After Dying from Overwork, I Joined the Fire Phoenix Team

The heroine's growth line is okay, and the Golden Finger doesn't feel too abrupt or fragmented. I didn't give it full marks because I'm a bit nauseous about this type of writing. Anyone who writes about Fire Phoenix will randomly pick one of the instructors to be the CP. No matter how good the heroine is, I don't know if it's because of the TV series that she basically falls in love with the instructor. I feel that choosing a female special forces soldier is like choosing a concubine for a male instructor, even if the CP is not a soldier or a training instructor.

It's quite good to watch. In fact, I have always disliked the arrangement of the emotional lines in the original novel and the TV series. The author has done a good job in changing this. For me, as long as it is not too embarrassing or outrageous, I can watch it. It can be seen that the author is quite immature in some places, but the flaws are not hidden. Overall, it is good (just a personal opinion of course)

The more interesting setting is from social animals to special forces, haha. There is a counterattack process, but the overall story is still following the plot. There are not many obvious adjustments, and the system's cheats are relatively large. However, the heroine's character is still relatively distinct, and she has been working hard, so she is quite good-looking.

It's very nice. I just want to ask if our little leaf has any cp. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

The author is really good. This is the third good-looking Fire Phoenix novel I have read since I started college. The emotional line between Lin Fan and the King of Hell is very smooth and does not develop as soon as it starts. It feels like a small bridge and flowing water to me, which is very comfortable. Lei Ye's emotional line is a little fast, but it's nothing compared to the full text. When I was a child, I cried miserably when the God of Thunder was sacrificed. I always thought it was fake, and Ye Cunxin's mother went to jail, which always made me feel that Ye Cunxin suffered too much, but this novel made up for my regrets. I feel that every character in the book is well written. I highly recommend it. I didn't skip a chapter and read it page by page. The only regret I have is that it's too short. I still want to continue reading. 😄😄Please ask the author to write a side story about Ouyang Qian and Zhang Chenchu. I particularly liked this pair when I was a kid. The reason for the four stars is that I'm a bit biased towards Tan. I really don't want to see this. In fact, everyone has shortcomings. She was chosen as an instructor because she is very strong. There is no need to focus on a person's shortcomings. You have to look at a person comprehensively, and there are some highlights. The protagonist is a bit grabby.

2025.10.3 20.50 The advantage of finishing the article is that you can read it in two or three days of free time. The heroine is a social beast who counterattacks after time travel. Although there is a system, she is not the kind of super golden finger. She still needs to rely on the heroine to master the corresponding skills through study and exercise. This seems to be the author's first book, and I feel that it is well written. When I read Fire Phoenix, I felt that it was a pity that Lei Zhan did not survive in the end. This article makes up for the regret. Although the CP of Lei Zhan and Tan Xiaolin was broken, to be honest, I felt that they did not match well when I read it.

The writing is pretty good, but could there be more interaction with the King of Hell? I feel that there is too little daily life, and there is also the one I studied at night. I can write it like a dream. I can learn knowledge and sleep well at the same time. I train during the day and rewind at night. By the next day, I still can't recover my spirit and it is difficult to hold on. This book is about Tan Lei. It is Lei Ye, Tan and the military doctor. The author keeps up the good work and needs to be improved.

It's super beautiful, the writing is very delicate, and the emotional lines could be a little more stretched. The male protagonist has a crush on the female protagonist, but the female protagonist seems to be half-enlightened. There have been scenes in the TV series, and some of my own changes have been added, so it's quite fresh. Still relatively fresh

The heroine has a pretty good personality, except for the fact that she likes to shake her head hahahaha. Is it fair to say that Lei Zhan and the heroine have more of a CP feel to them... He also has a lot of previous scenes, but in comparison, the emotional scenes with the King of Hell are a bit stiff😇

It's very interesting. Although the system said that the plot development should be the same as that of Fire Phoenix, the author cleverly handled the plot in it, making the original plot development more reasonable and the training more professional. Come on, author!