Zhu Xian: Become a Disciple of Tian Buyi and Hold the Sword Dazhu Peak

I looked at it last time and it was taken off the shelves. I wonder if I can finish it this time.

To be honest, it's really good. It has great potential. It's the best Zhu Xian fanfic I've ever read. The content is very good, but the author doesn't know how to break it into paragraphs, which makes it less popular. It's always written in one paragraph and it doesn't look good, but it's really good.

Author, can you update it soon? One chapter a day, it's hard to read! It's so short, it makes me want to keep reading. You don't want readers to say you're short! Release the inventory [please update]

Yes, yes, I like the protagonist who practices Taoism to have a higher level of understanding. He can develop his own unique magical powers, and suddenly realizes that the mind and the world are coexisting, and his realm rises rapidly.

The plot is very good, and there are not too many changes to the original work. Not only does it have some freshness, but it also responds to the original work objectively. I personally like it very much. It's just that the author is too slow to update [cry][cry]

I don't know if Tomato has the copyright of Zhu Xian now, but I know that you were banned once. I just watched it and then it was gone. I still have to be careful.

I like the protagonist of this kind of creation method, and the writing is well-organized. It must be five stars.

Why did it become another book? I am reading it with great enthusiasm.

I hope the heroine is Tian Linger. I rarely watch her. I feel like she is pretty good in all aspects.

I hope the heroine is Lu Xueqi

Suddenly I found it was taken off the shelves. I actually like to read the stories written by the author, it's like watching Zhu Xian when I was a kid. I hope the author has a happy life, and I hope I have a chance to see the next work. Imperfection is also a kind of growth

It's actually pretty good, but there are still some glitches. I haven't figured out who the heroine is yet, but I feel that there should be a heroine based on the current emotional line. Keep up the good work author!

It's okay, but personally I still prefer Xiaofan and Xueqi to be together. I don't like Xiaofan and Baguio to be together. Don't blame me if you don't like it.

Looks good, okay

This directory seems to have nothing to do with the content.

Why is it different?

Why was it taken off the shelves last time?

Come on, give me a five-star review

Good, good, good Read it chapter by chapter.

I've watched a little bit so far, it's pretty good.

Good-looking, really good-looking

Good guy, the more I write, the more I get into the sea. This is not invincible

Why wasn't it taken off the shelves? ? ? ? ?

It's pretty good, but has the author discovered it? Already strung together! The content shown in this book has become something else. Let's have some snacks.

The score is a bit low, 8.5 Is still good.

The author is back again, for the third time

The writing is not rigorous but the plot is pretty good

Overall, it's pretty good. It's quite novel that he basically doesn't interfere with Xiaofan's fate.

It's quite nice, but some of the paragraphs are really too long and I don't even break them down, which seems cumbersome.

I feel like this book has great potential, and it would definitely be good to continue writing it.