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I just found out that this is a cool article. The main reason is that the arrow shot by his sister can set the time and cannot be noticed by others, so the protagonist can watch it. Then I found that the protagonist seems to have a higher level of cultivation in the golden elixir stage. Mainly because I feel that he does not use blue bars or anything to use skills. Then I saw the protagonist and his clone, and fought a boss More than 30,000 drops of blood can be eliminated, probably 1/3 of them. I feel that spiritual energy is greater than other energies, and the first level can compete with the third level. Maybe I didn't pay attention to the conversion of that data. She said she wanted to be low-key, but in the end she acted in such a high-profile manner that she couldn't hide her identity at all. The two blocking points in front were enough. There was one sister and one clone. It's quite inexplicable that she is still strengthening her sister now.

It's okay, mainly because the author updates too slowly. It is recommended that the author writes 23 hours a day. 10 Minutes for breakfast, 10 minutes for lunch, 10 minutes for dinner, and 30 minutes for sleep is enough. [You taste carefully]

It feels like I want everything, but in the end I feel unhappy in every aspect. Let's talk about the emotional drama first. To be honest, male videos are a minefield in this regard, and it's difficult to describe them well. As a result, the male protagonist just sticks to his feelings at the beginning. Although it is later changed to autism and the younger sister is like this, the change is really abrupt, especially after the male protagonist gives her excellent weapons. The younger sister's attitude suddenly changes, and the male protagonist can even laugh involuntarily. To be honest, I normally feel that the other person is very philistine. . How can I laugh? Also, my sister's attitude changed after watching a scene of the brother and sister interacting. It was really embarrassing. Or maybe we can create a primer, that's the only way to understand it. When I looked at the data settings earlier, I felt that the author was very thoughtful and wanted to unify the various force values ​​​​of Infinite Flow. The more complex the problem, the more difficult it is to unify, and the expansion of basic values ​​in the later period will make people less concerned. After all, who can remember the basic attributes of thousands or tens of thousands? Even when the actual game attack value expands, it will be compressed. In Samsara Paradise, don't we just use real attributes to transform in the later stage, so that people have a more intuitive impression of the force value. After all, we are not playing a game. Who needs to calculate the skill proficiency and the damage increased by various passives, especially the male protagonist of this novel has so many skills and passive settings. The other thing is that it is more fun. I personally feel that the flow is infinite. One is the story background of each world with descriptions and task processes. The other is that every time you come out, you can get items through changes. As a result, you have set up an experience that is not used for upgrading, but used for lottery draws. . . You already have a box for lottery. This is not repeated. It makes people feel that experience is really not worth much. If you want the male protagonist to level up through practice, you can set up an experience exchange for points to enter a specific place to speed up training, etc. At least it will make people feel motivated to become stronger, otherwise it will make people feel that entering the dungeon is just for gold coins. There is also the fact that the male protagonist really has no characteristics, or attractions. He seems to be inexplicably good to his sister, and then in the dungeon he behaves like the calm and cold-blooded Bai Ye in Samsara Paradise. This problem is very fragmented. The other is the description of the heroine's appearance. . . I can only say that the author has a rich vocabulary, but I really don't feel anything. After all, I'm not here to listen to romance novels. Therefore, I don't understand the positioning of this novel, and it doesn't focus on it.

The plot of the dungeon is very well written, but it's a pity that I'm impatient. I probably want to do what other authors do and let the protagonist quickly level up in the later stage, and then rush to finish the map and finish the novel [Working on the draft][Working on the project]

Oh my gosh, although there were indeed very few comments when I was watching it, the number of reminders when I finished watching it really scared me. There were so few people! A unique advantage of this book is the super huge world view, which is grand but not bloated. As the protagonist slowly opens the curtain of the world, the seemingly separate but interconnected quasi-multiverse setting, the classic setting of the game, is actually very interesting because of the author's deep depiction of the real world and the changing power system of multiple replica worlds. Especially in the later period, the interactions and battles between characters with different power systems are just addictive. In addition, the author is extremely serious about this book. From the author's statement, we can understand that this book is just a "practice" but the writing is already quite good. However, the author is still reflecting on his own shortcomings in this book. The author should have read the readers' comments and absorbed various suggestions. You can even post the character settings in the comment area for the author to write into the article as a supporting role. In addition, the author updates very quickly. Sometimes he will take the initiative to add another chapter when he feels that he is tired. This kind of author is quite rare compared to those who have AI writing. As for other basic evaluations, I won't go into details. In short, it can be said to be the best work in Tomato.

