Cultivating Immortality Through Internal Alchemy

This book lacks the supplement of psychological description and world view setting, and is a bit dry and boring. For example, in the section about Thunder God and Lightning Mother, we should not only write about "good talent" in the dialogue, but also write about how many other subjects in the same realm failed to pass the thunder pool and other trials, how many people can gain a lot from the trial like the protagonist, and how many people just barely survive the trial without getting any decent gains from it. The same is true in other places. Most of the content is only dialogue, lacking the supplement of psychological description and world view setting, and does not say whether there is any and Other monks conduct transactions. It is not mentioned whether the monks today are gathered together under the framework of family or sect, whether the monks have an official department, and whether the transactions between monks are in the underground black market or inside the building. These are not mentioned at all. They are just focused on exploring. A new path, but to be honest, it is difficult for me to assume the role of a leader who is pioneering a new path, because I am just an ordinary person, and I am asked to pioneer a new path, regardless of whether I have the ability or not. From a mental point of view, it is difficult for me to adapt to this change in identity! Of course, it's not about opening up new paths, it's just about improving the exercises, establishing sects, establishing esoteric religions, etc. Regardless of my ability, I can still take on the role.

Great, very detailed writing,