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Personally, don't criticize me if you don't like it. There is absolutely no problem with the writing being bad. I especially hope that the author himself will not criticize me. Thank you. I'm halfway through watching it, so I'll write a review first. Although the protagonist is Guo Jia, it doesn't weaken the others, which is great. What I mean is that for example, there are 8 ways to solve a problem. The protagonist can name 3-4, and others can also name 1-2 or 2-3. This is good. Everyone has their own contribution, not a background board. The rest is about suggestions. I really hope the author can finish it. 1 I hope the system problem can be clarified. In the first two chapters, it was said that there was no system, but then it suddenly appeared, and then disappeared again. To this day, I still don't know whether there is a system, including the identity of the protagonist's time traveler. 2 I hope some lubricants can be added to the text. There was no feeling at all when Wang Kuang died. Readers can only see that the text is not two sentences about them sharing life and death. They can imagine how deep their friendship was by talking about the world over wine. I think the text should add some plot of everyone getting along in private. Now it feels like I have been in math class without recess. 3. Is this a problem? Because some people like it and some don't. It's a segmentation issue. I feel it's a bit confusing. It can be divided into camp a and camp b, but I think the segmentation method of camp a's tail and b's beginning is open to question. Keep it on the bookshelf, hoping to write better and better. Finally, a small unrealistic wish, hoping that there will be no cp

Great, worth watching.

It's very well written and enjoyable to read. Can the author add a few more chapters every day?

It's beautiful, the author writes really well