It's a pity that the actual plot is quite good, but first of all, a clone in most novels is a poison point. Except for temporary clones in battle, permanent clones are generally poison points. Secondly, what about alchemy and memory sacrifice? I have already opened up my understanding and lost it. That thing should be a tool for pig's feet, so I turned the other way. The short scripts of Infinite Flow are really well written, and the multi-female storyline of Infinite Flow is quite easy to write. The hero saves the beauty in a routine, but the clones are too vicious.

It's a good unlimited-stream dungeon novel, but the plot connection and characterization could be better. It's rare to find a novel that is written steadily these days. I give it five stars for encouragement and support, and I wish the author will continue to improve his level.

It's very well written. The characters are very delicately drawn. Although most of the copies are based on references, they reflect personal style. But the most praiseworthy thing is the real-person acting. The voice of the cute mechanical girl is really clean. The words "Wang Wang Captain" make my ears numb.

Encouragement, come on, the monster panel does not need to be so comprehensive, the equipment does not need to be too many and easy to forget, and there are not so many things that can be grown in the later stage, which is difficult to grasp. Just upgrading resources will easily span too much, so the system of cultivating immortals can be simplified. Daily life, fighting, and plot are what I mainly watch. These three aspects can be gradually improved.

Not bad, my lovely sister, thumbs up, five-star praise [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The author, I have updated more than 100 times. This book is very interesting. However, I saw that you, the author, wrote about the relationship between brother and sister. I hope the author will write it well and not write too much and it will be banned from the shelves. Also, your novel has very rigorous data, worldview, etc. This is very good. I hope the author can write it well and not end up unfinished.

This book is all about the infinite flow of multi-dimensional world views, and each world is an independent world view. Lost in the Night looks like a dark medieval western fantasy world. As for "Strange Stories", it looks a bit like Paranormal Resurrection. The introduction also mentions the Mountains of Madness, so it seems that there should be a Cthulhu world view.

The writing is good. Come on, the author, and try to update dozens of chapters a day. I feel that the pace is a bit slow. If each copy is equivalent to opening a parallel world, there will be too many pitfalls. [Eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The sea! You are all water

It seems to be almost non-toxic so far, so you can watch it with confidence emm, hard to say

Come on, come on, come on In fact, it's pretty good, the setting is good, but many people consider the setting to be poisonous, and the writing is pretty good, but it's gone, the comment section is too scary

I found this book after a long search for books, and it's very interesting!

Personal preference, don't comment if you don't like it [eating melon]

If you fight a clone that has no self-awareness and can only exist for a few seconds, those are fine. Even if you are a cultivator, as long as you have no self-awareness, it will be fine. But the three clones of yours all have different personalities. Not to mention, except for the clones, everything else is fine.

It feels pretty good and looks good to me. However, there is currently a lot of content in the dungeon and very little in the daily life, so it feels very tense. There is no feeling of relaxation. Also, I'd like to ask if it's one girl or multiple girls?

The author's information is super well organized, and the volume is large [laughs][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

It's okay. The narrative method of the copy in the form of a diary is quite good.

The male and female protagonists are so cute, I still like this feeling

Personally I think it's pretty good, but this copy of Mountains of Madness is a bit long, but this book is still good.

It's not very exciting, but I personally like slow-burning and developing types. Watching my sister slowly getting stronger, I'll read on.

Well worth reading, a typical data flow novel! It's worth mentioning that the word count is a bit short, but it's still readable and I recommend it with five stars.

Not bad, the plot is smooth and the values ​​are not explosive.

It's very beautiful. I like this kind of unlimited streaming. Come on.

Very creatively written. There is just one thing, is the true spirit interesting? If the true spirit is conscious, what is the difference between it and the soul?

Man, is it appropriate for you to write 150 pictures for a competition?