HP Discusses the Feasibility of Saving the World by Writing Fairy Tales

The characters are very full-bodied, especially Tom. Personally, I don't feel that there is a big OOC. We, Xiaotang, are full of ideas and interests, so we set out for our wives. Secondly, there is the protagonist. The setting is very novel. Who is the genius who came up with the identity of the investigator? The character design is also a little bit sometimes. Indifferent, sometimes very kind, with that sense of divinity and inhumanity (this makes him seem to be a character in the gray area. He founded the University of Michigan and rescued orphans, but he also didn't care about the basilisk he had fed with his own hands before. He was good with Tom, received the most trust from Dumbledore, and was Abu's younger brother) The most important thing is that the fairy tales he wrote are super beautiful and very charming. The male protagonist pays meticulous attention to the surroundings. He doesn't like doing homework but loves writing fairy tales. When his life was threatened and he needed to win the Nobel Prize, he chose a "fairy tale" that was least likely to win. Unlike the novels I have read before, the male protagonists do not feel forced. It is just that White, as a writer, said to Tom: Can I write about you? At that time, I had already consciously rolled into the bottom of the pit (I can't do it anymore, does anyone understand) (the author has many golden words).

It was the first time I saw such an article on Tomato. The author's writing style is really good. What moved me the most was "It is not driven by fear, it is not insatiable, it does not bring panic, there is no need to be urgent, and it will not be lost even if you don't hold on." This description of love, I I'm not very good at describing this feeling. After reading it, I felt like I was enlightened. I felt like I was getting goosebumps all over. I seemed to really understand the meaning of love. This is the meaning of reading this book. It can bring me new inspiration. I really feel the love in your writing. The description of the relationship between Tom and Bai Yanxia is also amazing. I feel that Tom is slowly understanding love. This feeling of being redeemed by Bai Yanxia, and there are many descriptions of the protagonist saving people in the article. The descriptions are very beautiful. He is not a Virgin, he has a reverence for life. He is a human being, so he shows mercy to the suffering of similar people. This compassionate and clear feeling makes me feel that the author is as comfortable and beautiful as his words. I was so excited after reading it. I talked a lot. My expression was not very good. I really hope I can see the ending of this book. Thank you to the author for letting me see such beautiful words and love.

This book is really beautiful, the writing is delicate, and the more you read, the more you read. The relationship between the two is more long-term. I really like this style of emotional description. The only drawback is that the progress is a little slow. It is also because I have to advance the content of the fairy tale, the events of the previous life, and the events of this life at the same time. But it's better to be slower, as it can pave the way for more details and foreshadowing. Although the update speed is a little slower, it is updated weekly, but the content is completely sufficient. In fact, I think it is better to update a little slower and spend more time polishing the content and details of the work. As long as the teacher does not cheat me, I will always follow the teacher!

It's very interesting, and can be said to be better than most hp fans. The two protagonists get along very naturally, and the plot is smooth. The main thing is that I can't confuse the first and second chapters with the fairy tale content, which is shocking. I hope there will be more updates, come on

Is a good book. Although I am a little uncomfortable with CP, I like the ability of the protagonist, and the character image and story development are very full. The Chinese version of the article is also good. I like the section of "The White Tower in the Painting". The wonder and infinite anticipation of the magical world unfolding before my eyes are vividly written on the page.

The writing is really good and has a very graphic feel. When I read it, I felt like I was watching a movie with gentle colors. I really want to know what happened to Bai Yanxia and Tom. Xiao Bai is so charming. It is just natural for Xiao Fu to fall in love with him. Voldemort, you watched your best friend who once protected you attack you. What were you thinking at that moment after you retreated and before you became furious?

It's very beautiful, with a very delicate feel, and the Chinese text is also very nice. I like listening to the book when I see the Chinese text, and I feel like someone is telling me a fairy tale. In short, I really like this article. It looks like a beautiful and cute little cake with rich fruit fillings inside!

I like it so much, it's so good-looking. Bai Bai is a very unique and charming person. He often makes surprising statements but always has his own logic. Although I don't know who the investigator is, it doesn't affect my reading. There are many intersections between the past and reality, similar to the writing method of the Patriarch of Demonic Dao. When writing the present, the past time is interspersed, and the background of the story is gradually explained. The author's fairy tales are also very well written. Some of them make me feel like I have seen them before, but they are different. Support the author greatly [top post][top post][blowing kiss] I really like this book. Although the story is relatively dull, it really grabbed me. Please update it soon. I feel so uncomfortable reading a little bit every day, but I can't bear to save it. I want to read it as soon as it is updated.

It's very beautiful, the character of the protagonist is very successful, and the fairy tale plot interspersed with it is very good (≧∇≦*) Well, did the author stay up late to write it? I feel that this is one of the Harry Potter fanfics I have read, and I feel that the protagonist's character is one of the best\^O^/ I'll leave you with this comment for now. If it's finished, I'll follow up later [laughs] Note, this is the only Potter fanfic I haven't skipped to read.

