I! Yuan Lang's Dream Love Soldier!

Four points, you can still read it, the writing is quite delicate. This book is more about smoothing over regrets. The author didn't control the tone well in the first part, and the two men's writing was too boring and crooked, but it's not so serious in the second part, and it will stick to the original work a little bit, so as not to make people laugh. It's very good. The author is also listening to readers' suggestions. Please update more. Urgent update! One update a day is too little! It feels like sending a beggar away. After reading other Soldier Assault fanfics, I almost got angry and took them away. Only when I came back and read them did I realize how good this one is. Can you imagine becoming a talented person and not getting into Lao A in the end? Can you imagine that Xu Sanduo is the God of Plague in the eyes of most people? It's not that Xu Sanduo doesn't work hard, he needs time. What does the adaptation of Steel Seventh Company have to do with Xu Sanduo? This can all be blamed on him. The departure of squad leader Shi Jin was indeed related to Xu Sanduo, but he later practiced hard for squad leader Shi Jin. Wu Liuyi tore Xu Sanduo's ligaments when he rescued him, but Xu Sanduo did not give up on him and insisted on holding him to the finish line. Isn't fan fiction meant to smooth over regrets? If you want to write a cool novel, there is no need to discredit the original protagonist. Just open a new one yourself. It's really annoying, eating up the traffic of Soldier Assault and cursing the original protagonist. Still this fragrance!

The writing is pretty good. But I think it is necessary to remind other friends that this book is written by a female channel. I just said it looked a bit strange, but I couldn't tell what was wrong. It wasn't until I read dozens of chapters that I realized what it was like. But to be fair, the writing is pretty good. I went to the male channel and left a good review and reminder.

It's great. Xu Sanduo amused me to death in this article. I'm so sincere. Hahaha. The seventh princess will be mad at him [laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry] What I like the most is that Squad Leader Shi didn't change his job, hehehe, he also pried the protagonist's sister and became his brother-in-law hahahaha

◎It's a good-looking, female-channeled writing style. The awkwardness of the friendship with Xu Sanduo, a talented young man, was really unbearable when I started writing it. I gradually got used to it, and after watching it, I felt that it was okay. The male protagonist came into contact with more people, and he was gentle and tolerant to everyone, sincere, calm but not cold, and had his own character arc. ◎I like to pursue a career, and the male protagonist's combat power is improved. There is one point that I don't know whether it's a highlight or a flaw. It's that the male protagonist is reborn and has memories of his previous life. On the one hand, there was no explanation at the beginning, which resulted in me having to be the Riddler after being reborn. I was a little impatient about whether I should write or not write in my previous life. On the other hand, the male protagonist can see the shadow of his comrades in his previous life in Yuan Lang, a talented man in Xu Sanduo, and their personalities are generally consistent. Therefore, the author mentions quite a lot about his previous life, and it may be a bit annoying for readers to write too many. ◎It's still pretty good-looking so far, and the male protagonist's character and behavior are pretty good. Because Yuan Lang said that the male protagonist's natural affinity suddenly distracted him from his thoughts, and asked whether the male protagonist would be more suitable to be a commander in the grassroots army. Because the number of special forces is not large after all, but as a company commander and battalion commander at the grassroots level, the male protagonist's character seems to be better than Gao Cheng's leadership (I don't mean to displease Gao Cheng, just an example). A leader loved by all soldiers and subordinates! ◎But I'm looking forward to it no matter what I write, just don't be fooled!

The writing is good, and the addition of the protagonist is not particularly abrupt. The personality of each character is also well described, giving me a very plain sense of narrative. In the neither hot nor cold weather in May, lying on the bed with the blue sky and white clouds outside, reading the novel in my hand, it was very comfortable.

Of all the novels I have read based on soldier assaults, this one is the best. There is no system support, no deliberate following of the plot, and the protagonist does not break records at every turn and has invincible physical fitness. The only soul travel is also made reasonable by the author in a very clever way. Compared with other systems, this book is invincible and refreshing. This book is worth reading.

Author, you are my god! ! ! The writing is really good, the writing style is delicate, the plot is smooth, and the characters are restored. I really like the character of the protagonist. It is really an article that makes money when I read it. The author designed an extremely touching character arc for Xiao Xu, allowing this character to transform from a confused state containing psychological trauma to a hopeful person who believes in his teammates and himself. The whole process was full and believable. I was really immersed in the text and felt happy for Xiao Xu. One scene that left a deep impression on me was the conversation in the car when Yuan Lang picked up Xiao Xu from 702. It was so realistic that I could even picture Yuan Lang's expression in my head. Xiao Xu's response to Yuan Lang's apology was simply the highlight of the character, allowing me to see a kind, tolerant, and determined soldier who had overcome his own fear. I hope the author will keep writing, and I will always support you!

It's very interesting to watch. The plot is logical and doesn't give people a sense of fragmentation. I just don't like the setting of the past and present life, but! It's very interesting to watch all day long. I'm in the top 3 of 🍅Soldier Assault fandoms. Come on, the author, more [shy]

The characters' emotions and scenes are described delicately. In terms of characters blushing, there are people blushing around me. Who says men can't blush? Moreover, the plots that have appeared in the original work have been briefly mentioned, and many new plots have been added. It makes up for the regrets in the original work. The crazy poking of Lao Qi's lung tube is also very funny

Pertinent, I rarely give good reviews, but I really think it's very interesting. As long as you don't deliberately criticize CP, treat it with a normal attitude, and let nature take its course, you will easily get into it. It will be better when you see the back. Of course, you can't stop it if you want to criticize CP. Anyway, it's fine no matter what. Maybe it's also because I haven't read the original work, I've only seen clips, and I've seen very few similar themes. The four stars are just to prevent people from thinking it's a fake.

