Western Fantasy: I’m Building the Strongest Army in Another World

I am not a literature major, and I don't know much about novel writing. I will just give you some opinions from my perspective as an ordinary reader. First, let's talk about the advantages 1. The logic is smooth. There is no conflict between the left and right brains. Readers who like a smooth story logic can choose to read it. At least as far as I can see, I have not found any loopholes in the story logic. 2. As an online novel, some popular and playful language can entertain readers very well. Although it is a work with a relatively serious background and theme, the occasional Internet language will dispel some of the seriousness. However, this work is one that should be relaxed when you are relaxing and should be serious when you are serious, so you can watch it with confidence. 3. The author is a textual researcher. Many things in the work can be found in historical facts. Those who like to study this stuff are really blessed. The worldview is also unified. Secondly, let's talk about the disadvantages: 1. The creation of the heroine and other characters needs to be enriched. At this stage, I think the description of the heroine is still shallow. I hope that the heroine can be described in more depth later, and I also hope that more exciting characters will appear in the follow-up. 2. There are typos in some places, some minor errors in word order, and dialectalization of sentences. I would rather modify the dialectalization part so that readers can better understand the article, eh Finally, let me say something I personally want to say: Come on! I think whether it is painting or writing, it is a very laborious and laborious thing, especially in this situation where the gain outweighs the loss and it is purely for love. Stars cast a galaxy, I hope you can continue to create! Support!

Orthodox Western fantasy novels here means that the author's writing is very orthodox. The world view of the novel is very rigorous, but I almost gave up on it. Through the struggle between the protagonist and the villain, the infrastructure political struggle is very well written, just like the elf princess said in the article, it is very fairy tale-like. There are some places where the word count seems a bit too high, but it doesn't hinder reading. The author please update more quickly, it's not enough!

It's a pretty good book. When I first encountered Western fantasy, it gave me the feeling of a worldview that was different from Eastern fantasy and an indescribable sense of epicness. But later Western fantasy didn't have that sense of epicness (or maybe I didn't find it), and this book gave me a vague sense of epicness. I hope the author can update it soon! Especially looking forward to the follow-up plot! Please add more!

The writing is exquisite, the description of daily life is detailed, and the life of each character is vividly described in such a miserable world. It shines with the light of ideals. Each story is intertwined with reality and ideals. If you think the world will get better, this book is worth reading. Each character is very three-dimensional, and they all have their own reasons to drive them to do what they do.

When I saw 124, I felt like it was a standard-style western fantasy farming novel. It was pretty good to pass the time. I didn't feel that there was anything particularly outstanding or impressive about it. Normally, it would hover around 3-4 stars, but the author really did it for love. More than 100 comments and 900,000 words were written. Hard-working people shouldn't be anonymous.

It must be praised, the author's literary skills are still very good, I hope to put more effort into the plot (ps, you must finish it for me, the author is big [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss])

The master of gold mining is here, the detailed research is commendable, and the writing style is also to my liking.

The start is amazing. I really like this kind of start without intrigue and family unity.

Excellent work, quite outstanding for a farming novel, and the experience at the beginning is even more exciting. The three views of the protagonist are very upright and very in line with my taste. The only pity is that no one stopped to appreciate it, resulting in a low rating.

I felt relieved when I saw it was all five stars. I used to wonder why there are more than 100 pictures but no ratings yet. Because I didn't read the book before reading it, I subconsciously thought that this book should be about 9 o'clock. But when I clicked on it two days ago to read it, I found that there were no ratings. Today I'm going to make up for the five stars [Blow a kiss]