When Snow Falls Upon the Sea

If you look at it now, it's still okay, but some transitions feel a bit stiff. The words "sudden" and "sudden" are commonly used, which are a bit stiff. The author must be a newcomer, right? Then the meeting and chatting between the male and female protagonists gave people a deliberate feeling, with traces of being arranged, but as far as I can see now, it is still okay. For me, being able to post it and daring to post it has already surpassed many people (such as me). Come on, author 🤭