It's really good to read, the Chinese content is also good, and it also echoes the plot of the novel. I like many of the words😍, and I drew a lot of lines. Great support for the author! White and Liddell are also very good. Although some people say that the emotional line is a bit slow (nothing against it), I think it is very good and heart-warming, and I hope the author can add more. It is a bit lacking. To be honest, I have wanted to follow the author all my life. I never expected to find such gold. I am really surprised. (ง •̀_•́)งCome on

I like Xiaobai's stories very much, especially the passage that Lily excerpted to Harry in "Although We Have Nothing in Our Hands". After reading it, I knew that I would be completely immersed in it. Fairy tales will not always be beautiful, but everyone is already running on a better road (Glad (No, what am I happy about)

I finished reading it in the past two days while working. I declare that as long as it can be finished, it will be my favorite HP novel in the past 26 years. It is charming and full of hope. Moreover, the interweaving of some characters' complaints will really make me happier the more I read it. I haven't read a novel in such a relaxed and natural way for a long time.

It's very, very, very beautiful. Whether it's the fairy tale written by White or what happened in the first and second episodes, they are all very beautiful! ! ! !

What a great book! The setting is very novel, the character creation is also good, and the writing is very gentle, especially the fairy tale, which has the feeling of innocence of a child (and it really shocked me when I watched "Birds of Paradise", I like it so much...) The author is so awesome ovo, I hope you can update it more! I really like Xiaobai Here is a more serious review: The writing style of this article is a bit like a landscape painting with low saturation and warm tones, giving it a slightly warm feeling. The first week is a story about some common experiences between Xiaobai and Xiaotang. It doesn't feel very OOC, especially the discussion about "love". Although Tom's psychology is not written in detail, it can be reflected in his behavior (there are also some explanations in the comments, which are worth reading) The little fairy tale is a super beautiful, tender and meaningful little story. The protagonists will encounter setbacks and losses, but in the process they strengthen their goals, become themselves, and gain what they want. It also reflects White's gentleness... As for whether you have any comments or suggestions... I think the teacher has written very well. The whole text is delicate and gentle. He is just writing his own story quietly. It would be great if the teacher writes according to his own ideas [Sending Hearts] If I really want to say it, it might be a little lacking (I finished reading it in one day qwq). Or can the short stories be organized into a complete chapter at the end? Everyone can go and see it again, and maybe you can gain something new. Highly recommended! (This is already the second time I have posted it... Please let me review it...)

My wife's writing style is very good. The Chinese-Chinese plot story is worth reading online. It also greatly complements the main story and the protagonist's character. The writing style is kind and touching. I am particularly surprised to see such a good combination of Chinese and Chinese writing! ! Xiaobai is a time traveler investigator, a mysterious blood heir, a popular fairy tale writer who is competing for the Nobel Prize, and a friendly and cordial classmate and roommate (?). Each identity is fleshed out and charming! ! The interaction with Tom and the change in the guide's favorability are also very delicious! ! ! ! I can't even boast enough. I dug up art treasures and delicacies, and tied them all in one go. Anyway, I just wish my wife couldn't write 80,000 words in one night [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying]

The writing and plot are online, which is more suitable for reading slowly, otherwise the timeline will be easily confused.

I won't say anything else, just five stars. The author's Chinese text is very interesting, and the switching between Chinese and Chinese writing styles is also very clear. The setting of the protagonist is very special, and the character logic does not make people feel disconnected. The only problem is that it is too slow [crying] [crying]

It's tied. Let's rate it. This book is very unique. The first and second chapters are interspersed with narration. There are paragraphs of Chinese text at the end of the chapter, but even so, it does not appear cluttered. The transitions are smooth and smooth and can echo each other. There are also some very deep and beautiful sentences, many metaphors and foreshadowings. The language style is also very distinctive. It can be seen that the author has strong literary ability! Furthermore, the protagonist's personality is really interesting! Forgive me for not knowing how to express it. I can only say that as long as you have read the full text, you will definitely fall in love with Xiao Bai. Some of the plots made me laugh so hard that my stomach ached. Hahahaha. And this is the best CP Riddler I have read so far! (In fact, I personally feel that for now, there are more characterizations. I also have a good grasp of Riddler's character and he is not OOC at all. Of course, the two of them still have a sense of CP. The second volume finally has an ambiguous plot.) At the same time, it is also a long and thin emotional line that I like! At present, the story is generally bland and daily-style. There are also some exciting confrontations and battles, but it will not make people feel bored but is very comfortable. There are also some elements of resistance in the main HP. The only problem is that there are too few. It is basically updated weekly now, but each chapter is 4000-9000 words, which is very enjoyable to read. There are many secrets about Xiaobai that have not been revealed. Author Jiang, write quickly, come on ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ Many sentences in this book are very warm and touching, including each text in Chinese. It really feels like a fairy tale and is very well written.

