From Office Drone to Fire Phoenix: My Special Forces Career

The heroine's growth line is okay, and the Golden Finger doesn't feel too abrupt or fragmented. I didn't give it full marks because I'm a bit nauseous about this type of writing. Anyone who writes about Fire Phoenix will randomly pick one of the instructors to be the CP. No matter how good the heroine is, I don't know if it's because of the TV series that she basically falls in love with the instructor. I feel that choosing a female special forces soldier is like choosing a concubine for a male instructor, even if the CP is not a soldier or a training instructor.

It's quite good to watch. In fact, I have always disliked the arrangement of the emotional lines in the original novel and the TV series. The author has done a good job in changing this. For me, as long as it is not too embarrassing or outrageous, I can watch it. It can be seen that the author is quite immature in some places, but the flaws are not hidden. Overall, it is good (just a personal opinion of course)

The more interesting setting is from social animals to special forces, haha. There is a counterattack process, but the overall story is still following the plot. There are not many obvious adjustments, and the system's cheats are relatively large. However, the heroine's character is still relatively distinct, and she has been working hard, so she is quite good-looking.

The author is really good. This is the third good-looking Fire Phoenix novel I have read since I started college. The emotional line between Lin Fan and the King of Hell is very smooth and does not develop as soon as it starts. It feels like a small bridge and flowing water to me, which is very comfortable. Lei Ye's emotional line is a little fast, but it's nothing compared to the full text. When I was a child, I cried miserably when the God of Thunder was sacrificed. I always thought it was fake, and Ye Cunxin's mother went to jail, which always made me feel that Ye Cunxin suffered too much, but this novel made up for my regrets. I feel that every character in the book is well written. I highly recommend it. I didn't skip a chapter and read it page by page. The only regret I have is that it's too short. I still want to continue reading. 😄😄Please ask the author to write a side story about Ouyang Qian and Zhang Chenchu. I particularly liked this pair when I was a kid. The reason for the four stars is that I'm a bit biased towards Tan. I really don't want to see this. In fact, everyone has shortcomings. She was chosen as an instructor because she is very strong. There is no need to focus on a person's shortcomings. You have to look at a person comprehensively, and there are some highlights. The protagonist is a bit grabby.

It's very nice. I just want to ask if our little leaf has any cp. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Very good! The heroine's growth and emotional changes are well written, making up for the shortcomings of the original plot. I also quite like the King of Hell in the original drama. He is not handsome in the popular sense. His identity as a sniper does give him a bit of charm. The strong observation, calmness and carefulness unique to his profession give people the feeling of a tiger sniffing the roses. His comments about female soldiers made me feel that he did not look down on women. In addition, it is rare that this fanfic does not include Tan Xiaolin. Although I don't like Lei Tan's emotional line in the original drama, I like Tan Xiaolin very much. She is a talented, intelligent, and introspective mature woman. However, many fanfics completely blackmail her, and I feel that she is not worthy of Lei Zhan, which makes me feel that this world is too man-loving. The group of girls described by the author each have their own cuteness, and they feel the same as when I watched the drama, which is very good.

2025.10.3 20.50 The advantage of finishing the article is that you can read it in two or three days of free time. The heroine is a social beast who counterattacks after time travel. Although there is a system, she is not the kind of super golden finger. She still needs to rely on the heroine to master the corresponding skills through study and exercise. This seems to be the author's first book, and I feel that it is well written. When I read Fire Phoenix, I felt that it was a pity that Lei Zhan did not survive in the end. This article makes up for the regret. Although the CP of Lei Zhan and Tan Xiaolin was broken, to be honest, I felt that they did not match well when I read it.

The writing is pretty good, but could there be more interaction with the King of Hell? I feel that there is too little daily life, and there is also the one I studied at night. I can write it like a dream. I can learn knowledge and sleep well at the same time. I train during the day and rewind at night. By the next day, I still can't recover my spirit and it is difficult to hold on. This book is about Tan Lei. It is Lei Ye, Tan and the military doctor. The author keeps up the good work and needs to be improved.

It's super beautiful, the writing is very delicate, and the emotional lines could be a little more stretched. The male protagonist has a crush on the female protagonist, but the female protagonist seems to be half-enlightened. There have been scenes in the TV series, and some of my own changes have been added, so it's quite fresh. Still relatively fresh

This is one of the best fanfics I have read among the dozen or so. The protagonist's growth path is full, and the emotional links are not abrupt, including Lei Ye's emotional line. It is also very smooth. This feeling of not completely relying on system performance to improve oneself can really be said to be the top of the genre. I like it💕