rebirth, file loading, etc. It's almost like the God of Drama and the God of Killing. But the emotional line is a bit fast, but it's understandable. It also explains from the side that this book should not exceed 800 chapters and will be completed (it may be wrong, the world view is not fully developed) If the prediction is successful, please call me ancestor [laughing]

How can I put it, the pace of the book is a bit fast and not immersive enough. I don't read much about group portraits. This book feels similar to other books, except that it has a little more description of supporting characters. The writing is not bad and a bit immature. The plot of the afterlife is quite interesting. I quite like it. It is an improvement over the previous one, but it is as short as the author, so I can update it quickly! ! !

Overall, it's quite good. It's different from the previous urban superpowers. It's worth a read. There are a lot of foreshadowings but the pace feels fast. I don't know what the author's later outline will be like. The author is a newcomer and the data is too low. It seems that this book can currently score more than eight points.

It's so beautiful. But the relationship line was a bit weird at the beginning. Maybe I missed it. I don't know why no one read it. Good luck to the author. I hope this book will become popular [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

So far, it's okay. The group portraits are not awkward, and the character creation and foreshadowing are at least not obtrusive. I just don't know why the typo that the author of the comment section has replied to has not been changed.

It doesn't overwhelm the combat power, the IQ is online, the plot logic is strict, especially the characters, most of them are very lovable. The writing is quite good, and it can be seen that the author has great ideas. The overall pace is a bit fast. The author also said that he doesn't want to waste words and ink on the plot. It gets better and better as it goes to the back. It is getting better and better. The first few chapters may be because the author does not want to waste a lot of pen and ink in the early stages, which leads to the progress of some plots being a bit fast (missing). The characters created by the author with only a few strokes are already very good [like]. The changes in the characters of the protagonist group, especially the protagonist, are obvious. Maybe everyone will have some opinions about Zhao Yutong (Jing), I think it is understandable, because he returned to the place where his father died ten years ago, dealt with the incident that his father sacrificed his life to solve, and met the daughter of the person his father sacrificed his life to save and the daughter of his comrade who came back alive. It is normal for him to lose control of his emotions. However, the author can take advantage of the time when the two teams were gathering information (during the day) to additionally describe her arrangements for the team or her guesses about the events, etc., Which feels like it can better shape the image. Overall it's a good book.

I had already thought about the ratings and comments when I read the first part, but after 200,000 words, I found it somewhat interesting, so I read it again, and it didn't feel like it was written by a person. Let me express my opinions based on the 200,000 words. 200,000 Years ago, I felt that the writing was very messy, the plot moved forward very quickly, the emotional line was also weird, and the training system felt not very clear. When I first watched it, I felt a little bad. This should be the reason for the low rating. After 200,000 yuan, I feel that the pace has obviously slowed down a lot, the emotional lines have also improved a bit, and the settings have been improved a lot. The look and feel is immediately uplifting, and the characters are more profound, which makes people endure and watch. Come on author, you are already doing very well as a newbie Come on, author, it's already very good now. The requirements for new books don't need to be too high, and author, you are writing very well now, so you should work harder and update. The main reason is that I didn't write well before, so the results are not very good, but now there is no problem.

First tell me if this heroine-less heroine is like Zhan Tong's kind of dead heroine-less heroine [eating melon]

After reading it, except for the female protagonist's emotional description of the male protagonist, which is too crude, the other writing and plot are good. In addition, I feel that the main characters are all swordsmen. I feel that no one can survive in the later stage.

It's rare to see such a high-quality book on Tomato, especially one about urban high-level martial arts. I'm really happy. [Adoration] To be honest, many other books are just mindless time-travel and slap-in-the-face systems. But this one is really different. The depth of the plot and the characterization are very good. The villain is not a brainless NPC. It is a book with an online IQ. I really recommend it. I hope the author will work hard [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kiss] [Flowing Kiss]

It's pretty good, the illustrations are OK, but they're a bit sparse. The author needs to work harder.

The author's writing is very good, but the cover and name are too long, and there are too few updates. If there is a heroine, I hope there will only be twins and no more.

It's pretty good, except for some inexplicable points. If you write more, it should be more popular.

Come on, the author writes something good, at least I have the desire to read it. I haven't seen this kind of thing in a long time.