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Not bad, it's also quite unique among tribal survival stories. However, it develops relatively quickly and feels similar to an outline. Although some developments are not very reasonable, they are still worth looking at. In more than 200 chapters, elements of cultivating immortality appear, but only briefly. Not developed in depth.

You can teach your tribe a song, exclusive to the Yan tribe. This is a cultural guide.

If you write carefully and describe the details well, more people will see it. Houses are built, walls are enlarged and the camp is enlarged. Hunting guards have clear division of labor. The logistics group, hunting group and gathering group all have responsible leaders.

The five-star red flag is fluttering in the wind, and the victory song is so loud. How about I give it to you and give you a blessing? Keep up the hard work. There are a few more chapters.

Good, really good, very good.

Well written and not verbose

The writing is very detailed, very realistic, and very interesting.

It's okay, the author is careful

Very good, well written

Sounds good, sounds good, sounds good, sounds good, sounds good

The history of human development, the perseverance, the courage to face the future, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

A bit fast, with a good sense of rhythm (not disjointed)