The Body-Training World Gets Bad News: I Usher in the Age of Qi Refining

I think I can take a look at it. For me, the only bad thing is the character of Zheng Shiqing. There are too many words and inks, and the female channel has a domineering personality. She will not get sick when she meets the protagonist. It is outrageous that a young lady enters a bar and is kidnapped (the bodyguard is so weak). There is also a spirit in it that recalls a person who looks similar to the protagonist. It cannot be the heroine. If you really want a heroine, Yan Shuang is good.

It looks good, but I don't understand why the previous ones were given low marks. So far, it's not too bad. There are indeed some areas that aren't handled particularly well, but in my opinion, it's not serious enough to deduct points and I won't watch it. If your worldview doesn't collapse, things will get better later on.

Why hasn't it been updated in a few days? In fact, the writing is quite good. The plot is very interesting except for the eccentric eldest lady. Now the main character appears in front of people and it is very natural. I hope the author will stick to it.

90 Points, a very nice new book. The 10 points deducted are because of the different understanding of the cultivation system, which has nothing to do with ordinary people. In my understanding, each meridians of the human body are connected to each other. The so-called opening of meridians in practice is to open up the connections between meridians, just like the Yangtze River and the Yellow River.

Chapter 48: Avoiding poison, the protagonist doesn't have a mouth and can't explain [awkward laugh] In fact, I suggest that if you don't know how to write about female protagonists and female supporting characters, you shouldn't do it. Copying it mechanically will only be offensive.

The fitness coach accepts an old lady as his disciple at the beginning, which is strange. Although the subsequent plot is cliché and classic, it should be written by an old author with some age and experience.

It's not difficult to put quality products in this book, but you may not be able to get good results if you put tomatoes in it.

This book is becoming more and more exciting. The previous writing was a bit mediocre, but the protagonist became more exciting after reaching the first level of transcendence. The author put a lot of effort into the fighting scenes, which is definitely above 8.5 Points.

It's pretty, but not in the rhythm of Tomato

The concept of super martial arts is a bit vague. On the surface, it means extraordinary martial arts, so low martial arts is enough to be superhuman. This article is also written in the category of low martial arts 🤔