The author's writing is online, and the protagonist is very charming, and I can understand why someone like Tom would fall in love with him. The Chinese text written by the author is also very interesting, and the characters currently have no OOC for this. In short, it is very interesting! Highly recommended! [Blow kiss]

The writing style is delicate and gentle, and the Chinese style of writing is very novel. Just like what was mentioned in the article, "All characters should be written as 'protagonists', with full-scale personalities. When a group of living people are put together, sparks will naturally collide." Similarly, the supporting characters also have a sense of living people. The group portrait in the first fairy tale reflects the children in the orphanage, with nothing in their hands but such sincere feelings. Everything in the war was so insignificant. Ada felt empty when her relatives took her away. Her fleeting years came to an abrupt end and she went to the new world. The emotional line between Tom and Bai Yanxia is smooth and natural, and the bits and pieces of Tang's dialogue slowly accumulate into habits, but they love each other without knowing it is very good. Xiaobai always felt like he was not from here, he was light-hearted, and he didn't seem to have any particular desire except to complete the mission and go back. Very good yummyyummy By the way, will we see Xiaobai's Nobel Prize Award Ceremony (?) Peace and Literature Prize? By the way, how long will it take until we get to know each other? I'm looking forward to falling apart. The last snake bird 99

The writing style is very gentle and delicate, and the fairy tales written by the author are also super beautiful, with the purity and innocence of children. The protagonist is a very gentle person, but he is also a bit nervous in his gentleness, and he often keeps himself quiet.

Personally, I feel that this book is very well written. The author's Chinese text is a true fairy tale. After reading it, I feel warm in my heart. Moreover, the writing style of the author has a feeling of still water running deep. Whether it is the friendship line with Harry or the emotional line with Tom in the first episode, they are all described very delicately. The characters are not OOC either.

It's quite delicious~ The protagonist's character is really interesting, with such a weird but reasonable brain circuit. However, the pace is a bit slow, I hope it will be improved in the future. Should I say it or not, it's great, many people have a better ending.

I came here for the fairy tale at first, but I was persuaded to quit for a while by the confusing perspective story. I stayed for the fairy tale. In the end, the boss lived up to me. (Isn't the word "disappointment" too strong? Forget it, the meaning is almost the same) This week-long love story is super delicious, and Xiaobai's sense of pseudo-humanity is great! Well, I personally am actually very interested in the University of Michigan, but I'm not interested enough to go out of my way to check it out, so I'm hoping that the boss will let Xiaobai reveal a little bit about it to his roommates or that there will be some little easter eggs in the University of Michigan that Xiaobai founded. My favorite part is the fairy tale, so delicious! (It's so shocking that I can't describe it, it's so delicious) Apart from the emotional line, I'm most looking forward to the fairy tale at the end. After finishing the fairy tale, I'm looking forward to more plots featuring White in the second week. Now I want to watch the complete "Twelve Months", I really like creating short stories! I love reading the mention of roommates between the lines! I like the relationship line, when can I fall in love? ! I'm also interested in the book about having eternal friends. Please write it quickly and finish it soon! All in all, I am very satisfied with this rating. (Referring to my 5 stars)

A great book, a breath of fresh air in Tomato, with good writing, literary talent and knowledge. It is not the kind of book that arouses emotions in the mind and then disappears and is forgotten. This impressive book is worthy of repeated thoughts and inferences in the mind. It gives readers space to think instead of pushing everything to the fast food flow.

I've read chapter 40 so far, and it's very interesting. The writing style is delicate and gentle, eloquent, and the logic is clear. The transition between memories and the present is very clever and not confusing at all. Moreover, I really like those fairy tales. They are worth pondering, but just reading the words and understanding the superficial storyline is enough to be childish. The protagonist is a gentle, firm, sober and tolerant person. He occasionally escapes and is out of tune, but more often than not he is reliable and trustworthy. He is loved by everyone because he is good enough, and I like him very much. Can you give me a big surprise? When I woke up, I found that the article was finished... It's so good, so good.

It's very well written. Just like the protagonist's previous identity, the author's plot rhythm is also like a bedtime story. It's natural and gentle, and the text is also readable in Chinese. The score is relatively low for the first time, but don't miss out on a good book because of this.

Except that the emotional line is really slow, there is nothing else (if I insist on saying it, I hope the author can transform into a code machine (bushi)) Woooooooooooooooooooooooooo, author, come on, author, write quickly, my curiosity is completely aroused! I can't wait to watch the next plot, it's very heart-breaking and uncomfortable (but I may not be able to catch up because of the boarding). The teacher waited for me to draw fanart for Xiaobai and Xiaofu when I was free (oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo… (Also, fairy tales are really beautiful. Thank you teacher for telling these stories to readers.) "ψ(｀∇´)ψ"ψ(｀∇´)ψ"ψ(｀∇´)ψ

It's very beautiful. It's really hard to find such a warm fairy tale style feeling. White is also cute (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good. The first and second chapters are interspersed with narratives and Chinese text, and the integration is very good. You can find the source of inspiration for fairy tales in the first chapter, and you can also find the influence of White in the second chapter [Blowing Kiss]

The characters are rich, the emotional drama is rich, and the author is very cute. The writing is really beautiful, a masterpiece among masterpieces. There are no surprises in the whole book. Everyone is a very cute and well-behaved baby. There is not much OOC. The original plot is logical and like another ending in a parallel world. The author should also live a good life.