It's beautiful. It's a rare fanfic that perfectly integrates the original work and the self-created settings. The emotional descriptions are delicate and moving, the plot does not fall into the cliche, and the comradeship is extremely touching. Among similar fanfics, this article ranks among the top three.

I have always liked military novels, and I would like them even more if they are fanfics about Soldiers Assault. I have always liked Soldiers Assault. Each of the vivid characters in it is also reflected in the author's fanfic. It is well written and I will continue to support it.

I smelled your fragrant rice when I was very hungry. When can I eat again🍴[cry][cry][cry][cry]

I clicked in accidentally. I have never read the original Soldier Assault, so I just read it as a new article. I have never been exposed to military themes before. It is not bad at first glance. The author's explanation is quite clear and the characters have distinct personalities, so I read it with gusto even if I have not read the original work. The writing is spot on, and just right, and the rhythm is spot on. Overall, it's very good. Continue to support!

So beautiful! Monitor Shi doesn't have to retire anymore, his hands don't hurt anymore, Sanduo has grown up, Chengcai knows where he went wrong, update it soon [I'm about to cry]

Regardless of whether it is a male or female channel, the writing is so good. The article is very delicate, the emotions are handled very well, and it is not embarrassing at all. The characters are all very consistent with the original work👍👍👍👍👍👍

The author writes very well! The characters are well controlled and the plot is not inconsistent! It has the coldness and hardness of the military, but also a certain degree of delicacy. It blends very well and has a lot of flavor! There are just few updates [shy][shy]

The writing is very realistic. You can see the author's words from the squad leader, to the company commander, Chengcai, Xu Sanduo. The way each of them is very suitable for the TV series, and the way they speak and act can be completed in your mind.

One word: Absolute! The characters have flesh and blood and their own highlights. They are alive and not just a superficial accumulation of characters. The protagonist's mentality and growth line are clear, and the emotional description is delicate, moving and natural. It is a rare and unique article.

It's good to watch, but I especially want to know if Yuan Lang and the protagonist are CPs. Ever since I watched it, I've been thinking about this in my mind. I lost that account and got a new one to keep it. I want to know, but I don't have any definite information I know but I don't know, I can't stop thinking about it, can you tell me? It's like some TV shows I watch, there is ambiguity, but I don't know whether it counts. . So uncomfortable. . . . .

The first few chapters have a strong female pornographic flavor, and even I couldn't stand it. Later, I went farther and farther on the male channel road, but it is indeed better to keep a little straight male flavor😋

It's really beautiful. It's the only one among the fanfics. At least I haven't found one like this yet. The writing is not awkward (many fanfics are invincible at first glance and cannot be read), the overall storyline is clear, and each character is well explained. There is no exaggerated emotional narrative. It is in line with the character's personality and characteristics set by the author, and it is very comfortable to read. I really like this book and am waiting for the update every day [Love] (please give the author more time to update more)

It's really good-looking. I've been looking for a non-OOC article for a long time. This one is particularly good-looking. The descriptions of the characters are very delicate, which is very consistent with the impression of the original characters. It also makes up for a lot of regrets. Thank you very much. I hope you will come back and update it soon. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Good-looking, not as greasy as ordinary male videos that make pornographic remarks whenever they disagree.

I'm jumping to watch it. It's okay so far. Stay and observe. In addition, teacher, the protagonist in my novel is codenamed White Wolf (selected from "Newfoundland White Wolf") and the special team he established is called Lone Wolf. What a coincidence! ! ! It's just that my novel is purely for self-pleasure and will not be published [blowing kiss]

The one star deducted is because the description of individual actions is somewhat inducing, and it appears a lot in the early stages. This does not mean that it cannot be written, but it does not mean that you can't express a "like", especially when you are a soldier. You still need to pay attention to this almost explicit ambiguous relationship. Of course this is just a novel, it's not bad to give some CP [like]

It's super great, I love it, it's well written, and it fulfilled all my regrets and wishes.

It's very interesting, not mindless, the bond between comrades is also very interesting, it's easy to laugh at, I like it

The author's writing style is very delicate, Xiaoxu's inner emotional journey is very moving, and the description is very vivid. Each character has its own charm, flesh and blood, super awesome! Ouch, I can't help but give it a thumbs up, author, come on, it's great! ! ! I started reading it the day before yesterday, and I stayed up late last night to finish it. It is the first military article in my bookshelf (to be honest, I didn't realize that this subject matter had fans before, hahaha, because I am generally not interested in the subjects that most male videos are obviously directed to [laughing and crying]). After finishing today's update, I searched specifically in this section, but I haven't found anything that suits my taste yet [face covering]. (PS: Let me tell you a secret, I am seriously [secretly] taking CP hahahaha, of course CB is also very good hahahaha) I like the current rhythm very much, focusing on growth and the passion for family and country! [Like][Laugh]

This is the best Soldier Assault fan book I have ever read. The author's writing style is very good and the characters are very detailed, which makes people feel emotionally involved. The writing is so beautiful, ups and downs and exciting.