I! Yuan Lang's Dream Soldier!

Four points, you can still read it, the writing is quite delicate. This book is more about smoothing over regrets. The author didn't control the tone well in the first part, and the two men's writing was too boring and crooked, but it's not so serious in the second part, and it will stick to the original work a little bit, so as not to make people laugh. It's very good. The author is also listening to readers' suggestions. Please update more. Urgent update! One update a day is too little! It feels like sending a beggar away. After reading other Soldier Assault fanfics, I almost got angry and took them away. Only when I came back and read them did I realize how good this one is. Can you imagine becoming a talented person and not getting into Lao A in the end? Can you imagine that Xu Sanduo is the God of Plague in the eyes of most people? It's not that Xu Sanduo doesn't work hard, he needs time. What does the adaptation of Steel Seventh Company have to do with Xu Sanduo? This can all be blamed on him. The departure of squad leader Shi Jin was indeed related to Xu Sanduo, but he later practiced hard for squad leader Shi Jin. Wu Liuyi tore Xu Sanduo's ligaments when he rescued him, but Xu Sanduo did not give up on him and insisted on holding him to the finish line. Isn't fan fiction meant to smooth over regrets? If you want to write a cool novel, there is no need to discredit the original protagonist. Just open a new one yourself. It's really annoying, eating up the traffic of Soldier Assault and cursing the original protagonist. Still this fragrance!

The writing is pretty good. But I think it is necessary to remind other friends that this book is written by a female channel. I just said it looked a bit strange, but I couldn't tell what was wrong. It wasn't until I read dozens of chapters that I realized what it was like. But to be fair, the writing is pretty good. I went to the male channel and left a good review and reminder.

◎It's a good-looking, female-channeled writing style. The awkwardness of the friendship with Xu Sanduo, a talented young man, was really unbearable when I started writing it. I gradually got used to it, and after watching it, I felt that it was okay. The male protagonist came into contact with more people, and he was gentle and tolerant to everyone, sincere, calm but not cold, and had his own character arc. ◎I like to pursue a career, and the male protagonist's combat power is improved. There is one point that I don't know whether it's a highlight or a flaw. It's that the male protagonist is reborn and has memories of his previous life. On the one hand, there was no explanation at the beginning, which resulted in me having to be the Riddler after being reborn. I was a little impatient about whether I should write or not write in my previous life. On the other hand, the male protagonist can see the shadow of his comrades in his previous life in Yuan Lang, a talented man in Xu Sanduo, and their personalities are generally consistent. Therefore, the author mentions quite a lot about his previous life, and it may be a bit annoying for readers to write too many. ◎It's still pretty good-looking so far, and the male protagonist's character and behavior are pretty good. Because Yuan Lang said that the male protagonist's natural affinity suddenly distracted him from his thoughts, and asked whether the male protagonist would be more suitable to be a commander in the grassroots army. Because the number of special forces is not large after all, but as a company commander and battalion commander at the grassroots level, the male protagonist's character seems to be better than Gao Cheng's leadership (I don't mean to displease Gao Cheng, just an example). A leader loved by all soldiers and subordinates! ◎But I'm looking forward to it no matter what I write, just don't be fooled!

It's great. Xu Sanduo amused me to death in this article. I'm so sincere. Hahaha. The seventh princess will be mad at him [laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry] What I like the most is that Squad Leader Shi didn't change his job, hehehe, he also pried the protagonist's sister and became his brother-in-law hahahaha

The writing is good, and the addition of the protagonist is not particularly abrupt. The personality of each character is also well described, giving me a very plain sense of narrative. In the neither hot nor cold weather in May, lying on the bed with the blue sky and white clouds outside, reading the novel in my hand, it was very comfortable.

It's very interesting to watch. The plot is logical and doesn't give people a sense of fragmentation. I just don't like the setting of the past and present life, but! It's very interesting to watch all day long. I'm in the top 3 of 🍅Soldier Assault fandoms. Come on, the author, more 😳

Of all the novels I have read based on soldier assaults, this one is the best. There is no system support, no deliberate following of the plot, and the protagonist does not break records at every turn and has invincible physical fitness. The only soul travel is also made reasonable by the author in a very clever way. Compared with other systems, this book is invincible and refreshing. This book is worth reading.

The characters' emotions and scenes are described delicately. In terms of characters blushing, there are people blushing around me. Who says men can't blush? Moreover, the plots that have appeared in the original work have been briefly mentioned, and many new plots have been added. It makes up for the regrets in the original work. The crazy poking of Lao Qi's lung tube is also very funny

Author, you are my god!!! The writing is really good, the writing style is delicate, the plot is smooth, and the characters are restored. I really like the character of the protagonist. It is really an article that makes money when I read it. The author designed an extremely touching character arc for Xiao Xu, allowing this character to transform from a confused state containing psychological trauma to a hopeful person who believes in his teammates and himself. The whole process was full and believable. I was really immersed in the text and felt happy for Xiao Xu. One scene that left a deep impression on me was the conversation in the car when Yuan Lang picked up Xiao Xu from 702. It was so realistic that I could even picture Yuan Lang's expression in my head. Xiao Xu's response to Yuan Lang's apology was simply the highlight of the character, allowing me to see a kind, tolerant, and determined soldier who had overcome his own fear. I hope the author will keep writing, and I will always support you!

It's beautiful. It's a rare fanfic that perfectly integrates the original work and the self-created settings. The emotional descriptions are delicate and moving, the plot does not fall into the cliche, and the comradeship is extremely touching. Among similar fanfics, this article ranks among the top three.