Western Fantasy: I Build the Strongest Army in Another World

I am not a literature major, and I don't know much about novel writing. I will just give you some opinions from my perspective as an ordinary reader. First, let's talk about the advantages 1. The logic is smooth. There is no conflict between the left and right brains. Readers who like a smooth story logic can choose to read it. At least as far as I can see, I have not found any loopholes in the story logic. 2. As an online novel, some popular and playful language can entertain readers very well. Although it is a work with a relatively serious background and theme, the occasional Internet language will dispel some of the seriousness. However, this work is one that should be relaxed when you are relaxing and should be serious when you are serious, so you can watch it with confidence. 3. The author is a textual researcher. Many things in the work can be found in historical facts. Those who like to study this stuff are really blessed. The worldview is also unified. Secondly, let's talk about the disadvantages: 1. The creation of the heroine and other characters needs to be enriched. At this stage, I think the description of the heroine is still shallow. I hope that the heroine can be described in more depth later, and I also hope that more exciting characters will appear in the follow-up. 2. There are typos in some places, some minor errors in word order, and dialectalization of sentences. I would rather modify the dialectalization part so that readers can better understand the article, eh Finally, let me say something I personally want to say: Come on! I think whether it is painting or writing, it is a very laborious and laborious thing, especially in this situation where the gain outweighs the loss and it is purely for love. Stars cast a galaxy, I hope you can continue to create! Support!

Orthodox Western fantasy novels here means that the author's writing is very orthodox. The world view of the novel is very rigorous, but I almost gave up on it. Through the struggle between the protagonist and the villain, the infrastructure political struggle is very well written, just like the elf princess said in the article, it is very fairy tale-like. There are some places where the word count seems a bit too high, but it doesn't hinder reading. The author please update more quickly, it's not enough!

It's a pretty good book. When I first encountered Western fantasy, it gave me the feeling of a worldview that was different from Eastern fantasy and an indescribable sense of epicness. But later Western fantasy didn't have that sense of epicness (or maybe I didn't find it), and this book gave me a vague sense of epicness. I hope the author can update it soon! Especially looking forward to the follow-up plot! Please add more!

The writing is exquisite, the description of daily life is detailed, and the life of each character is vividly described in such a miserable world. It shines with the light of ideals. Each story is intertwined with reality and ideals. If you think the world will get better, this book is worth reading. Each character is very three-dimensional, and they all have their own reasons to drive them to do what they do.

When I saw 124, I felt like it was a standard-style western fantasy farming novel. It was pretty good to pass the time. I didn't feel that there was anything particularly outstanding or impressive about it. Normally, it would hover around 3-4 stars, but the author really did it for love. More than 100 comments and 900,000 words were written. Hard-working people shouldn't be anonymous.

The start is amazing. I really like this kind of start without intrigue and family unity.

The master of gold mining is here, the detailed research is commendable, and the writing style is also to my liking.

It must be praised, the author's literary skills are still very good, I hope to put more effort into the plot (ps, you must finish it for me, the author is big [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss])

'So I should praise the author and hope that the great author will update five times today! ' (The boy imitated the prayers of adults and used sincere sentences that were not decorated with fancy words to reflect the true portrayal of his heart)

I felt relieved when I saw it was all five stars. I used to wonder why there are more than 100 pictures but no ratings yet. Because I didn't read the book before reading it, I subconsciously thought that this book should be about 9 o'clock. But when I clicked on it two days ago to read it, I found that there were no ratings. Today I'm going to make up for the five stars [Blow a kiss]

Excellent work, quite outstanding for a farming novel, and the experience at the beginning is even more exciting. The three views of the protagonist are very upright and very in line with my taste. The only pity is that no one stopped to appreciate it, resulting in a low rating.

The writing is okay, but I'm still not used to separation. Even if I know that if I want to change, someone must sacrifice. I'm a little sentimental. It's a good book, but I can't see the sadness (it's just a personal emotion, don't worry about it)

It's very good. It's the best novel among all the novels I've read on Tomato. I just don't know why it's not recommended at 200,000 words, but it's really good.

I just realized that I haven't commented yet. This book is very beautiful, the characters are very vivid, and the author's writing style is also very good. I just don't know why the rating is so low. I think it is a rare and good book. I strongly recommend reading it.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking lord story. I hope the author can persevere and write it to the end [please update]

The writing is very good. I don't want eunuchs. The novels I have read before are all eunuchs. Keep up the writing.

It's a relatively slow-burning book, but I felt a lot after reading it. The current number of words is just right for killing.

A rare and excellent Western fantasy work

It's particularly good-looking. The male protagonist is the kind of person who has very upright views and a good foundation. He is not a virgin and has a good world view. The story of the minor character is also particularly good-looking. Oh my God, the ratings are finally open. It's so good. I love watching it.

The author's writing is good, but it doesn't suit me. As I read it, I gradually became tired of it. There were too many similarities among the sea of ​​books. Support the author

It's a rare good book, but it's too short and not enough to read! The book is very good, but I don't know why so few people have read it, but I still hope the author can keep writing, come on!

Extremely excellent, rare for tomatoes. Great book, no need to say more.

Very interesting, the male protagonist is very charming

It feels like I haven't seen it for a long time. It's a very orthodox Western fantasy novel, a bit orthodox to the point of being ridiculous. The author's writing style in some parts is really good👍

A single spark can start a prairie fire!

Looking forward to the completion of this book

Still reading, as an orthodox western fantasy fan, the author's writing style is also pretty good🥵 It's really hairless, especially in the war scenes. I could see two drops of urine🥵🥵🥵If you haven't read this book, your phone will be like a brick😡

Hiss~ Why is the rating so low?

Give it a five-star support. So far, there are no poisonous points. You can take a look.

A very orthodox western fantasy lord story with a single female protagonist. It is very interesting. Some parts are very well written, such as the recently updated Blood of the Wise Man chapter. Unfortunately, not many people read it.