The Eye of All Things

Great group portrait and very unique style. But for me, the beginning of the story is when a few people who have not known each other for a long time suddenly have a bond that can be entrusted with their lives. I need to endure this weird feeling and continue reading until the story I am watching is thick enough to support this emotion, and it becomes reasonable and good-looking. For the author, whether it is trust or other emotions in your mind, you can directly arrange and set them as you want, but for readers, I need stories to foreshadow them. Thanks to your writing style and writing style, I can feel the rich emotions of the characters, but due to the thinness of the story, I can feel the emptiness of the characters. They are your writing tools, and here is your composition. Good, good, good and bad. Students who live on campus have no desire to continue studying after 16 days...

This book is considered very good. Although its popularity has not increased (after all, the author seems to be a new author), the writing is not limited. It will become popular one day. Different from the pure cheating in other Tomato novels, the protagonist of this novel is not just a waste of the system. I saw a calm, fresh-minded Captain Jiang who is good at solving difficulties through thinking. Of course, he also has a kind side: he is the rock and guiding light in the hearts of his team members; he is the existence that they seek and admire in their hearts. In such a dark and chaotic environment, it was Captain Jiang who led his White Deer team to grow step by step and finally find a light. "The White Deer in Qingya Cave, stepped through the thorns, and still moved forward." Let us, like Captain Jiang and the White Deer Team, overcome the thorns and move forward bravely.

The plot of the first few dozen chapters is a bit fast. If I write carefully, I can even write 20 chapters into 40 chapters. But when I see the updated parts now, I understand why I am rushing it. The world view is so big that the author doesn't want to delay it. I think the rhythm after the training camp is fine, just right.

If it doesn't involve the protagonist's brain circuit, this book is quite interesting. From the descriptions of these supporting characters, to the protagonist's abilities, to the settings (characters, abilities) of the members in the past life, they are all quite good. And also uncover the other side of the headquarters, fight against the headquarters as a "villain", and recruit those who are suspicious and know part of the truth. It's not that the act of rescuing people is wrong, but the reason is too far-fetched The artist prefers to do whatever he wants. He wants to have a better relationship with the protagonist, so he helps the protagonist save people. This is enough reason. What is interesting about saving people is really difficult (is it interesting to draw vehicles repeatedly? Why don't you join the factory) Also, I have seen enough of this passage about not being a saint, but being unable to watch ordinary people die. I want to save people if I want to, but I don't want them to achieve their goals and increase their strength. Is this a good enough reason? Carrying people away is bad enough. I didn't listen carefully. Is the whole city marked by the enemy or something? I just treat it like this, but can a teammate come up with props or abilities to solve it? Finally, if this book review is written incorrectly, point it out and I will delete or modify it.

I see Putao, you have 9.0 Qualifications, and now you have updated to chapter 65 homework. By the way, you actually asked us, do you have a talent pack? Come on, my talented brother, keep writing. The one on my bookshelf is called "The one who refuses to become a school beauty and becomes a swordsman, I am invincible" can be your role model When I first updated him, he had only updated to about 200 chapters. Your current situation is similar to his. Come on, keep writing and maintain your own rhythm. After 200 chapters, everything will be fine. During the serialization process, "Sword Immortal" was once on the top ten of the urban martial arts list, and now it is a book with a 9.0 Rating. It may be higher or lower. After all, it was 9.2 When I read it. A five-star review, please don't let me down.

The author, the author, [blowing kiss] I really like Luo Wei and Jiang Yi, I hope I can help my dear book fans [love] [love] They are really well portrayed and have very good personalities, I really like them [love]

The author of a new book, but has a foundation, I should say he has talent. The story is very good, but the overall story is depressing, and it feels like everyone is the enemy, but the experience in Qingya Cave balances this situation, and it feels like a spark.

The entire story line and content of this book are very smooth, and the writing is also very good. If I rate it, I will rate it in an upward direction. Some of its content needs the author to be more detailed. The articles and writing are good, but the emotions and each character are less active. Small characters can also become big characters. I look forward to the author's future books. I will finish this one [laughing][laughing][laughing]

Only 7.5 Points, what a joke! Damn, give me a promotion quickly! Human words: The character creation is very successful, and the growth of thinking is also very smooth. With every character who appears, you can slowly realize why they become such a person. In the end you may even find out that you too have fallen into the trap [laughing] Evaluation: There are advantages and disadvantages, excellent work, 4.5⭐

Luo Wei is a bit like Chen's ability in Nomenclature of the Night. The overall combat power is a bit less divided. As mentioned before, the gap between the first level is like a chasm. Later, the protagonist Xuan level can fight with the king level, and the combat power is a bit broken. But so far, the writing is good. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]